Expo: 20 dead in Taliban siege of Afghan hotel, Victor Ortiz Got His Jaw Broke Last Night Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:24:42

you got this shit on lock bro. Good luck Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:25:36

Thanx Fam, G'Luck To U As Well Homie. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:28:27

Good battle. One took it for deeper concepts Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:33:00

QUICK FULL BREAKDOWN... URBAN INDIAN Your opener was somewhat weak... You lacked a lot of necessities such as set-ups, strong execution and complexity.. Your multies were basic, try providing more syllables along with bigger words.. And also your concept was very very weak.. Your 'white man in iran' bar had a decent concept to it but lacked complexity due to wording and also your inner rhymes were very basic but as a set-up they related to the punch decently but like i said it lacked complexity... Its kind of hard to follow your verse due to all the capped words so only cap your multies but either way i cant follow your verse to good but just to let you know, work on your set-ups, structure, execution, multies, creativity, and concepts... Overall your verse wasn't to good........ ~SHINIGAMI~ : Your opener was nice... The concept was nice along with your set-up and execution... Not really much to say about it cuz everything seemed good but remember it could always be better with better wording... Your loss prevention bar was petty nice.. I liked the flow and vocab in it.. The concept was nice and your set-up and execution was good... Nice multies.. Your 'twenty dead like the taliban' line was pretty dope.. everything was on point with it but actually i think you could have done more with the set-up though... Your closer was pretty good... Once again you could of done more with the set-up but it was still decent.. Good concept and with an ok set-up and good execution... Overall this was an ok battle... Votes based off of consistency... HIGH/HIGH Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-24 22:33:01

nice from both Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-25 08:26:37

one was too much for the other here. . .respect to both tho Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-25 11:43:01

gb homies hot stuff vb plz Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-25 22:27:17

Alot of rappers got my face on they DART BOARD, but they dont START WAR cause im the HARDEST of The HARDCORE! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^filler, selfhype bar... you need to focus on dissing your opponent. The .44 BLAM! Never JAMS when it GOES OFF, Mistaken for a White MAN in IRAN, you Might BLOW UP! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^white man in iran? wtf, more filler, basic multis..this was a half dis,, you basically just threatenin him.. wit assumptions.. Dont SHOW UP in my HOOD unless yur' packin' HEAT to end CHIEFS, Unless yur' MISUNDERSTOOD ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^again filler, waste of bars bro.. structure is bad... like Nut huggin' TOMMY BRIEFS! you also COPY BEATS, SLOPPY like Ron JEREMY's SHEETS! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^bars are hella short, weak diss.. you start wit tommy briefs, then ends wit ron jeremy? should setup wit more ron references.. like im PACKIN THE NINE' , and the shit aint LACKIN IN SIZE, huggin my 'tommy briefs', to end ya 'sloppy sheet' like ronjeremy AFTER SEX TIME/ and dont think im SECOND GUESSIN' stompin' yur' BODY with CLEATS! Ya never STOPPIN' THIS CREE from rummaging FREE through yur' PROPERTY, findin' notes from your SHAWTY's saying yur' the ONE PUMP SHOTTY! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^FILLER, again, end diss was weak... Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-26 01:02:29

Ayo! I’m A ‘FOO WIT THE SPITS’ Need I ‘PROVE THAT I’M SICK?’ Since His Flow Lacks Current, I’ll Shove My Fist Down His Throat Like I’m ‘NOODLING FOR FISH!’ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^de cent bar, concept is a bit too wordy imo.. and relation is aight.. Point Blank ‘DUDE IS A BITCH’ N’ If This ’BOSS SEE TENSIONS…” Bullets Will ‘CROSS DEMENSIONS’ And His Fam Gon Have To “Identify The Missing” Like ‘LOSS PREVENTION!’ ^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^aga infairly decent bar, concept was alright, multis was on point.. I Get ‘PLENTY BREAD WHEN THE CAL. GO BLAM’ And If This “Hoe Tell/HOTEL” I’ll Murk His Crew N Leave ‘TWENTY DEAD LIKE THE TALABAN!’ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^i understand the hotel wordplay, but twenty doesnt relate to your opponent, unless he really has 20 in his crew, so it goes down a notch... flip was again decent, its current event, and complexity is there, but the multi seemed a bit like your tryin to fit random words in there to get the scheme to match.. how do you get 'plenty bread' when cal goes blam... so you get paid to shoot peeps,?lol No Need To "Boogey" I Simply Demolish Dreams, 'HOPES AND ALL' So Come On Here N Act Like The "Victor" Will Leave You With A 'BROKEN JAW!' ~FREE AGENT!!!~ ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^ok closer, .. ok, this was fairly onesided, imo, one came with more polish in all aspects in his verse, from complexity to concepts to flips... other just needs to work on delivery, in your schemes, try to focus on better metaphors, and puns, it'll help up your bars to the next level.. even if it has to be simple to start off wit... but fairs in gentlemen.. Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-26 03:38:19

nice battle fv dropped no hate Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-27 01:11:25

One had concepts that actually led to fresh punches. They just hit harder all around. Fair is in. Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-27 20:47:51

gb Voted: UrBaN iNdIaN / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-27 21:16:06