Might snipe. I'll see. Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-23 10:34:18

dope - g'luck fammo Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-23 10:46:00

One was better here. Protrait line and crop line were pretty nice. Fv Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-23 12:36:34

FULL FUCKING BREAKDOWN FROM THE BEST UNYQE : Your opener was good... Nice set-up along with strong execution and the concept was pretty good.. Your multies were good and also your starting off with a good flow... Your 'lance on his bike' line was decent but needs a little re-wording and complexity with your set-up but your execution was still somewhat decent... The concept was ok and your multies were good and also your flow was still on point but once again try being a little more complex... The 'durrant with a few queers' line was ok but your wordplay was a little below average and also your wording should have been strong... Your set-up and execution could have been stronger with like i said better wording... A little bit of complexity would have strengthen that line up but your multies were still good and your flow was still good... Your closer was decent but i feel you should have worded it better cuz it came off as a little sloppy to me but the concept was ok even though its played... Your set-up was a little average and your execution was also but overall nice verse............... . THAT ORC : Your opener was nice and the concepts were good, wordplay was basic and your set-ups and execution was somewhat strong but the only probably i had with it was that it dragged even when i spit it fast it still dragged... You had a little to much inner rhyming going on but the lyrics were still good along with multies... The 'self portrait' shit was good but your multies were a little iffy but other then that your set-ups and execution was decent and your wording along with concepts were nice.. I wasn't really feeling the self destructing letters line.. It was very basic and didn't really hit hard but i liked the concept but it just wasn't executed strongly and the wording could have been stronger... Your closer was decent but lacked complexity... Your set-up along with execution was basic but once again your concept was good just needs better wording... Overall good verse... I'll give both verses one more read then drop a fair... Both were evenly matched with consistency and many other aspects... I honestly cant really decide both had there highs and lows so enjoy the breakdown anyways...lol I'll be back later to give this another read to see if i can decide... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-23 13:49:45

5WB: Hard Choice Quantity Vs Quality Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-23 19:27:32

A yo I heard THAT DUDE'S A FAKE BITCH he'll always be 1 even w/ TATOOS AND FACE LIFTS come ''armed to get broke off'' like the STATUE OF DAVID!!! [arms] ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ok , setup was pretty much irrelevant to the end punch, shoulda kept up the idea, about him being fake, or setup relating to 'armed' or gunplay... wouldve made it stronger imo, the wordplay(armed to get broke off)to flip itself was nice tho.. ----------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- --- . .This kid here see's the CHAMP IN HIS EYES so there is no CHANCE FOR HIS LIFE ''roll up on me dirty n get busted'' like LANCE ON HIS BIKE!!!. . ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^decent amount of words, length wise bars was good, multis on point, again tho, setup seemed irrelevant to lance on his bike, shoulda integrated more bike or lance references... punch was kinda iffy... did lance get in trouble for smokin L'S or drugs? expo woulda been nice, otherwise i cant see a relation between the concept to flip which took this down a notch ======= ==================== ============== His loved ones mom, AUNT AND A FEW PEERS know he has no CHANCE LIKE A NEW YEARS reso, so he like TA RANT[DURRANT] WITH A FEW QUEERS,!! He too busy STRECHIN HIS KEYS and is DESTINED DEFEAT his ''flows dont have to END IN THE SEE[C]'' to be CATCHIN THE HEAT!!! [okC] -U- Know ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^this couplet didnt really make much sense imo, ok he loved someones mom, etc.. then you jump to a different idea, wit 'no chance' like a new years reso.. which didnt make sense, and since he has no chance, he likes to rant wit queers? durrant? who's that? continues on to different topics again... length wise the bar is really stretched, then you threw in all these concepts which lessoned the fllips.... lastly , the relations between, much of these concepts felt forced.... imo. Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-23 22:11:35

..Orc'll ERASE A HYMEN..I'm not HATING-WITH-SPITS but ur BASIC-AS-SHIT, I'll be RAPING-YA-BITCH - Trust that ''Cowell/Cow will get dropped'' like X-factor PARTED WAYS WITH SIMON!../ ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^ok, scheme is different went wit abbba, but setup is irrelavent multis wit no relation to the concept, imo, and who's cow? how is he related to your opponent, or anything random for that matter , just basing off the concept line, it was good wordplay, flip was different.. but because of the buildup, the strenght minimized.. U'll be TRYING TO FLEX MORE WEIGHT but no LYING, UR TEXT BORES MATE, vS Orc?! ''You're getting A head of yourself'' like BUYING A SELF-PORTRAIT!../ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^good amount of wording, concept to flip was decent Ur BROKE AS SHIT, U BOGUS BITCH, When I hear u act likeya WEALTH IS FUCKING BETTER: It's funny cuz 'it Blows up in ya face, real quick' like SELF-DESTRUCTING LETTERS!.. ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^fin ally relevance thruout, and kinda relevant in the concept, but would ve been stronger had you maintained a reference to money or wealth... punch was ok, not to strong tho. / It's HOPELESS SHIT to FLOW WITH THIS, After GATS COCK on that WACK DROP- They'll 'Dig you up out the ground, rotten' like A BAD CROP!/.. =] ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^multis got downgraded here, but decent end... ok, winner for me, just had slightly mor complex schemes because as far as punches goes, both were about equal, not very consitent hit wise to edge this element... fairs in. Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-23 22:27:15

Hate vote deleted. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 10:21:22

nice from both Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-24 17:51:19

Still can't really decide on this one... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 23:23:25

CLASSICK! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-25 10:50:52

1 I felt just put a bit more hurt wif da punch, null hate, UK REP Voted: Letum / ORC
Posted on: 2012-06-26 07:30:18