damn, i wanna battle u, but i got noo credits. holla at me homey, mabey send 8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-28 02:26:32

expo.. slob is slang for bloodz. gang... easy E died from catchin AIDS. colgate is toothpaste.. yadayada Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-28 02:55:46

eazy e line played! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-28 02:57:58

fv no h8 but i went with the one with harder punches Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-28 04:07:54

good from both Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-28 08:04:39

This Was A Close Battle But One Had Harder Punches & Flips Both Pretty Clever But One Was Just A Bit Better FV Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-28 23:18:20

FULL BREAKDOWN... EAZYY : isaid look , eazy bouta POKE HIS NECK den IMPLODE HIS CHEST and EXPOSE HIS FLESH ..he a 'vampire' cause in the mirror his lies DONT REFLECT!!.... Very very basic shit right here... This is very much filler... There was no creativity, concepts were weak, wording could have been better and your execution was not strong at all... Also your set-up with the whole vampire line was terrible.... Only thing good were the multies and they weren't to good(lol) These lines were basically filler.... boy i BURN-THOSE TECHS & make the AIR-WHOLE STRETCH, gunsmoke currode his lungs this a JOE-PATERNO DEATH!!!.... Ok here you picked it up with concepts and execution but still, this is 8 so you should try to make every line count and put creativity into every line so saying you burn techs and shit like that is a waste of space unless you know what to expect but in order to that you have to know who your facing or you have to go second cuz you cant just go light on someone when you either dont know who your facing or your sending beef... Anyways that Joe Paterno line was pretty decent even though your multies were a little fucked.... throw a 'eli shotgun' wen im PASS EM OFF, the -heat chrome- make his -cheek bones- COLLAPSE IN HIS JAW!!! BANG..lyrically RAPEN THIS BITCH how is he TAKEN THE HITS?? fuck 8 i cud BAKE HIM N 6 just TAKEN A SHIT!!.... Nothing creative about these lines... Just pretty much filler to me and if worded way differently that Eli line could have been strong but this was basically filler cuz it lacked good concepts, set-ups, strong execution and nothing stood out.... the SOUL INFLICTOR the gun 'cobra' stroke DOSEN VENUM, yu crossin the MOTION SENSOR now yu just an EXPLOSION VICTIM!... Horrible closer tbh... It had no creativity and the multies were kind of iffy...No type of set-up for real... You were just rapping and this aint Main-Stream hip hop, This is battle rap where motherfuckers actually try to show creativity and your bars lacked all the essentials of being a good verse.. You need to focus on set-ups and execution bro.... ILLoKWENT : man 'fuck ya 8' like OCTAMOM DATES, ya gets no PROPS ON THOSE SPRAYS, so if ya FLOSS IN MY WAY, I got steel that'll 'clean ya grill out', like a GLOB OF COLGATE... I cant grasp watch you mean by fuck ya 8 like octomom dates but anyways... Pretty much filler here except that colgate line but that was somewhat weak... Set-up wasn't strong from the get go and your execution was the same and thats not strong... Your multies were ok... my shits' crip', you a SLOB WIT NO WEIGHT, that i'll SMOTHER AND FRACTURE, wit PUNCHES THAT SMASH YER, LUNGS INTO ASH NERD, and turn 'easy into another victim' like OTHER A.I.D.S CATCHERS.... Filler... Other then the aids line everything else was filler... Your aids line had a weak set-up and was not executed strong but was still somewhat decent but i didn't really care for the concept from the get go... Your structure gots me a little confused though.... ya wont TOUCH MY GREAT STATURE, wit 'bull' that STRUTS WIT GAY PATTERNS, yet if he RUNS THIS WAY AFTER, ya still aint 'gettin close/(clothes) wit me' if you was STUFFED IN SAME HAMPERS... Wordplay was a little basic but decent lines... They lacked creativity but still seemed to be better then your lines before... Nothing to strong but nothing weak just pretty much basic... concepts weren't strong but you executed them, i guess lol... now a MERK IS IN ORDER, when i CERTAINLY SCORE FIRST and 'trap ease' like CIRCUS PERFORMERS... This was a pretty good closer but once again your set-ups should be stronger but i actually like this closer... Concept was good and execution was good... Anyways my vote is based off of the all around stronger verse... Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-30 05:43:46

Close Enough But Only One Came Out As Victor of the Mike Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-30 16:02:23

fv Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-30 18:14:09

gb Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-30 21:56:52

close fuckin battle. fv. Voted: TRAYVON MARTIN / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2012-05-30 22:42:43