Fair vote is in... Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-15 13:35:38

fair... vb Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-15 14:36:27

fv h Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-15 15:14:55

FULL BREAKDOWN... DAVE : RULE? He BEAT HIM OFF just to BE A MOD, shit you'd think Revan's a monk the way he's DEEP IN THOUGHT... Decent opener but the whole deep in thought concept is played but you worded it good and had a nice set-up to it...Execution wise it wasn't to strong due to the played concept to begin with... Multies were a little basic also.... He even SAID AND IT'S GAYER 'PRETEND I AM VADER' just to get him self a little GENEROUS FAVOUR with the END OF A SABER! Couldnt have dough in the trunk as an ELEPHANT BAKER, you can TELL HE'S A FAILURE so if someone say "Look, After' Number 1!" its SELFISH BEHAVIOUR.... Your multies were about the only thing going for you in these lines... Your concepts weren't strong and nor was your execution... Your set-ups would have been better if worded differently but still wouldn't help with the vader and saber bullshit... He's the kinda guy to wait for a bus, then TWO'D APPEAR but they drive right past cause both KNEW HE'S A QUEER... Honestly the only good thing about this bar was it was comical... Everything else such as concept, complexity, set-ups, execution and multies was basic... He gets stripped from the table like REMOVING VANEERS so you'll see-I end this battle with an AT L like T.I's MOVIE CAREER!... I liked the concept of the nameplay but it wasn't worded good and set-up strongly... The previous line was decent but needs more to it.. Your multies were decent..... AFTERTHOUGHT : Ok..so shit ima AIM THE TOOL "Ready To Break" WAIT & PULL bitch say he got the "Balls To Hit" & "Solid w/ Stripes" but wouldnt have a "Pocket Of Numbers" in a GAME OF POOL!!.... Excellent opener... Your set-ups led to a strong execution of the punch and concept... Your multies were basic but your choice of words was set-up pretty nicely... The faggit almost died for my mod spot, HE WAS EAGER "Dedicated His Life To lB TO REACH UP" then quit & "Tried Hustlin" but still failed to get "GREEN IN EITHER"!!!.... These lines were pretty basic but still strong enough to keep consistency alive... Your set-ups were basic which led to a basic punch.. And your concept and multies were also basic... now this BUCK WHEN IT SEE YA? the "Tech" shot "Hurts, A Lot" as I smash ya BULB OF IDEAS!...Decent bar but could have been worded better.. Nice concept and multies were ok... Execution and your set-up was good... bitch im known to 'draw, knives' so who you MESSIN w/ 'PUMPKIN'?! I'm "Against An Unknown" REPPIN & CUSSIN so fuck it, aint writin a punch, and yall just read this whole "SENTENCE for NOTHIN"... Funny closer... Somewhat basic lines but still strong enough to keep consistency running.. Multies were good and your concept and set-ups were executed somewhat ok... They could have been better but it seemed you were taking it kind of light... Votes based off of consistency... low/low Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-15 18:52:47

basically just cutting and pasting the battle?? That deserves a major fail!!! cuz at least half of my full breakdown is 'breaking down bars'... Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-15 20:13:57

nice battle here... thought one came with a couple more hits then the other... consistency of punches won this one... Fair dropped... Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 01:17:57

HA! Feeling it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 05:05:13

fv both were nice good punches and multies Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 08:37:16

this was a dope lil read... hard decision imo.. both had hard hitting lines went a tad south only for minor moments, butt i was feeling one swagg a bitt more here.. good read my dudes.. fvs in Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 10:26:00

One Was Better On Attack As Well As Flow Better. Honest Vote Is In. Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 11:06:47

full breakdown ...this was one sided imo , one had some kind of played concepts with structure that kind of softened the punched and dragged it out and the other was on point , i liked the pool concept that was dope , reminded me of mine ''shootin the 9/ never see this oddballs stripes'' lol props on that fair vote as always Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 13:14:05

thought one came harder...gb fv no hate Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 14:00:54

Both verses were pretty weak in my opinion. It was hard to choose a winner. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 14:31:59

ok battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 14:36:37

Dave, I see what you did there. Hahaha, well, 3-4 & 3-2 deleted. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 15:20:22

decent drops by both, winner had a bit more polished concept to flips, flow on point to both, wordflips were also nice.. loser, try and work on the relevancy in your setups, it'll help strengthen your flips more.. fairs in.. Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 22:15:35

Tight battle, both brought fire. One line took it in my opinion. Hit me up if u want expo. And LMFAO at Dave's comment ^ Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 22:38:39

Nice drop from both, i feel one came with more complexity and nicer punches. Fair is in Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 01:20:35

gb Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 11:55:17

actually alot closer then i thought, one jammed alot of comedy into there small box and the other had concepts out the ass, very tight battle but creativity with some of the lines and concepts just took it by a bit for me Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 17:00:09

Both had some comical lines, i think one was a lil more polished, and hit jus a lil harder tho. I liked the creativity from both sides as well. Good battle, fair votes forever! Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 20:44:58

This was a good battle. Good effort from one but more rounded flow wit concepts was what took it for the other Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 21:37:39

this wass close as shit i just felt one had a lil bit more edge Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-18 00:26:36

Real Breakdown- very similar Cadence, the structure & "consistency" that's praised IMO resulted in lackluster fluidity. swag is almost nonexistent. The loser had good inside joke openers, idk the details but it wounded his opponent however he followed w/simplistic lines like: "dough in trunk, elephant baker" & "bus appear, he's queer" & Atl was not TI final film so his closer was imo knull. Making the rest of the fight 1sided. The whole battle lacked creativity. the pool concept has been used by Femonanon, & the "this line is killer filler" concept by me, the carved pumpkin concept was also used recently, tbh the loser made to many mistakes to win and the winner edged with the "couldn't get green either" line. Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-18 01:33:09

ITS OBVIOUS CONCEPTS TOOK THIS BATTLE BUT THE OTHER CAME PRETTY DECENT IMO. JUST NEED TO WORK ON YOUR SETUPS AND LEAD UPS FOR HARDER HITTING PUNCHES. 7s since the winner's closer was WEAK IMO. Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-18 08:39:19

good battle. both had nice punches. i was just feelin one a little more than the other. fairs in... Voted: AfterThought /
Posted on: 2012-06-18 11:14:56