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Posted on: 2012-08-24 22:01:47

Nice spar fellas, one was a lil under-par from his usual standard here. Sill hotlist worthy tho. Fairs in. Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-25 02:28:24

Two different styles...both have their merits. Olde Concepts held his scheme longer and had internal rhymes too. Dissizit's puns and wordplay shined in certain areas and his flow was on point too. I enjoyed both, but I enjoyed one a little more, but nice battle though. Fairness. Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-25 04:53:13

Olde Concepts : Your opener was ok but I looked up the word mergered and couldn't find it and also if you meant to say merged then the syllable count of your multies would be off so I'm not really sure whats going on with that line... Your set-ups and execution need to be more complex cuz i feel your concepts are good but the wording of your set-ups and punches keep them from being as strong as they could be.. Also do less talk about yourself and more talk about your opponent... That broken down furnace line was good but after that your bars became predictable again... I really believe if you start taking more time wording your set-ups and punches better then you'll become a stronger emcee..... Dissizit : You very consistent throughout your whole verse and provided some strong wordplay and had some good set-ups and strong execution and the least i have to say then the better but i really didn't see anything wrong with your verse except maybe some of the concepts could have been better but you still executed them nicely.. Votes based off of consistency... Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-25 13:23:21

ok, both did fairly decent, winner imo, came with alot fresher wordplay, better usage, multis , setups were on point on a consistant basis, loser, came with some nice rhyme schemes which was the strength of your verse, but as far as puns, wordplay goes, it was more of a mixed bag, some hit well, while some the relation either didnt make sense with its concept, or hit weak.. itwas a matter of consistent punches, and , not to mention, winner came more direct personally, dunno if this was an open or not, generous wit my rates.. fairs in. Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-26 01:45:37

One was bold in his scheme and kept wordplay's coming Hard and one had a bit a slag in the opener but trundled good towards the Closer,but we can only have one winner. Fairs in Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-26 08:59:05

Good good battle, no hate at all, I was just feelin one better, olde. Ya opener could have been stronger REAL NIGGA VOTE Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-26 09:40:47

enjoyable read here. the loser held his schemes well and had some nice concepts but i felt the verse was lackin in any real hard hittin punches, there was some nice lil jabs but nothin that really sticks out, if u combined your concepts with a damagin punch at the end of em then u drops would be a lot stronger. the winner had some dope wordplay and nameplay and kept it consistent through out, and had the stronger drop in general. Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-26 10:43:31

good battle Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-26 19:10:06

fv no hate vb on my battle wit tiger flow..got some noobs votin on it..wanna get a better judgement Voted: HeliO / Phracture
Posted on: 2012-08-27 20:41:58