FULL BREAKDOWN... JOSH : u 'playin games' Sayin he let's DUH FLAME OFF, SLAYS MEN since he 'brings poor value' like SOME GAME STOP TRADE-INS!! this CUNT STRAYS OFF, FADES THEN tries to 'grind' dope shit, but his rap 'can't pop, with no flips' like DUH MAYNES CAUGHT SKATING!!.... Pretty good opener.. You had some good concepts and nice set-ups and you executed them well but the only problem i seen was your wording.. It seemed kind of choppy and hard to follow but other then that these were some pretty dope lines if you word them properly... his girl? Dis whore didn't SCORE MORE THEN FIVE, gave dis WHORE FOUR MINS, TIME cuz I started 'feelin tit bumps in my hand' like PORN FOR THE BLIND... Not feeling these lines at all... The four mins shit was a bad choice of words cuz people dont say mins, thats how they abbreviate it not say it so it fuck up the flow to your multies.. And also the porn for the blind shit was not worded good at all your set-up was not good but it was a decent concept just not executed good... this why I opened that 'can sir/cancer', got drunk n hit u DOWN THROUGH FLOORS DUDE, and FOUND U'S GORE TOO all over his 'high def' tv, I ripped out the SOUND FUSE, TORN THROUGH so basically you got wrecked 'U..PS,' what can BRWN DO 4 U... The cancer wordplay was decent but it had nothing to do with anything in your verse so it was pointless and also the ups wordplay was not executed strongly due to wording... Your multies were ok and your concepts were good but your set-ups were weak and like i said your wording wasn't good.......... UNYQE : Lol his avi skiny aint DESTINED TO HOLD WEIGHT no QUESTION HIS WHOLE EIGHT got me proFESSIN' THIS HOE'S FATE ''is soon unveiled'' from CATCHIN A ''BOW'' 'KAY!![bouquet]... Your multies were pretty good and your 1st line was somewhat funny and also these lines had a nice flow to them but i would of liked to see more creativity like the catching a bow kay line which was pretty good and the wordplay was decent and executed nicely along with your set-ups... Elbow his tiny CHEST N HIS WHOLE FACE n my WEAPONS, SOME COLD BLADES have him STRESSIN TO ''OLEY'' no-bull or Josh is I'm GUESSIN A ''COLD CASE'' like I took some LESSONS FROM O.J.... Pretty basic lines... Nothing good but nothing bad... The lack of complexity and strong set-ups made them weaker then they should of been.. The concepts were pretty decent just not executed strongly... They flowed well though... Fagget you ''TM'' Josh?? LAME AS CAN BE like PLAYIN THE WII, CLAIMIN HE FREES bitch SAY IT TO ME n Im FLAMIN A G, it dont ''take a LEHMAN TO SEA/SEE'' he may ''flow'' but Im the ocean, eventually he's DRAINED INTO ME!!... Decent closer... Wording kept it from being stronger but it was still ok... Multies were fine and it flowed well but i would still have liked to see more creative lines rather then nice flowing lines... The concepts were alright along with set-ups but like i said woring kept it from a dope ass closer.... I'll give this 1 more read then drop a vote cuz I still dont have a winner... Re-read both verses and one seemed to be more consistent with stronger verse and also had a cleaner verse... low/mid Voted: Letum /
Posted on: 2012-06-16 03:07:44

OKAY! Voted: Letum /
Posted on: 2012-06-17 17:45:30

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Posted on: 2012-06-18 00:43:27

one came a bit harder with punches, fv is in Voted: Letum /
Posted on: 2012-06-18 10:22:49