This was meant for ladyvenom, but I guess now it's Open, anyone can step up against it. Expo - the hardpunch are extended play on SLAUGHTERHOUSE 5 by Kurt Vonnegut. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-22 21:28:33

Fv easy to see the winner. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-22 22:06:11

Basic tried putting multis but over all the rhyme scheme was too simple. Jamjar was excellent with multis. Overall this was a mismatch. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-22 23:14:46

jam jar your rhyme scheme was good, and your multis were strong. finished with good flow too. basic idk dude... some good rhyme schemes. your concepts were a bit easy for me. plus for the first two lines you kinda just said what jam said in a diff way. anyway one took it for me based on these couple things. fairs in Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-23 03:38:25

clear winner, fv no h8 no expo really needed here. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-23 08:50:18

fv vb Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-24 04:11:49

Pretty one sided. Ones sounded like a cypher towards the end. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-24 08:33:44

Jam took this one with better everything. I get the SlaughterHouse 5 bit too, it's a very good book. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-24 12:02:08

Obvious winner here. Jam, your rhyme scheme is so interesting. Like, I try to view styles to see if I could mimic them, maybe I'd fall into it and like certain things better, but I simply don't like that. Like where it goes (a) (b) // (a) (b) Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-24 14:14:31

did anyone else relize basic trainings first 2 lines were the EXACT same end ryhmes as Jams? just putting that out there. anyways. Jam as always you come to impress, very nice multi's, you broke a few, but over all good verse, loved the slaughter house set up and punch. BT you honestly need to work on everything, your trying though, which is all thats required. fairs in Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-24 15:16:11

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Posted on: 2012-12-24 17:48:02

again definitely onesided. JamJar: i thought your rhymes and overall cadence was nice,da punchez hit like dey were supposed to. da multiz were on point as well. but i gotta say that the flow was a lil iffy for me except the end flow was good,but overall good entry and very descriptive if i may add haha. basic training: no offense,but ur name suits u pretty good(j/k) haha naw but ur multiz were impressive but the punchez werent wowing me too much. how da verse was sculpted was not dat good either. u gotta put more in ur rhymez,too many spaces in dis one. if u use wutever space u got to hit him wit punchez it woulda turned out better, but since it was poorly sculpted,i had to go da other way on dis one.OVERALL GOOD BATTLE FELLAZ...FAIR VOTE IS IN. Voted: Jam Jar / basic training
Posted on: 2012-12-25 16:40:14