Expo: LL Cool J - Phenomenon Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-31 04:57:51

good battle fam, this isn't over lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-31 15:53:32

Go ahead and send whenever or I'll send next time but it wont be for a week or 2 cuz I been slow with writing but if anyone sends to me i somehow force myself to write... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-31 22:53:04

Nice spar fellas, one was a bit more creative and gets the vote from me. Voted: Legion Flow / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-09-01 04:49:29

Legion Flow---Nice touch with the internal rhymes in the beginning. You should only use slashes (/) to mark the end of your lines though. Its nice to see you throwing metaphors in there, but I felt they could have hit harder and been more creative. I think you should try to incorporate harder-hitting metaphors and better set-ups. Penomonon- --Your first two lines were relevant, but I didn't feel the overall metaphor/punch hit hard. You did show a better use of multies and flow right away which you maintained throughout the verse. In the next bar, i think you tried to link some of the concepts with the previous bar, but some of the things you mentioned seemed slightly irrelevant and forced. I liked the baby-back ribs line. The Legion with a bad rating line also had a sting and was probably your biggest hit. Overall--- I think one was simply more polished and produce the more entertaining verse. He did better at linking concepts and pretty much everything else. Nice battle fellas. Voted: Legion Flow / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-09-01 12:49:30

fv It was very close but one had better punches. Voted: Legion Flow / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-09-01 20:14:41

One edged this. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Legion Flow / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-09-10 05:18:42