yeah do that thing Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-08 22:25:42

Aight, aight, I saw what you did there Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-09 07:31:55

wow, both of you need alot of work this pertains to both of you, work on structure, right now ya basically throwin random short sentences and then really basic endrhymes.. you need to up complexity, start small, 3 syllable multis, and maintain consistency.. as far as structure goes, go back to basic rhyme couplets..ex. You r STUMPED like an AMPUTEE, you think you 'run' this game i DISAGREE, and ill destroy you with anything LYRICALLY, ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ this looks like three different short sentences, ideas.. makes it read choppy and awkward.. try to create one cohesive idea : how you gon comPARE WIT FABLES , when you techs/text shoot AIR AS PAYLOADS, talkin bout guns when you more 'armless' than CHAIRS AND TABLES/think.. th at right there is a typical couplet, wit 4 syllable rhyme schemes... then you got the 'armless' which is the concept, and chairs and tables is the flip, or metaphor, simile etc.. anyway, my winner here was a tad bit cleaner read, disses were slightly stronger..fairs in Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-10 00:46:12

damn , thought i was gettin better , will take your cooments on board but thought i had some nice links lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-10 12:22:39

gb Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-10 16:54:30

Not a bad battle at all but both needs a hella lota work here in all Catagories Fairs in vote back Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-11 09:37:15

Pretty close Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-11 19:05:44

fv Voted: Easy-T / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2012-09-11 20:17:52

i dont understand how i lost ....i had 4 votes and 41 total point , and he had 3 votes and 35 points , how come i lose ???? Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-12 14:50:12