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Posted on: 2012-09-28 14:43:49

holy shit......phe. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-29 13:59:18

BODIED. AC'S WE IN THIS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-01 00:24:40

ACish get em. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-01 00:25:12

This is nice battle. I'm going to come back to this later with another read. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-26 07:56:18

i think one dominated in all areas here, winner had 1 or 2 bits that were forced to fit the multi, but overall it was pretty consistent. i didnt see anythin that really impressed me from the loser. neither side really had a strong punch ones jabs was more frequent and harder than the others Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-26 09:29:09

Phenomonon, you had some decent concepts and punches, but they often needed better set-ups. I felt your verse was very clean, nice multies, no wording issues, and you were very consistent with the way you delivered the punches. But I would have liked to have seen you maintain some concepts longer with more relevant set-ups. I felt things would have hit harder. Illuminate, you had some really good concepts that I felt could have been played better somehow like the fetus/new birth/let it slide concept. I felt you often had better instances of wordplay as well and were a little bit more complex in that regards. Overall, this boiled down to a slightly cleaner verse and a slightly more complex one. I could go into more details, but I don't want to nitpick so you can both hit me up. But I got one edging this one. Fair is tossed. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-26 13:59:36

ok concepts and good execution vs ok concepts and some wording issues. the winner was more thought out in their approach and the challenger fell short with the impactful content. fairs. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-26 15:38:47

Cheesy Crackers Being Salty Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-27 20:22:21

Phenomonon, Not impressed by you here, you can do better.The concepts you used are not fresh so Most of your punches here were jabs at most. Although I did like the action figure punch but felt the setup should have been better. I Didn't have an issue flow or multie wise, but when I see words like 'ock, POOP POKER' it doesn't help your wording to me. Illuminate, Not a good verse, you made the opponent look at a different level to you flow & multie wise. I like how you tried to incorporate some new wordplays but they should have been executed way better. You started off pretty bad but half way through you picked up with some ok lines. Voted Fair. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-28 08:05:05

more work but its all good Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-28 09:01:23

Word play won me over. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-28 14:06:31

the second verse was more consistent Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2012-10-28 21:25:59