Last line.... (will next see) is suppose to be We'll Never see* Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-22 17:01:23

First battle this month i aint have a winner after the conclusion of both verses.. Enjoyed both to be honest, while one came w/ a tad more a complexity i felt at times it weighed them down. Where as the other executed punches in a clean, styleish manner... decisons, decisons. Good battle fellas, but i got my winner here.. Fvs in Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-22 17:18:19

Very Very close. Fair vote is in. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-22 18:45:20

Dope drop by both. One took it Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-22 22:40:17

QUICK FULL BREAKDOWN after my smoke break... GOOD GRIEF : Your opener was strong... The nameplay and wordplay was executed strongly and had a good concept to it... From your set-up to your execution the ip scan line was good.. Your multies were on point and so far your verse has a nice flow to it... The 'adopt your style' lines were nice... The wordplay was good and your set-ups and execution was pretty decent... The concept was nice and your wording was good.. Your multies were still on point and your bars still have a nice flow to them... The 'illustrate criminal' was cool but i believe there good have been more to it but it was still good... your set-up was decent along with a decent execution... Concept was decent flow was still good but your multies could have been better... The 'Ryan Dunn' line was alright but the wording could have been better but your set-up and execution was still ok... The concept was alright and the multies and flow are good... The 'south park teachers' lines were dope from the concept to the set-up to the execution it was pretty good.. Your closer was ok but it didn't really seem to hit to hard but it was still alright... The concept was ok but the set-up and execution to the 'time square screen' line didn't come off as to strong but overall you had a strong verse............. ILL PHENOM : Your opener was cool... Your wording was on point along with multies and flow... Your concepts were executed nicely and set-ups led to a nice punch... The 'always on his last leg' line was somewhat comical to me and also a nice concept that you executed nicely.. good set-up and execution.. The 'shaman with roadrage' line was cool... Your 'noggin to showcase' was pretty good.. it had a good concept and your set-up along with execution was well done... The 'getting your balls rubbed' line was ok but could have been worded better... Your 'left in gasols dust' line was ok... The 'sweating the small stuff' line was also funny to me and the concept was nice... Your wording on it was good and also was your set-ups and execution... The 'ghost writer' line was dope.. Good wordplay, nice concept, and your set-up led to a nice execution but i think your wording could have been a little better... The 'thin ice' line was cool but it could of had more to it but it was still cool... Your 'bieber at ringside' line was alright and a little funny to me... Your closer was good but i didn't really like how it was worded but the concept was still good and your set-up were still alright along with your execution.... I think my decision from the 1st time you guys dropped this has changed... After reading these verses however many times i feel one had some fire lines but the other brought a couple more complex lines... Votes based off of consistency... LOW/MID Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-23 18:17:21

Ugh Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 03:52:46

I thought this was a close battle one had better concepts in my opinion. Both were executed well but one edged it for me. Good battle Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 10:22:46

dope battle here. . .tough call im leaning thisn way but i got a thing for wp so it swayed my vote tbh. . .respect to both Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 13:41:44

!!PYRO!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 13:54:18

nice flow Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 14:05:38

Deleted hate/retarded vote. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 17:39:11

nice from both Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 18:05:12

look at all them forced syllables this GUY IS DISPLAYING!! all my verse's RHYMES ARE AMAZING while only TIME SOMEONES SAYIN "I.P.'s Can Show Some Multis" is SITE MODERATING!! (IP Scan) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^dope opening , good nameflip, punch..multis on point.. ========= ==================== ==================== == talkin bout swag in battles and how you GOT IT WHILE ya always choking mid sentence so STOP IT CHILD cuz ya never complete ya verse "Or Finish Flows"... so no one wants to "aDOPT YOUR STYLE"!! (Orphan'ish Flows) ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^wording here was hella long in your last line..try to eliminate unnecessary words and still get your point accross.. helps for better flow imo... i did like the wordplay... good ish. ========== ==================== ==================== = turn him to a murder case after THESE TECHS TARGET!! in court they'll give me thirTEEN COUNT CHARGES cuz what ima do to "Ill Is Straight Criminal" like PoLICE SKETCH ARTIST!! (Illustrate Criminal) ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^damn, another good wordflip, ======= ==================== ==================== ==== ice him in his car at a stoplight and PUMP IN A CLIP!! bust a gat back... flare it till this "Jackass Perish" and his life is "DUNN IN THE WHIP"!! (Ryan Done) , ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^good relevance in setup, nice internal multi, decent jackass flip, although the concept's been played, you still pulled it off.. ========= ==================== ==================== == take this faggot who "Chokes On Dick" then put his throat on clips and POUND SPARKED HEATERS!! when i give "Em' Kays" and pull out the "Mack He" might think its SOUTH PARK TEACHERS!! (Mackie, Chokesondik) ^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice internals again, another good flip. ============= ==================== ================= have ya crying for mercy when this NINE FLARE B, i'll have ya screaming for ya LIFE LIKE "PLEASE!!" putting on a "Giant Display In The Street" like the TIME SQUARE SCREEN!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^eh , when droppin 3 syllable multis, i usually like to keep to a stricter rhyme, so the life like please, didnt flow wit the other 2 multis in that set...decent closer (PYROshit. ..) Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:08:37

"Man You'll Be Running" Like gNOBLI ON DA FAST BREAK when I "light up ya family" like Christmas leave em HOLY ON THEIR LAST DAYS so now its like your "votes"... LONELY IN THE WRAP GAME!! ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^good opening, and decent wordplay. ========= ==================== ============ This Shit Over.. He's like a "Paraplegic At Work" "ALWAYS ON HIS LAST LEG"!! so His "Chants Are out the Window" Like a SHAMAN WITH ROADRAGE, One clip, Bang em POPPIN HIS WHOLE FACE and "nick his days" leave his 'NOGGIN' TO 'SHOWCASE'!! ^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ wasnt really feelin the end punch..im assuming nick noggin is what you were referencing from nick jr.. shouldve stopped the bar at shaman wit roadrage..imo ===== ==================== ===== This GOBLIN GOT NO GAME So I'm "pitching" when STEPPIN IT ALL UP and I'll "Bury Your Kids In Dirt" like GETTING YA "BALLS RUBBED"!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^decent baseball references but end flip, was weak ... as far as line length, this was a good bar.. ============= ==================== ======= and The "Amount of Shots & Pow's You Take"?? You'd be LEFT IN GASOL'S DUST!! This "Midget isn't Con in nothing" so if it's "Good'z Battle" you know he'll be SWEATIN THE SMALL STUFF!! ^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^g ood references, setup tho was irrelevant to the concept tho, its because you tried to integrate another concept/flip.. sometimes too much of a good thing, defeats the purpose..i wouldve started off wit something else about the con /goodz battle to lead up to your punch.. which was good btw. ============== ==================== ===== Man This NO LIFER JUST SHOOK WIT A WORN CREW.. "Pyro' Saying "We G' With the Lines"? That's Just A GHOST WRITER PUSHING IT FOR YOU!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^nice complexity here, and fairly decent punch... -------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- --- He's a deCIEVER THAT BRINGS LIES so it's the "Cold Truth" when I LEAVE YA ON THIN ICE.. Saying you "May Weather Phenom"...BEAT EM WIN RIGHT?.. but if your "Just in With a Belt", must be BIEBER AT RINGSIDE!! ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^nice bar here,and good wordplay wit just in...nice flip ============== ==================== ======= Just Read all his Verses. That's some WEAK TEXT FOR HIM, Zzzzz..The LEAGUES BEST SNORING but after these "Shots at this Son" will next see "GRIEFS" NEXT "MORNING" kinda disapointed wit your closer, read awkward due to wording..probably because the word 'next' being used twice so close together, setup was ok at best... okay, my winner had consistently good punches flips, coupled wit flow, multis,the other had a good verse too, but tryin to fit alot of concepts in some of the bars took it down a notch, imo... this was a toss up, and couldve gone either way.. but fairs in... Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:44:32

One's verse had better wordplay and puns and the other's had better multis and flow. It comes down to personal preference, but for me, one's verse was just more entertaining in this match. Great read fellas. Fair is tossed. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-24 23:13:20

fv Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-06-25 03:15:20