kinda went weak on this so who ever takes it gd luck but Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-30 22:53:40

Expo:Pimp cane is something that pimps have to walk around with , step bothers funny ass movie my teacher is named mrs. crabster lol casper is a ghost that alot of people cant see cuz thier ghost, dizaster famous battle rapper Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-30 22:55:12

10'z both r kool one dude edged it tho but its all kool Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-07-31 00:00:35

fv Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-07-31 00:46:15

good to go Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-07-31 12:15:41

i have ma winner. Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-07-31 16:23:15

HONESTYS THE POLICY Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-07-31 18:02:00

fv Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-08-01 03:59:16

fair vote. kinda low cos i can tell you both could probably do better. keep at it, good battle. Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-08-01 05:43:43

ReadyToBattle- First thing i want to adress is the un-neccesary capping of these "multies"...well, random words rather.....I think i see what your doing and thats emphasizing the "execution" as if you were live battling perhaps, but unfortunatly you cannot do this in a Text Battle....Second, i seen an attempt, perhaps even a hint of a Metaphor in there, which means you DO know about some of the "Majors" of battling. With things of those nature, be sure to perhaps "quote" them to highlight them for voters, it helps your readability if doused with the right amount (dont over do it though fam). Third, Be careful of your wording, try adding a safice mix of vocabulary into your verse to add complexity...done rightly it can do wounders.......De JA Vu- Off the hop, first thing id like to comment on is your wording...dude...i mean dude!...It needs to be re-vamped drastically! Its good to see you have a few Metaphors coverd, this helped your verse (i cant say they were creative but), they were pushing the "outside the box" feel, but they just didnt quite make it for me. Syllable for syllable, your multies count matched up which means you are aware of how this goes as far as that is concernd (See wordplay breakdown though). Overall i ranked this battle fair, I find people are drifting away from the "realistic voting" numbers and it needs to change. Both could use some work, i suggest (like i always do) peeping some of the past and present Tournaments that have been held here. They are great examples for all aspects of Text Battling. (Follow this link: http://www.letsbeef. com/tournament.php?s ection=tb) Goodluck to both battlers and i look forward to seeing elevation from both of you. Fair has been mixed. Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-08-01 17:38:26

Clear winner demigodz for life Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-02 02:43:17

multis won it. lil more technique and ul get much farther on here Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-08-02 03:37:56

fv Voted: ReadyToBattle / Hottt Boyyy
Posted on: 2012-08-02 21:40:16

he used the same verse for mine. http://www.letsbeef. com/battle_details.p hp?id=453389§ion =tb ready wins Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-15 12:58:54