iLL SCRiPTURES all motha fuccin' day long! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:22:03

You won't be considered heavyweight by these retards if you don't fix up that structure. Don't do ''all-this-stupid-sh it'' randomly and CAPP YOUR MULTIES. and ONLY put "quotation marks" around shit that pertains to the punchline. No hate from me, just trying to help you sense your crew isn't. Holla @ me fam. You can do way better than this. We should batle or somethng while you're at it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:35:51

lmao. Everyone has their own style. that's my style.. if you can't get that and understand where every multi and every punch is, there's something wrong with you. and why should my crew help me? I'm 1 of the leaders, lol. the - shit - in between words, is to represent a pause. It has structure and it's structure is correct for the way that's it written. if you wanna battle send me bars. this shit?, this is nothing. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:39:17

real talk too, if you gotta critique it like that?...why not just take it and show me "what's up?" Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:40:31

and if I capped my multi's the whole damn thing would pretty much be capped, everything that is quoted fits with the previous or following quote, some even alternating... There's triplets + in there. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:42:20

1.) Style is fine, structure is non-negotiable if you want to be successful here. 2.) I assure you there's nothing wrong with me, writing multies/punches is my biggest hobby, and I see very little here. 3.) I'm not rushing to grab an open, I like to take my time and write my best material. 4.) If you honestly think you have that many multies, then you don't know what multies are and chances are you force them all, hence why you refuse to capp your multies. It's assholes like you that can't accept a friendship, a friendly person trying to kindly give you a lesson and teach you to get better. You push me away, write me off like I'm speaking nonsense, then you keep catching L's like paris hilton catches diseases. Lol I don't get it, I really don't.... Take my advice, and if not, catch another L and STFU. Inbox is open, if not, STFU. Love you. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 14:58:03

WTF?! you is on some cracc with that shit.. lol. ok Eminem, so writing punchlines and multi's is your biggest hobby..I'm sure it's everyone here's too! and if you can't see all the multi's then there's something wrong with you. why would I want your help? did I come to you sayin' "mayne, I got 11 wins and 6 loses and 1 is a glitch..so technically it's 5(getting fixed) and look who I went up against. Honestly, you aint taking this cuz you don't have the skill required to take this W from me. and you telling me to STFU??..when you the one on this battle rambling on about a perfect drop..you dumb, get the fucc off my shit before you scare people away faggot. you wanna talk, send me bars and talk in those all you want. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 15:05:58

and BTW, you really on some fag shit with that "Love You" shit. fuccin' dicc in ya booty ass popcorn rapper. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 15:07:04

bout time someone stopped talking and took it. GL. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 16:12:07

Talk is cheap. GL for you too,great battle! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 16:23:07

Both were lacking in certain categories BUT one definitely brought it home. King, your shit was too cypherish. You had little to no punches or wordplay. Step it up. Good battle return fairs. Send complaints in 8 Voted: UhMAZING / Unknown- The King
Posted on: 2012-12-21 17:23:11

ILL SCRIPTURES ALL DAY EVERY DAY Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 18:18:09

fv Voted: UhMAZING / Unknown- The King
Posted on: 2012-12-21 18:38:41

UhMAZING got em wit punches nd multis gb Voted: UhMAZING / Unknown- The King
Posted on: 2012-12-22 15:51:06