ok Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / rentonsickboy
Posted on: 2012-10-07 07:31:11

renton: ya first setup, hence the: falling a couple floors beneath you line, was creative but the only rhymes I see that should be capitalized is BENEATH YOU and DEFEATS YOU. The rest is filler. You threw two punches in ya next scheme which is a huge plus so I can't say much there. I liked the line. I like the rhyme scheme in the next line...would've been better if you had thrown a punch or set up that end rhyme with a nice concept--possibly, something concerning boxing, ufc, or fighting in general. Forced doesn't rhyme with HAUNT or TAUNT and the line was pretty weak. I would have thrown this one out if I were you. GONE SHUNTED doesn't rhyme with UNWANTED so that took away some points from ya closer which wasn't too strong of a bar either. MC: like the flow alot. Work on capping ya multis though because that's what people are used to on this site. Ya kept the flow solid throughout the whole verse but JUST flowing doesn't win battles here. I like the story you had going for yourself too, it was pretty entertaining but I didn't see many punches from you, nor did I see any wordplay. You had a nice scheme though. This battle was close but I'm going to judge this based off of consistency. I felt this person was more consistent, so my vote goes to this emcee... Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / rentonsickboy
Posted on: 2012-10-08 06:12:48

GB Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / rentonsickboy
Posted on: 2012-10-08 15:36:47

One was slightly comical, actually quite well put together, but lacked in good material. The other had the more generic LB style but was a bit forced, but more of a range. Actually a very very close battle. Fair vote is in. Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / rentonsickboy
Posted on: 2012-10-09 15:50:36