DPS. Posted on: 2012-08-14 22:32:22

DPSet... #AllElseObsolete. Posted on: 2012-08-16 06:37:15

CLASSICK... League Finals. Vote fair. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-10 13:05:04

Anyone in need of expos, please let me know and i will detail in full. Lets do this amigo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-14 21:13:33

Claaaaaaaaaaaaassick ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-14 21:16:56

MUUUUUURDERRRRRR Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-14 21:20:53

Oh and you already know its DPSet! Shittin in ClassicK worldwide! :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-14 21:28:44

Dee-Pee-Esss Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-15 02:47:54

CONCEALED VOTE... My choice was consistent throughout his verse.. His set-ups and execution were pretty good but could have been better... His concepts were nice and his multies and wordplay was cool along with his flow... His opponent opened up with some fire but fell off towards the end and his punches became predictable and basic... He had some pretty good wordplay and a decent flow throughout his verse though.. Votes based off of consistency... low/high Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 07:47:57

^riiiiiiight.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-15 07:50:31

Fair in. Both were solid drops, which was what I expected of you two. One started off fairly strong in the beginning and had a couple of nice lines, but fell off at the end. The other 's verse was consistent all the way through. Could have gone the other way if the first had finished at the level they started at. Fair in. Appreciate the read. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 08:08:33

This was a dope battle. I like both of your styles and going to keep this 100%. Grief; I love your concepts, you always have dope ideas and really creative, I think your build ups are sometimes a bit played though which is the only thing that takes the weight from your bars. Talk; again, you're creative as fuck and some of your lines are a bit risky, but I think you pull them off well. I think your wording and readability is dope and your verse was structured really well, sometimes your concepts are a little, easy, though. Nice battle, close, but I got a winner here, just preferred the verse all round. Great battle! Low - Mid Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 10:47:53

Good grieeef. Its CLASSICK!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-15 11:03:57

GOOD GRIEF---First bar, I didn’t feel it was set up properly. The line leading up to the punch could have been more relevant and dealt with something about type or script. The Calibri’s wordplay itself was nice, but that punch didn’t hit particularly hard to me. Second bar had a more relevant set-up…the Norway wordplay was nice, but once again, the overall punch wasn’t particularly strong. Third bar was well put together. I did feel the punch was predictable though and that took away from how hard it could have hit. Next bar was probably the best in your whole verse imo. I did feel the multies could have matched up better though. The iron lotus wordplay was nice. Next bar was well-constructed. The Powderpuff/”streak behind ya” metaphor was nice, I just didn’t feel the overall punch hit very hard. Next bar had nice multies…seemed to come from a personal angle…nice movie reference, but didn’t really hit hard to me. Closer was alright. The cum/come out of pocket/jerking through his jeans metaphor was nice. The preceding line set it up with theme about penny pinching/starving, but like most of your set-ups throughout the verse, I just would have liked to have seen more along the lines of the type of wordplay and metaphor that you end up using in your actual punches. It would be nice if you could make set-ups that are actually punches as well, but even if they don’t punch, they could use more complexity. With that, being said, I’ll say that I’ve seen way better from you. TalkSick---Fir st bar had a nice consistent flow. You also kept the theme consistent. It didn’t hit particularly hard though, but it was all relevant. Next bar, you kept up the flow, but I wasn’t really feeling how you attached bloody, buddy, and dummy. The theme was consistent about freezer/ice-cold/thi n ice…the bering strait wordplay was nice…still felt things could have hit harder though. Next bar was probably the longest multi I’ve ever seen anyone rhyme on here. Lol! 14 syllables by my count. The overall punch had a comical edge and a nice metaphor. Next bar, you kept the comical edge with the sarcasm...nothing particularly hard-hitting, but the ‘curious at my doorstep/knock and axe me’ part was nice! I wasn’t really feeling the closer. I get that it relates to his avy being from Snoopy and his name has two G’s, but it didn’t hit hard to me. Overall, what stands out most to me about your verse was the flow (use of multies) and the comical edge. You’re pretty good at keeping things consistent, but I often felt you could have chosen harder-hitting concepts. Overall-- -Nice efforts from both, even though I’ve seen them go harder. I’m going with the verse I personally got more entertainment from, but I can see this going either way due to a person’s preference. Nice battle fellas. Fair is tossed. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 11:24:49

This battle was pretty close i was feelin one abit more imo fairs always in no hate Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 14:08:28

Both are pretty clever with this shit.I liked ones wordplay and punches more. It is what it is. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 23:16:57

one of the best battles I read so far on here. mid 9 vs low 10 for one. Classic right here... Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-15 23:33:23

Fair vote, this shit was sick af. Was feeling sick the best tho Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 00:36:43

fair vote Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 01:48:05

swwt as Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 04:21:09

ok GOOD- first off im enjoying your wordplay thruout the majority of your verse, multis on point, so was your setups, probably your best line imo, is the redbull build up, to the concept, ya best wordplay was the iron load, its execution, very nice ish... you did indeed fell off towards the end tho, wit the predictable percyjackson, stole thunder line, and the come out of pocket line, which was jabbish at best from a played 'come' entrende.. thats what kept you from getting a 9 imo.. TALK-first bar i wasnt feeling the length, the concept took too long to materialize imo,hence made the punch lose alot of steam, i'd lower the wording and get your point across more efficiently, because all it showcased was your polished use of multis and buildup.. next line was feeing the bering straight wordplay, creative, havent heard it before, and good build, next line was probably your most complex, multi wise, also very creative , next line buildup didnt really jive wit the knock and axe me, you were talkin bout his stats, and losses etc, then it turned imo into a gay joke, or insinuates that when you say 'more than curious', last punch was decent....okay both had some nice material, but they also had their share of mistakes, this comes down to personal preference, and i felt the winner's bars were utilized more cleaner , not too wordy, and to the point leadin up to their concept/flips.. very close battle, but fairs in.. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 04:51:11

^^I didnt have a single gay joke in my bars cuzzo. Your smoking tha ganja. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-16 05:52:06

nice Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 08:26:09

guess i interpreted the 'curious' part wrong.. you meant it at face value... wit the knocck and ask me.. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 12:08:22

Good Grief: First Line Was Sick Especially Since I Deal With Fonts All Day, It Just Made It That Much Better To Me. Next Line Was Cool BUT It'd Be Better If He Was From Denmark (Unless He Is?) Doesn't Really Hit Hard As It Could've. Red Bull Line Was Cool But Kinda Your Standard Gunplay Line, Nothing Too Crazy, Still Nice Doe. Iron Lotus Line Was More Or Less The Same As The Last One But More Creative. Next Line's First Part Was Confusing, I Don't Get Why You Put "Heap Of Lying"...Anyways Next Bit Was Cool But The Set-Up Was Kinda Like What? Imo. Next Line Was Good, I Related To It Cause I Just Watched That Movie Haha Good Shit. Finisher Was Alright, Felt Like You Could've Ended It Stronger Though. Overall You Had For The Most Part Good Lines But Had Some Generic Punchlines/Gunplay In There Too, Also I Don't Get Why You Put Exclamation Points After Some Phrases Like DEATH ON THE STREETS!! But Then You Kept Going With The Scheme, Just Styling Really. I'mma Give You A 8 TalkSick: First Line Was Sick, Liked The Whole Chicken Scheme And How You Kept With It Instead Of Detouring From The Subject Like More People Do. Next Line Was Equally As Good Only Thing I'd Say Is The First Bit Was Slightly Filler But It's No Big Deal If You End The Line Strongly. Next Line Was Hilarious Lmfao 9 Line Multi Was On Point. Props On That One. Next Bit Was A Nice Lil' Jab Since You Beat Him Before But Not Really That Hard Hitting. Finisher I Didn't Really Get TBH. It Could Either Be "Odd Reif" Or "Snoop Do"?? Anyways, Overall I'mma Give You A 9. Good Job Fellas, Enjoyable Read Here. -Student, FVC Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 14:25:25

both good in this shit, great works, but on got my eyes Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 18:20:01

Talk sick gav e him the flu Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 18:22:52

Talk sick gav e him the flu!!! Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 18:23:40

Cool.. fv in Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 18:57:08

Dope Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-16 23:01:22

both came solid here and it was pretty hard to pick a winner here and its gonna be a close 1. both showed a high level of creativity from start to finish. the loser had some nice set ups with polished multis leadin upto effective punches. although, in areas, mainly at the start, the build up lasted a bit too long, i felt while i was readin the opener in particular, i was waitin 4 the punch at the end of a long set up. dont get me wrong, the set up was nice, but maybe 1 multi too many. the middle of the drop was mad creative n not easy to pull off. the winner, for me, was consistently solid thru out. fire concepts all the way thru and some really original word play. threw some humour in there aswell which is always a plus with me. your closer was cracky. not much between these 2 and i can see reasons to call either a winner here, but my votes in. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-17 03:45:49

nasty just plain nasty fv close battle Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-17 06:09:35

great battle! one just had some punchs i liked more and used the bars to his advantage a little bit more then the other nh fv Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-17 09:53:04

gb Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-17 21:17:53

Grief got this shit... his flow is horrible, but his metaphors and wordplay is legit... nice bars overall...TalkSick had a better flow, but that gunplay shit is terrible when you're not doing it right... concepts seem vague. Overall 8-7. Fair'n is in. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / TalkSick
Posted on: 2012-08-17 22:33:54

I think you got the verses mixed up D' lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-17 23:58:33