This was supposed to be in reply to HeteroGenius, but someone got in on that battle first. So I guess this one is for anybody, but preferably HeteroGenius will reply, since it's where this all was going. No matter who replies, though, it's all good. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:17:53

I had prepared my verse for hetro too.. bt a lot of people must have been on it. ah well ill drop em here... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:30:45

I hope the nothing to see here part was a play on us both trying to rhyme against that punk like you said. Otherwise, we need to go. So if you have more to say, go for it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:45:59

i jus replaced his name wit yours Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:51:42

But dont worry. i may be sending 8 your way! soon. Gotta sleep tho for now. work in the am Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:52:18

I'll be looking forward to that 8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:25:43

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Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:33:22

tuff to vote but it was a good battle between the two. Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:34:13

a crew should pick me up because I'm not trying to even start competing until it is worthwhile, I'm chatting and replying to emails while I'm text battling. Until I'm really representing something, it's just a silly thing to me, easy to do while not thinking about it. It I'm repping something, it's on Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-24 00:03:28

Both should work on rhyme schemes & set ups. More advanced schemes will put more impact into your bars. Work on delivery & wording, that will also help. One had some played lines but overall had a stronger verse. Slightly better rhyme scheme & seemed to have a better idea of what to do. There's potential here, keep at it. Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-24 03:11:07

iiiiiiiiight, One really jus talkin shiii to his opponent, while tha other had a mirage of OLD ASS PUNCHES w/ even OLDER CONCEPTS linkin them. ion kno tho, I feel this battle came down to who brought a more intense battle feel to tha box tho. Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-24 06:26:49

nice Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-26 09:05:11

Baking innards? I'm starting to think mommy didn't serve this guy decent dinners. I'll take it this is where your first bar finished as the rhyme scheme ends here. You have one word rhymes and still at that the rhymes are forces. You also failed to deliver a punchline 1/10 So his other fetish is shaving heads? Might be fitting, at least given the picture he's profiling. Again no multis, Doesn't even rhyme. Attempted a personal but you really need a better style/structure 2/10 I guess he's relying on shock fetish to do the trick, but in the rhyming game, nobody will be intimidated by that kind of bullshit. Rubbish bro I'm being honest, You need to ask a couple vets to help teach you to understand battle rapping more. At the moment you have no knowledge on how to craft a verse. This bar was terrible 1/10 But to play into his hand, I guess it's kind of tough to type pre-writtens while he's wearing mittens fitted from the darkened carcasses of little kittens. This sounded like more of a cypher this doesn't hit hard at all the only thing decent about this is it's imagery but that's not really relevant to a battle. No punchline either here. No punchlines is like going to war without guns bro. 2/10 He'll take that as a compliment, but it might make sense, to drop the pretense and let the rhymes make sense. Wordplay over semantics and shock tricks. You ended this bar without even rhyming. Man Overall your verse is very weak and I struggle to point out a place where I can say ''that impressed me'' I think you need to approach a couple of experiance battlers and ask for some tutoring otherwise you will not make it here. I don't see and structure/style and your verse even fails to rhyme most of the time. Find help or hang up your mic bro. Overall I Give You A 2 For Effort Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-26 21:23:02

Funny....I spits the MOST when I BOAST I write-real -raps AND THE ROASTS //niggas will ‘boxed out’ like we playin bball IN THE POST //, If niggas think it’s a ‘Cruse’, ill get him ‘wet’ like the COAST// If I bring that ‘heater’ to get his ‘bread’ best believe he is TOAST// I'm taking this as one bar as the scheme continued for 4 lines. First of all you are capping words that dont rhyme. Don't cap it unless it rhymes man. That's the noobest mistake you can make. However you attempted punches and that gains my repect. I can see that you have a reasonable idea on how to craft a punch..... Overall 3/10 Its simple Tech-Knowledge-G (technology) when I-PHONE and ‘connect’ wit my source cause We GOT THE MAC//You’ll think my gun got an std the way my gun ‘burning’ niggas and (got the) GOTTA CLAP // Noobish delivery but not a bad attempt at all buddy, Bar of the battle the punch may be a little played but the buildup wasn't bad at all. Your multis were basic but they did match up. 4/10 After the decision of CHOOSIN RACHETS, best believe that OOZIE CLAPPIN//Im BRUSING this MAGGOT. And there will be “Nothing to see here” once I kill this STUPID FAGGOT Brother you ended on a very weak note you didn't deliver an punchline just ended with calling him a name. Not good brother you also broke/forced multis and this made the flow a little choppy. 2/10 Overall you have a better knowledge of battling that your opponent but still need alot of work you need to learn how to execute multis and develop your own style and structure. You must learn that each bar must be consistant otherwise you will not be able to hang with the top tier cats. Overall your verse deserves a 3/10 Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-26 21:23:28

OVERALL, This was tight in one sense but I believe one emcee edged it thanks to one bar. Both you guys however need a lot of work and I can't stress the fact enough that you won't elevate unless you look around for help. Trust me I've been in your position before. Voted: NothingTwoSeaHear / DrFunny
Posted on: 2012-08-26 21:25:17

Thanks for the advice. im always lookin on ways to get better! feel free to check out my other battles and leave some advice! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-26 21:36:44

Thanks for the feedback bro, yeah constructive criticism is always accepted. Funny thing is, we both were originally trying to jump in on a totally different battle, but nontheless, I do understand your criticism, most of which I would say was on point. I have done better, and know there is room to improve in that sense as well. Thanks Irish. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-01 23:59:50