Phenomenon is an occurrence. Slay/Kelly Slater is a surfer. (Demonic : ‘in person’ : Preach/Sermon : Heat : flames ..all along the same line) Take PH out of Phenom and add a V and it spells Venom. Converge means meet and Diversion can either mean the removal of something or a distraction and departure also means change. Rearranging diversions is pretty much like saying Changing change. Sounds irrelevant, huh? Lol. Notion/brain/lid.. Clip or Highlight for Tayshaun Prince. Vintage is wine production year which wine is made by grapes and baking is adjacent to being hot and needing air so I compared Vintage to a Vent age.. I dunno, makes sense to me. You Count Dracula (Get it) Im BLADE WITH SOME MINUTES *Danger if…* Last line should be common sense but it’s actually a pretty creative punch imo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 02:42:26

EXPO : TROUBLE UNDER STANDING DICK = meaning she has no trouble underneath an erect dick,standing/erect. ..... then fuck it when he 'spot lights' i'll put 'Kwon in a cast' but its not for "ANOTHER KOREAN MOVIE" = Kwon sang woo is a Korean actor......but when i 'shoot the K' I'll 'take the W, oh and(O,N)' now hes BACK TO BEING A "NO NAMER"=nameplay..... .....i'm just 'monkeying around' IN ARMED SPARS,YOU BORED? who cares cuz he'll 'fall flat on his back' cuz 'he cant reach these bars' its as if "HIS ARMS ARE TOO SHORT"=jungle gym Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 02:44:43

Good shit Phee.. dis should hit da hotlist! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 02:48:46

Hell yeah Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 02:52:14

Some good shit was said, creativity was nice from both, overall, one shined more than the other with swag n jus more straight to the point bars imo. Good battle tho, take this fair n love it. Voted: Zaicwon / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-06-14 04:33:19

POLO. ..good drop P... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 04:42:33

really close battle, one edged it wit a bit more polished concepts, especially the first flip, (get it).. a decent nameplay, just a bit stronger imo... the other had some decent flow, but some of the wordplay felt forced to me, one bar, made no sense in context, from setup to punch... ex.. the aim raisin, to dates in a vent age.. ??? choppy and the relation didnt make sense even wit the expo..due to its wording.. so how does raisin ya aim, make him vent age? anyway, winner edged it wit a slightly more polished verse .. all around.. fairs in Voted: Zaicwon / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-06-14 05:44:25

Fair vote is in. Voted: Zaicwon / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-06-14 09:05:53

raisin is a dried up grape, vintage means production year for grapes. my aim's to raise like dates on a vintage sayin time's passing (date goes up in number, not down) and when i say my aim's raising it means my goal/aim is raising since time is passing. Then read the expo about vintage again and try to make sense out of it. I know I didn't execute this punch the way I wanted to but (with a well explained expo) it should make more sense. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-14 12:20:39

i get it kwon.. the wording just needs to be worded better... basically that bar was more of a self hype concept. Voted: Zaicwon / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-06-14 12:36:21

Kw0n: opener was cool, liked the concept and punch you began with... The "take PH" line out was ight, thought concept was kinda forced though, and could have been worded different, but as per my own preference I would have thrown that bar out.... Crew Departure line was ight, kinda simplistic concept but it was ight thats all... the "piston" and "aim raisin" line was crack, I was feeling that shit. Nice set up and concept there, I wouldn't have added int eh "vent age" twist to it though, the regular concept of the bar was enough.. and those kinda of "wade/heat" plays are overused, gotta be a little creative and original when using those kinds of concepts... Closer fell off, I got the punch, it was played IMO... Liked the fact you were consistantly throwing punches towards your opponent.. Better wording and concept would do your verses even better... Phe: Opener, nice punch and wordplay, lil humorous line... Next bar and continued play on his girl fell off for me.... "kwon" nameplay was nice.. "no namer" line was nice, liked the creativity, maybe slightly off worded, but for the most part it sounded good to me... "arms are too short" line wsa mehh, I thought the concept was nice, but I wasn't feeling the way you worded it at all... Closer was an okay flip. Kept consistancy alive, but I've been seeing so much Heat/thunder plays now that unless it's an outstanding line then it's just there as a punch nothing more or less for me.. Overall tough decision, both had there ups and downs here.. But I do have a winner in my eyes.. Votes in.. Voted: Zaicwon / Apollyon
Posted on: 2012-06-14 18:48:38