claws, paws, disability, pair of lies, handicapped, wheelchair'ish, nazi Posted on: 2012-11-27 20:37:41

@Hemidemisemiquaver/ The Generalization/ Whatever your next name is... (apparent giveaway) In wedding announcements, the parents (of the bride) give their daughter to the groom. A parent giveaway. Posted on: 2012-11-30 12:36:27

WOW!! yo this this battle was flamez hands down. wordplay an punch connection was incredible on both sides..jimmy dean: the punch an wordplay usage was fuckn ill, only thing for me was the set ups on SOME of the punches though, couldve been cleaned up a bit but it still came to be a dime drop // Phroxen: bruh your shit went in as well. wordplay an everything..some of your punches were a bit played but i seen a few in there that did massive damage..great battle to both..only way i could decide my winner was one punch that did the most damage in my eyez..the fair is tossed, vbf fellaz Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-27 21:04:30

I co-sign ADvO. sick ass battle. could go either way IMO Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-27 21:13:52

Murder 1. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-11-27 21:19:08

Jimmy i wasnt feelin ur verse at all no offense but that verse u dropped against me was dope but this was definately lacking phrox i liked that disability line paralyze shit that was fire overall my winner came better with better worded bara n fresher concepts n punches fairs in whyte out Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-28 08:15:19

pretty decent battle but i felt one had the more solid verse. the loser started off with mis matched multis - not a great start - and 2bh, wasnt a great line. also had wording issues, 'ya punches are shot' - what does that even mean, are you saying hes shooting punches? next line, scheme was off again, CHERISH"-ABOUT-IT and MARRIAGE-ANNOUNCEMEN TS? that was terrible. next line APPAREL-&-OUTFITS - CLERICS-IN-AUSCHWITZ !? again, off with the scheme. how does apparel and clerics sound anythin like eachother? overall, touchin on some ok concepts but wording wasnt great, and real issues with multis and schemes. the winner was a lot better at sticking to the multi counts, set ups could use some work, but i think it was enough to take this Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-11-29 10:25:37

^^^^ confirmed hate vote. :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-11-29 13:42:47

Paths vote in Jimmys favour deleted. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-11-29 15:21:49

jimmy- some decent multi usage.. flow was a bit choppy tho. concept wise not bad. mario cart buildup was decent but end result was a letdown. rest were more jabs.. phrox-i seen better from you.. your flow and multi scheme usage is very consistent and well laid out.. but alot of your wordplay is pretty basic/played here.. bare/bear notsee/nazi.. etc.. id like to see you step away from this comfort zone and get a bit more original wit wordflips pun. Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-30 11:22:59

winner here was more consistently balanced in all elements .. there was no clear standout punches from either of them imo.. Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-30 11:25:02

advice to jimmy.. try to stay away from some of that forced wordplay.. yoplait and yo flame isnt even close.. spit it ina live battle and peeps gon be huh? and the word 'plug'seems like a filler to finish the scheme.. keep the multis sounding like natural speech.. this is where phroxen excells in Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-30 11:30:40

One was more consistent with the flow and delivered the more complex punches as the other dropped decent but it just wasn't enough to take this battle due to forced wordplay and elementary schemes. Both could use some improvement but one shined here. No hate. Fair is tossed... Oh, and I didn't get the A parent/marriage announcement line. When two people get married it doesn't automatically make them parents. Lol. They need to have children first. Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-30 11:42:10

I got one edging this.. My choice was a little more consistent even though his concepts were played and a few punches aint hit hard, he still maintained a good flow and had some good multies where as his opponent had a wordplay line that didnt really sound like wordplay and he had the right ideas with some lines but failed to execute them strongly... Voted: Phroxen /
Posted on: 2012-11-30 15:40:17