Easy win man no h8 jones but you where freestyling not battling so yeah next time you know bruh Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 13:03:34

fairs in... Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 13:10:24

Good verse, FV Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 14:54:39

Onr had a couple standout lines. Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 16:21:36

I DIG.. CERTAIN AREAS COULD BE IMPROVED BUT OVERALL A NICE DROP FROM THE WINNER. THE LOSER'S VERSE WASN'T EVEN A BATTLE VERSE TIL THE VERY END OF HIS VERSE TBH. NO HATE BUT PREPARE YOUR VERSES BEFORE YOU DROP THEM AS OPENS. JUST A WORD OF ADVICE. ANYWAYS, FAIR IS IN!! Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 20:28:14

FULL BREAKDOWN... liljones :two sisters no brother just a stay at home mother always pack the revolver got no problems i solve em baller poppin the calla is the way that i rep em never scared no swettin let me refesh yeah......... Very hard to follow because you didn't cap your multies but anyways These are not good lines at all... There were no punches being thrown which meant there was no execution being done and your concepts were very basic also... the streets made me watchin 14 year old pop out babies makin baby daddys crazy mommas get lazy kids get shady and kids like you are no where related always hated debated numerous no girl friend mr masterbation....... Everything i said about your previous lines apply to these also.. There was nothing going for them but flow... dont ryme at me ill crash yeah crack yeah havin you lyin in a casket fell the rath of my number 6 rachett nothin but faggit scum of the earth you maggot..... Not a good closer at all... Make sure you follow what i say when i say cap your multies, find better concepts, show more complexity, work on set-ups and provide a strong execution.......... ~EOSSOUL~ : When it comes to "murder" i'm 'PRECISED WIT SKILLS' for i 'WRITE IS ILL' n continue looking for a 'LIFE TO STEAL' go "Al Pacino' wit the rhymes, call this a 'RIGHTEOUS KILL!'.... Nice opener... Only problems i seen were your set-ups weren't as strong as they could of been and also it seems like you forgot words works against having a clean read other then that nice concepts, and good execution... i'll keep the "heat" 'PACING THRU YA TEMPLE DUKE' and leave ya rocking like a patients in an 'ASIAN MENTAL INSTITUTE'... Wording kept this line from being stronger cuz your set-up didn't fully revolve aroung your punch nothing in your set-up had anything to do with an ASIAN mental institute.. See what I'm talking about, the Asian part... Nice idea though... i'm 'MURKIN ALL THESE FAKE SNAKES' and "handle them" like i'm 'WORKING OUT WIT SHAKE WEIGHTS!' Boy what i 'WRITE IS TRUTH' and you couldn't "hang wit this outlaw" on a 'TIGHTEST NOOSE' .... Decent lines but again your set-ups need to fully revolve around your punch to make it strong other then that your wording needs to be cleaner but you had some ok concepts and nice punches... i buck shots til his 'CHEST IS JUST GAPED' Like snackin a 'Kit Kat' i break "bars with four" n you wanna 'TEST ME WIT EIGHT!.... Decent closer but it didn't hit that hard... Not really a good concept and everything about it seemed basic.. Try being more complex with every bar like you were with Illokwent... Overall this battle was ok.. Votes based off of consistency.. Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-18 20:47:45

jones: flow was ight. The only line that could even be considered to be directed toward your opponent was the closer though. You have to come more direct. This was more of a cypher verse, lacked punches throughout the whole thing. Concepts, creativity and all lacked also... SOUL: Opener was ight. Flow was okay but I didn't feel the punch went that hard... "handle em" line was nice. liked that.. Closer was ight.. Nothing standout ish in your verse, but you came consistant with a punch every bar and flowed well.. Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-19 06:42:35

On the hotlist why? Fv Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-19 19:01:58

fv Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-20 01:24:47

was really feeling some lines from this guy.. but wording fell off.. fairs in Voted: liljones / ~SHINIGAMI~
Posted on: 2012-06-20 20:24:26