FOR UHMAZIN ONLY.... THANKS Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 12:14:32

this is the best written I've seen here yet Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-23 12:17:34

read this three times so far the flow is too nice lol and the conscious thought behind it is perfect Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-23 12:20:27

thanks kasper, i appreciate that a lot Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 12:22:07

Ouuuh! Man you killed it! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 12:39:33

YEP UHMAZIN IS A FAG, CHANGING NAMES EVERY 2 SECONDS, ALL HE DOES IS CHOKE HAHA ALL MOUTH NO ACTION Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 14:28:13

I KNEW HE'D CHOKE ANYWAYS... LMFAO PROBABLY TAKE 10 WEEKS TO REPLY AND IT WAS HIM WHO CALLED OUT ME! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 14:39:01

CHOKING LIKE B RABBIT OR CANNIBUS LMFAOOOO PUSSY Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 14:50:39

so, the only reason people are "on ya shit" is cuz you a bitch...if they saw your face, they'd be glad you rap behind a screen..and IllScripts, don't get it twisted lil homie..you told me to send you 8, I sent 32..then you blocc'd me then sent your verse but the thing is..YOUR A FUCCIN' idiot and no one could vote it cuz of your dumb ass...I don't play those games kids. and Lady V, How am I name changing every 2 minutes? this has stayed my name. ;) Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 15:01:46

also like how Ill said "probably" enough...which leaves doubt in his mind that you ever have a chance of beating me. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 15:02:35

I'll grab this, just gimme a min. and I expect all the hate voters, to stay the fucc off this battle...Fair votes only here, so Lady V can feel the effect of another L. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 15:03:35

Done! now quit ya bitchin'. 1 question, WHAT THE FUCC IS A SNAKE TO A SNIPER WITH ANTI VENOM RUNNIN' IN HIM. iLL SCRiPTURES all motha fuccin' day! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 15:17:42

P.S. FILL YA FUCCIN' BOX UP! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 15:18:48

This shit was really so so so hard for me because it was too completely different approaches taken one was a lot more personal and the other so very technical but you can not sleep on that flow it was the build to punchline ratio that sent it over the edge for me on this one. Please vote Fair. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-23 16:53:58

I'm just old fashion where a good flow and delivery take the cake, the whole glory hole, maury show reference was the best you had going for ya but wasn't enough to over shadow the precise style. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 11:52:23

One of the best battles I've seen in a while - both really good read. I went for one because of technical superiority but when the other can mix the great flow and hard punch with some serious technicality, that one will be an absolute beast. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 12:50:44

ait i thought ones setups were a lil better here.... one edged with a few more personals... was a close battle tho... just know its 100. fv this was close but i thought one BARELY EDGED BY ONE LINE. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 14:47:57

LC! you know what it is! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 15:01:29

uhmazin don't message me complaining, face it your entire verse was forced multies with no personals, cept the line I mentioned and all filler. you couldn't stall one if you were sylvester? ok, so the line makes sense but how is it a hard hitting line???? then you start rhyming useless shit talking about how you're rich and then to priceline it, ok cool but no substance compared to an opening line of "Why You Delayin Delivery Like CHRISTMAS POSTAGE, Called Me Out To Battle, Still Ain't POST SHIT!, What's Wrong Dude, You Need SIX WEEKS NOTICE?- Defeatin V, Stop JOKIN, But He'd Love To No LIE- Coz Everytime Dude Lose He Just SCREAMS AND CRIES, Leavin Abuse On Profiles LIKE.. 'WHY YOU ONLY VOTE ME 5!!" which I have no clue if it's true or not, but def I believe it's true specially after you message me right after saying I don't know how to vote. hard hitting unforced opener, and to the close with (what seemed like) personals, your verse was just filler and forced flow... :/ Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 15:35:38

Holy shit LadyV........MOTHERF UCKER WENT HARD. Ahhhhhh did LCEE PROUD. Damn.......ain't even read the other verse. Gimme a sec. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 15:58:52

Uhmazing went pretty hard as well but you relied on imagery too much in the middle. I kinda didn't understand your drop as a punch. At face value it was pretty simplistic to me but that's just me maybe I'm missing something. Goodshit from both sides. LC ALL DAY Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 16:01:21

Don't be sleepin' on me now Fayz....Think I would come with some weak shit against that? lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 16:02:05

Imagery?...that was the point dude, lol...to paint a picture of everything I'm saying in your MIND!... so you can invision what I'm saying more than just reading it. :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 16:04:05

There's many punch lines in there...The first line is one, the rabbit tortis bit is a punch, the glory holes/maury show..the bomb stuff, the paint shop pro punch, and lastely the handing out limbs punch...they're all there... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 16:26:09

Aiight peeps. One was way better with structure and flow here. Both were decent with multies. my winner was also better with punches. the flow and structure went a long way to making the punch hit harder. Fairs in. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 16:32:13

nice from both no h8 Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 17:51:59

zammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmm ladyv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvv Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 20:47:07

Multis and punches were crazy, wordplay from uhmazing, lady with unstoppable punches and proof, fair vote Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 22:38:31

Holy shit, both went in hard. Lady's flow and punchlines were golden, uhmazin' with wordplay and vocab. Damn, amazing battle. Fairs in. Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-24 22:54:26

Lady spittin that venom,,get back on audio woman yu sick,,,mazing good response but no where near as tactical,,gb fv 100% Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-25 10:00:00

I got your punches. But That opener I get the stall-one thing BUT jasper has a point. It wasn't hard hitting. You want to make sure that all parts of the line apply to the punch. By saying Sylvester you should've incorporated another punch that could've used his name. But by simply puttin that name in there not only is it not as effective but it detracts from it. As far as imagery. Imagery is fine BUT HOWEVER (very big but however) imagery it really only truly effective (in my eyes) if backed up with a decent punch (harder hitting the punch the more effective) or using the imagery to accentuate the punch. Mainly sayin that they work hand and hand. If I ever use imagery I'd only use it for 1 bar at most. But you started like on the 4 or 5th line and didn't end till quite a bit later. You are missing a lot of punches in that imagery. Once I hop on a comp Ill do a more legitimate and intricate breakdown but these are my thoughts for now. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-25 10:45:02

Doesn't matter what other people think, I know what I wrote..is technical as fucc...on the other side of this battle, not so much...and with just a basic vocab...If having simple punches and simple words is going to win battles, then I might as well stop..cuz I'm technical when it comes to this shit. and the Changing profiles and deleting accounts, isn't true..the death threat things about friends, isn't true...but like I said, if having a simple verse with no real stable facts, then she wins..fucc it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-25 15:36:06

I gotta say, ive been following ladyvenom's shit, and shes one badass bitch with some tallent!! Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-25 16:12:57

If you feel you're being cheated post on the FVC forums. Idk the thing that I felt in her verse was character. Her flow jumped of the page without forcing certain stuff (not saying you forced anything) but her verse definitely spoke to me. UhMazing your a great rapper. Don't let one battle bring you down man. There are a lot of factors that play into the loss or win of a battle. Just work on making harder hitting punches and still I think a big part of people sleeping on you is your strcture Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-25 18:06:57

I can see what you mean by simplistic though. She does have a few monosyllabic a and repetitive rhyme scheme (which is acceptable sometimes for emphasis, but usually only in audio) but she also had some good hits on there. She reminds me of At's writing style. Bringing back the LB "golden era" Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-25 18:10:34

gb fv no hate one came harder for me Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-25 20:00:21

@ uhmazin On here: Lyricidal was my name bacc in the day. In real life: Lyrikal Shoxxx,Kon Fuzion,Suspekt,U.G., and Recently UhMAZING. To be honest that is more of What I Am than Who I Am. GET AT ME! That's what's wrote on your profile, that's where the changing names lines come from, and you're always giving dudes in my crew shit......that's where the other line come from. Also the bit about you crying like a bitch, your doing it again now and that proves it, everytime someone votes against you what do u do? Hit up there profile complaining, like when i voted you a six and you said i voted you four! You can't take losing because u have a big ego dude, you think that no-one stands a chance against you, just like u thought I didn't. Your going on about me using small words or what ever, but I used personals and that's what a battled about, u just spat random shit it was more like a cypher at times. I don't care if I win or lose, that's just how it goes but don't be bitching saying I didn't deserve to win, the fair votes are in and u can't hide from it, maybe if u stopped being such an arrogant prick people would take u serious. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-26 08:47:03

illest Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-26 12:19:22

Fairs in,, Voted: Venomoussss / UhMAZING
Posted on: 2012-12-26 13:50:20