Fucked up the last line.. lol but nigga u used the same verse vs whyz Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 02:38:07

It said that the battle was already taken so i started a new one. and it did it twice Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 02:42:28

word.. happen to me before too lol.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 02:46:40

okiee shit.. Winner takes it with better lines. loser - your rhyme scheme was sumwhat common, I think i heard it sumwhere else too. Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-02 03:06:58

i was feelin serious more Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-02 04:22:59

. Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-02 08:16:50

One word etcetera Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-02 08:49:04

overtime bra! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 10:00:04

Biz: Some lines were played: The Diddy reference and change of plans lines. There also was a rhyme I didn't get which was ya closer--the wiz khalifa line. Idk maybe it's just me. Ya verse flowed pretty swell though and ya delivery was on point, I suggest you work on ya metaphors and punches a little more. I understand this was a quick snipe but yea...I just seen ya comment about the whyz line but I still stick to my word. Etc: You had some nice concepts and ya rhymes were decent but there was some filler lines in places and there were capitalized words which did not rhyme. Practice capitalizing rhymes only and not just random words for effect. And the Chow mein is so over used and never compliment your opponent no matter what. My winner had the smoother flow and better delivery imo. Good battle from both though. Fair vote is in. Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-03 02:59:14

pretty close. fair is in. Voted: Etcetera / Serious Biz
Posted on: 2012-10-03 23:48:05