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Posted on: 2012-12-26 16:00:00

Loser needs to fill the box. Stay way from a repetitive rhyme scheme. Up concepts, multies, and structure. Return fairs Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-26 17:45:39

Thanks for the honesty, bro. I appriciate the advice. I'll return fairs. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-26 17:50:12

Obvious murk for UhMazing, all METHODS fucked this kid up, fair vote *cough* Murked *cough* *cough* Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-26 18:05:56

One was a lil weak..needs work..fv is in vb Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-27 02:38:54

fv Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-27 13:10:46

Like Tribble says, a clear murk BUT JonnyJigsaw, from one JJ to another, it's good to see you attempting to bring on complex concept. Refreshing. Return fairs. Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-27 18:17:31

Fair in... always Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-27 21:42:52

Jonny: First off, your multies were mad repetitive. You rhymed up with up 4 times. All of your lines that are suppose to be punches are extremely vague & not direct. It's like you're setting up a punch but not throwing it like it should be: You're like a wall that needs to be shimmed up how ____. You know? You aren't actually throwing a punch. Uh: You had concepts & tried to setup your punches but they weren't hitting very hard. It's mostly cuz they are vague or not very direct. However, you actually did have a battle verse. Work on clarity & how direct your punches are. Overall, one actually dissed their opponent. Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 00:19:50

overall good battle. Jonny Jigsaw: da only thing dat i can really say is dat its too simplistic. da punchez didnt hit dat well,kinda weak,no offense. and da multiz were not really present in ur verse. and da structure is definitely amateur. u need to fill in da gaps and replace dem wit multiple rhyme schemes and sum devistating punchez. ur verse sounded like u were talkin to him instead of bombin. da wordplay was simplistic as well. not to offend u bro since u got alot to learn how we do thingz around here. ur off to a good start,but jux follow wut im tellin u and ur guaranteed to go further. overall good verse. UhMAZING: ur rhymez were good and ur multiz hit pretty well. overall flow wuzz ok and ur punchez hit,but were slackin a lil cuz u need to be more direct wit em. tell him wut u gonna do,not us. but i did like da endin nameplay,very nice finisher. other den dat,overall good battle. Fair Vote is in fellaz Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 02:19:06

I know this verse was weak, I was bored but I'm steppin' it up, check out the other battle between UhMAZING and I! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 02:28:09

Both you guys need to read some of the great battles on this site - found in the forum section -, go away for a little, study them, come back and elevate forreal. 1-1 in all categories. This isn't a hate vote; anyone will tell you I'm the fairest dude on this site, but y'all seriously need to step up and the starting point is checking out the greatest battles we've had/watching some SMACK URL, KOTD or Don't Flop on YouTube. Learn the basics dudes seriously. You're monthly ranking means diddly shit if you're not actually any good and sniping 1000 battles to climb. Fair is cast. PYROshit Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 11:43:10

Jonny: There were no actual punchlines in your verse and just a bunch of non sense tossed together. You also lacked multis in pretty well every way its 2012 no one wants to hear single syllable rhymes. You do at least have some concepts you just need to work on setting up a punch with the concepts.Work on all of the above and keep elevating Uh: The concepts were ok and you at least threw some jabs at your opponent. Lacked real hard hitting punches though as well as solid multis to make the punch stronger. Refer back to what I said about single syllable rhymes. Fairs in gents Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 11:43:34

wow. Both need a LOT of work. Johnny you need to learn what a punch is. Look at some of the better cats battle's on this site to help you with that. I suggest click Askari < that mod right there and Read His battles. I see you wanting to bring concepts in, so I can see you doing better when you learn what your doing. John your verse was a complete mess structure wise you had nothing cohesive going at all. You attempted jabs, nothing hit. usually '' on this site are to highlight concepts not multies. Maybe that will help you. my winner did actually attack the opponent more here in the end. fairs in. Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:07:01

This battle is rubbish! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:18:41

Jonny, don't take it like that...they're saying this shit to help us...I know my verse was weak too, but I read yours and knew i didn't have to come very hard with it. Just take their advice and you'll see what they're talking about. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 14:12:23

ez win Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 14:41:22

Yeah, I have taken their/your words into consideration and I believe I create way better verses already. I totally effed this one up though and I really think it is garbage. To be learned from yes, but I choose to disregard this battle. I was weak as hell! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:28:25

Right on for staying positive though, my friend. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:29:32

Fairs dropped, one needs to make better use of the box he was givin, the other came proper but was lacking on set ups. there were a few decent punches in there and an overall better verse. fairs dropped. (minus a point for not filling the box) Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:47:39

fv Voted: Jonny Jigsaw / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-29 13:10:26