League battle..Good luck fam. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 17:46:40

good battle but one hit harder to me Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-16 18:07:39

PheoNix: Opening lines kinda mehh tbh. The "route of pink" I'd just throw that shit out, wasn't hitting at all and didn't sound strong just reading it. The "pen is out of link" line could have been a lot better, I think the set up on that one could use some rewording there... Liked the "congo camps" concepts you brought there, too bad it was just in the build up, but I def liked that concepts. liked how you attempted to use another member as per punch in this battle. Shows your creative mind is going and you came out to win the battle. However saying he is always "best of the basic" isn't much of a punch IMO... Android app punch was okay, the multi build up needs to be reworded on that one though... "Antique Casket" line was nice.. Ehh Liked the build up with wordplay ya defense, start guarding your head, but then kinda fell off with the concept.. Can't be much of a punch towards your opponent if your concept is about him starting a thread.. The "thoughtful hot topic" shit was basic and I got, I just wasn't feeling that closing punch to the line... Liked the idea with the line but again the concpet you brought was about the forums. The "versatile in rapping" concept was cracky though, I liked that.. overall like you prolly heard a billion times anyways lol, def have to work on your wording... AT: Concept and set up was dope.. Really liked the concept on that opener, only downfall to it was it seemed a hair stretched while reading it. but it was nice... "mixers" line was cool... "comic books" line was ight, everythig was there the punch just didn't come off very strong.. the "ruins all ya life" line was crack, prolly my fav line of the battle TBH... "stick under the shell" punch was cool... "pen is for sickness" punch was mehh... Closer was ight, thought that could have been worded a little better. But overall a very consistant verse punch wise. Alot cracky concepts and it was def polished up.. One just kinda outweighed the other here... But good battle to the both of you.. My votes in. Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 07:53:01

Ones concepts and punches were executed much smoother here to be real. The loser had some decent ideas, but forced multi's and poor wording hurt the drops potential. FVs tossed Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 07:58:56

ok... Pheonix.. gotta get that creativity down. pen choking? c'mon son. also rank and camps? naw... actually there were a couple other somewhat forced multis in there too. its seemed like you threw some multis in there soley becuz they rhymed so a lot of them sounded awkward. like really.. dont throw stuff in becuz it rhymes and clean up the wordings cuz a lot of theses multis and setups sounded extremely awkward. AT: the wording on the comic punch was off to me. the openers were good and i liked the donatello bit. now the diabetes and odds/even punches were just bad imo. "sick" punches are played and that odd even thing seemed very basic for you. now the Nixon wp was good but i hate how you did it. i would have used the Nixon/Nix in wp to the point were it was actually relevant to President Nixon himself. fv. Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 11:00:15

a lil one sided... one was too much in the creativity department for the other to handle... fair is dropped... Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 12:24:10

Both smell like fish. Fair is in. Only a quick vote, no time for expo. Goodluck guys. Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 15:17:23

fv no h8 gb but one got murked w- the metas... any probs send bars... Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 16:02:34

Ayo AfterThought let's send bars to this kid ^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-17 16:03:47

ONE JUST CAME HARDER - RESPECT 2 BOTH Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 21:56:31

FULL BREAKDOWN... PHEONIX : Reading your battles...No DOUBT YOU STINK the way you 'directs your punches is gay' like the ROUTE OF PINK so your 'words don't harm me' so I'll have your 'pen choking' like it OUT OF INK!.... Not to strong of an opener... You had some ideas but your set-ups and wording were not strong so your execution ended being a little weak also but like i said nice ideas... Your multies were fine but could be a little stronger... Good concepts just try wording shit better and making shit a little more complex... Your 'battle verse' is just like the CONGO CAMPS 'lacking all resources' for dopness n you're 'overated' with that COMBO RANK but you will always be the 'best of the Basic' like PRONTO BANK!... Someone said something about your multies but i really dont see a problem with them cuz audio wise i can make them bitches sound unforced... Your concepts were decent but still your set-ups and wording weren't on point... They need just a little tweaking and complexity and they would be nice... It's 'quality over quantity' but still you always spit GRAND VOID RAP you're a 'decived thought thinking you're nice' but you will always be a STUNNED BOY CRAP but tho you suck you will always be our 'favorite sell-out' like an ANDRIOD APP!.... Pretty decent lines here... Your set-ups were decent along with your execution and concepts but the only problem i seen was with one of your multies ''stunned'' should not have been used cuz it doesn't rhyme with the beginning of the other multies but other then that everything else was pretty good....I'll have you 'forbidden from soiciety' like a OBLIQUE SASS BITCH n if this 'battle a rumble' you will get in PHYSIQUE ASS KICKED n you can't 'hurt me' cause you just 'catch soft bodies' like an ANTIQUE CASKET... Once again these lines were pretty decent but I'd like to see some more complexity in your set-ups but other then that good concepts and your execution was strong and you had nice multies... Elevation is definitely showing right here... Your 'lines is stagnant' and your WORDING IS DEAD they say 'wordplay your defense' but you should start GUARDING YOUR HEAD cause you wouldn't have a 'thoughtful hot topic' STARTING A THREAD... Nothing strong here but not really weak... Your multies were ok but your concepts set-ups and execution were somewhat basic.... Your choice of words kept them from being hard hitting... I'll come 'vicious' like I'm STITCHING STORMS 'attack your crew' that is full of BITCHING WARMS and you bitches wouldn't be 'versatile in rapping' SWITCHING FORUMS... Not a strong closer... Your wording could have been better but also your concepts should have been stronger... Your set-ups and execution weren't to either... You are definitely getting there...... AFTERTHOUGHT : ya BITCH GONE MAD w/ ME, I got that BIG LONG SALARY chill in the crib, chips? i "Rack It On Both Sides" from "Bouncin The Rounds While Swingin"... PING PONG STRATEGIES!.... This was a pretty strong opener... Everything seemed to be on point with it except the ping pong line seemed to take awhile to get your point across but it was still good though... Concept, set-ups execution, mulites and wording seemed to be fine....she like the SHITTIEST GROUPIE HOE her shirt "Buttons Been Twisted & Holes Been Plugged In" more than MIXERS IN STUDIOS!.... These lines were alright.. Nothing jaw dropping but nothing weak... Just keeping consistency there i guess... The set-up to the studios line was worded nicely and also executed nicely... overall nice bar... and we get it, you kill, ROB BUT LOOK.. the reason why I flash "White Then Black" leavin you KNOCKED & SHOOK?'s coz im a "Bully" , i "Pick On w/ Text" like "COMIC BOOKS"... Pretty nice lines here but for some reason i feel like something was missing... The set-ups were nice along with the execution and your wording seemed to be on point and the concepts were nice but like i said something seemed to be missing.... If I catch you "On The Rhodes" I'll have bullets "Go Around Ya Temple" when I SHOOT NINES w/ EASE to prove this gat "Ruins All Ya Life" like loyal "TOUR GUIDES" IN "GREECE"... Wow!! These lines were pretty fucking nice... From your wording to your concept to your setups to your execution this was on point... Pretty much flawless lines here... And right here? I aint GUESSIN ILL WIN, IM CERTAIN look at me..I got "Green All Over me" w/ TECHS that I GRIP FOR MURDER, the bullets so big, you can "Stick Under The Shell" like Donatello's "WEAPON" in "NINJA TURTLES"... Your multies were fine and concepts were ok along with set-ups and execution... Not to hard hitting here but nothing weak either... Keeping consistency alive i guess... The punches so "Sweet's Got Me Ill" & now my FIRE KEEP ME WELL so it should be know my "Pen Is For Sickness" like a "DIABETES SHOT"!... Everything was on point here except for 'well' and 'shot' dont rhyme so is a typo in need.. Anyways everything was on point with these lines except for that error... Ya own crew doubts ya, SEE, ITS BEST I TELL KID,that all the "Odds Are My Way" "EVEN" RHET COULD TELL IT!... Basic lines.. Nothing hard hitting or complex about these lines... All aspects of them were basic... True, so now I'll have his legs & "Arms Broken" w/ GLOCKS & KNIVES DRAWN to have "Nix In Dropped Boxes" "WATCHIN" his LIFE "FALL"...Decent closer... Nice concept and set-up and execution but your wording could have been better... Your multies were good and overall you had a somewhat solid verse... Votes based off of consistency and more complex bars... mid/mid Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-17 22:49:50

Very one sided I score the overall battle this so I'll give u that. But the loser was in the low low & the winner low mids GL Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-18 02:04:57

FAVORITE SELL OUT LIKE AN ANDROID APP WAS PRETTY DOPE. JUST FELT THE OTHER'S CONCEPTS, PUNCHES, AND FLOW WAS BETTER OVERALL. NO HATE. AS FAIR AS I CAN BE.. Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-18 08:57:29

Both Had Very Nice Verses N' Concept, I Felt One Took A Bit To Start Getting Strong While The Other Was Pretty Consistent. And As Far As Punches A Slight Edge On The Delivery. Fair Vote Is In. ~PROPS TO BOTH~ Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-06-18 22:11:58

Lol Nixon watches. Duh. My b AT. Voted: Phoenix / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-12-07 17:41:51

Huh ?? Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-21 17:17:21