Expo: Squares = stop button. 24 + 12 = 36 lol. And a slide rule is a measuring/calculatin tool. G'luck homie, Claaaaaassick! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-26 08:05:13

A'll/Ale End up down tha drain=Distillery Fail=Brewer Regression...Tha Goliath/David is is self explanitory jus grasp tha double meanin. Lie=Afidavit/Proof (Legal System).. Floyd MayWeathers Defensive or BLOCK style has been dubbed tha Philly SHELL... Next, Homes, Condoe, Kingdom, Apartment.. Last bar There are 2 concepts runnin, Ofcourse tha cards bit Hearts, Diamond, clubs, Ace of Spade. Then Tha Prey/Pray=Head down (GRACE THA TABLE)... Mabad Class, This that Goooooooon'ish Behavior. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-26 08:16:04

Damn,Dope battle here.Fair vote is in. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 08:28:39

CRAZY BATTLE! fv no hate Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 09:58:31

I read each verse twice. 100% V.A.T. vote. Hit me up if you need any expos. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 10:58:02

TBH, one was lackluster to say the least, didn't follow through with it's full potential....the other one had some crazy good punches...fair is in. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 11:37:20

best battle Ive seen so far, it was hard to have to say one was better then the other. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 16:37:21

Damn!! FULL FUCKING BREAKDOWN.... GRIZZEAT : Classick Cap?? Trash it, Champ..Who Got Bars? Mr. RULE N K's YES MAN! Them DUES AIN PAID YET FAM?? If not, Then This Battles Type 'Send Thought Around w/ Arms Up' no Q & A SESSION!! YOU OR ME?? TEXTIN I'll 'Flip around that Dope, Thought' like a 'USERS REFLECTION' & I bet 'Ale: End up down tha Drain' DUE TO THA RECORD 0-3, 'Dis still ah Re-Fail' Call it a 'BREWERS REGRESSION'!!.... Concepts were pretty good, alos them mutlies were fine and i really like the wording but the only problem i see are set-ups, I believe they can be alot stronger or a little more creative but either way the punches were nice and i felt they were executed strongly.... Bellwork. Kiddo, Ya CRAFTS THA GAYESS.. So Naturally Im 'Fitted to Snap Bak' on ya Scheme n 'CAP ARRANGMENT'..THATS A FLAGRANT w/ 'Foul Lines'.. Hes gonna 'Go lie: If' I 'Proof up.... no AF-AH-DAVID... Once again great wording and multies and set-ups seemed to be a little stronger but the snap back shit is on the brink of being being played but it was executed and worded nicely so it made it a pretty decent punch... Structure was fine and some concepts were nice... Punches seemed to be landing fine also.... Up or Down' I dont 'Stop-in Rings'.. If All u got for THAT IS A 'COASTER'[?] GAT IN THA HOLSTER? Lolz, Ok Watch me 'Fly Rounds, while Beef Mode' STRAPPED LIKE A 'VULTURE'! I CHAT LIKE I POSTA, meanin ma puns ah 'Hike ya Head up over tha Ring' like that AFRICAN CULTURE!! Anyway, Him RAPPIN IT FUROCIOUS?? Not in GS & And he ain 'Movin School' unless its 'Directin TRAFFIC IN THA OCEAN' So That wud be a 'Para-lies'... Cause Ive 'Lost Feelin' That he was around or even FACTORED IN THA 'MOTION'! Him to Me is CRACKED UP SKIN TO LOTION! Yall are jus WRAPPED UP IN THA NOTION AF CAN PIN A POTION-Like he Dope-Till Puns 'Wear down this Rock-Head' w/o NATURAL EROSION!!.... Multies and structure were nicely put together... Set-ups were pretty decent but I'd like to see a little more creativity in them but they were still nice... Punches were delivered nicely and execution was fine but i think it could be stronger... Wording was still good but could be a little cleaner... I also seen some pretty nice concepts.... Ya BAR'S FILLERS PLUS THA SHIT DONT RHYME!! HARD KILLER? U AIN CLIPPED NO NINE Nor Wud u 'Rock: Rollin Attire' Less u was a CAR DEALER IN THA FLINTSTONES TIMES!!... These lines were well put together and didn't really lack anything... They were strong hit hard and the wordplay and reference made one line pretty dope... I'll 'Hang Defeet over ur Head' wen ma 'HANDS STAND' HARD!! & That Talk like u BLAM CANS DAWG.. Shiii, I'll Catch u in that 'Soccer Mom Mobile & leave u VAN-DAMNED' HARMED, 'Ground Pounded Into Pebbles' Swearin u 'BAM BAM ARMS'...Wordplay was a basic but the line ws ok... Nothing to strong in these lines but they weren't weak... Wording was fine and punches were ok but something was missing maybe a little more creativity or something...Jew tha typa nigga that gets CARTMAN ANNOYED! Fuk around & Get 'Knocked out of this May Weather' by 'Catchin a Shell: On tha Block' w/o SPARRIN WITH FLLYOD!! But I guess 'Homles some kinda Con, Doe' w/ me hes jus TARGETS DEPLOYED...Shiii, Think tha 'King Dum'? Rule know Leader ain 'a-PART-MENT' FOR BOI!!.... Once again wording wasn't hard for me to read but it could be cleaner for others... Nice punches and good wordplay and execution seemed to be ok but could have been stronger... Creativity was decent... These were some pretty good lines... And i got a laugh out of them...This Pussy talkin bout he SQUEEZE'N NINES AND THREATEN 'NAME'RS.. fyi an 'After Thought is Unneccessary' for tha REASON WHY IM TEXTIN 'GREAT'ER..100..Ive SEEN HIM TRY AND FLEX HIS WEIGHT UP But Rusty or not, G Touchin tha Box'll have 'Thought out tha scene' like a C.S.I. INVESTIGATOR!... Set-ups were nice and execution seemed somewhat strong... Concepts were good, multies were of course fine and structure was also fine... I would have like to see a little more consistency with creativity though... Punches were also good... Show some 'Heart before u Die, Man'.. Cause ukno ma 'Clubs: Head down on prey' even before they 'GRACE THA TABLE'!! GREATS A 'MADE' DUDE so I'll 'Clean house' and 'Out-Deck This Joker' if Yall think 'A's-AH-SPADE' THRU!... Pretty strong closer but the concept was a little played... Multies were cool, creativity wasn't really showing but some excellent punches were thrown and hit...... AFTERTHOUGHT : Thought's a boss.. & this glock in my PALM'll SPRAY CLIPS to "Light Up" BOMBS FOR DAYS KID & "Make Your Days End" when the "DON IS RAISIN"!!! (Dawn)/ you homo, if i "Start To Off The Squares" SPAWNED w/ GREAT GRIPS? You'll be "Tucked In The Box w/ Holes" like a "WALKMAN TAPE" IS!! Till you're "Rollin In Ya Spot" & heavenly "SONGS START PLAY-IN".... This was a pretty good opener... Set-ups were executed nicely along with punches... Multies were nice and structure was very nice... Concepts were fresh and executed nicely... Creativity wasn't weak but i think it could have been stronger.......my battle, that tourney-drop wasn't worthy-ock but he WON..SURPRISES?..nah , dickriders were "Supplied All The Way" so the BUM SURVIVED IT so ya "Name Covered Ya Winning" like league sponsors on CUPS & PRIZES!!!/ fuck the wildin, this TIME we MEET ill "Run To Ya Spot" w/ LINES of HEAT w/ over ten-quotes & them votes? you'll "Lose Before You See Em" so go "HIDE & SEEK"....Some set-ups could have been better, others were nice and your execution was nice and i find the dick rider line to be funny seeing how everyone says he has dick riders.... Multies were fine and concepts were pretty good and structure was well organized... If I come w/ "Four, Fives & Nines" i'll BLOW DARTS to "SIGN" & leave "Marks On This Kid" w/ out a rePORT CARD'S DESIGN!!/ this dude "Hold & Scratch Shoulders" like EAGLES when they FRIENDLY nigga broke! talkin bout BEAMERS OR A BENTLEY? when he "Bare w/ Guys" that's the only time you'd SEE HIM ON HIS "GRIZZLY"!!...Pretty nice concepts with some strong execution but i believe better wording would have made it a little stronger... Multies of course on point... Creativity could have been better but it was still pretty good and set-ups were pretty good but could have been better.... listen kid, this battle is FATHER/SON TIME! the sniper "Beam From The Top" make the scene HOT AS SUN SHINE!! *warm up* umm sorry, that was NOT A PUNCHLINE it was just to show he'd "Leave After Looks Of Danger" like cliffs, ROCKS or HUNT SIGNS... Honestly theres nothing i can say bad about these lines, everything fell into place correctly...probly thinks he a leader, SON IS FA SHOW. why you were made leader? umm FUCK, i dont KNOW but in a tourney dude tried-to "Slide Rule" then "Measured Up" & his "NUMBERS were LOW"!!... lol good set-ups and strong punches and the last line was actually funny... Nice wording and concepts were good and also nice execution...he aint supplyin a fam, he'd SELL HOME if HARMED from SHELLS BLOWN FROM ARMS so if he "In Da Cater Supplied" it's his CELL PHONE ALARM!!! (indicator)/ grizzy's bitch got me HIGH UP IN HER CHIN! lubed up, CRYIN as im IN & wit that "Cream, Ate Her Skin" till her spirits were "FLYIN IN THE WIND"!! Nice wordplay and punches... Your set-ups followed with excellent execution and nice concepts... Multies were good... These were some pretty dope lines... They didn't lack much maybe could have been worded a bit better but everything seemed on point...AT's on fiyaaa, & got CLIPS FA YALL, so if he did-fight my built "In-Sight" will "Penetrate His Life" .. no CRYSTAL BALLS!!! Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 18:50:08

Wow!!! Where the fuck is the rest of my expo lol i guess there was too much... Hold up heres the rest of it lol...... Still AFTERTHOUGHT'S VERSE.....Word, coz when SHIT BE BLOWN you "Aint Got The Balls, To Handle" like a GYPSY BROKE!!!.... Fresh concepts and punches were executed very nicely... Consistency was also not a problem for you and your multies were nice...Structure was good and i really like these lines right here they were put together nicely....talkin bout the TOOLS HE BURSTIN QUICK.. "For His Life?" dont tell me his gauge SOON to HURT ME BITCH coz he wouldnt be "Twenty Four wit A Twelve" if the DUDE WAS "THIRTY SIX"!!! (Grizz=24yrs)/ reppin Detroit, hustlin? he in BED NOW, GET UP! that must be why "D Gradin Low" .. youz a LET DOWN NIGGA!!... That 24 with a 12 line was hot... Your other lines were decent nothing to creative but still nice and one line had me laughing a little.. Punches were good, Execution was decent, and multies were fine... Structure was ok and concepts were ok to good...so bout now he should "Dip, Out" coz im SPARKIN w/ SHOTS pull them "Chips Out Ya Bag" then stop ya HEART WHEN i POP or leave him "After A Jaw Surgery" & that wont be the only time "eat reGARDED AS SOFT"...Excellent closer... Wording was on point, references were strong and execution was also strong... Nice punches... Multies were good... Now Ima read this one more time then drop a vote cuz this a little to close call right now cuz both killed it... Both were very consistent so my vote is based off the cleaner/easier read... Damn!! That took forever.. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 18:53:38

...i'll be coming back to drop a fair. hot shit fellas Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 21:35:39

both had some damaging puns at times. the distillery line by grizz was a good little face punch to start things off. goliath line i thought wasnt really working. the african line was nice but the multis before it werent hitting. overall nice solid pun though. paralyzed wordplay got you back in the right mode. the multis following were very nice and the puns hit. Flintsone line was illin. bam bam line as well. rest of the verse was solid although the lines following the CSI line slightly dropped off in power. overall a Vet verse very nice. AT- nice wordplay with the opener but no real pun just self hype. walkman line was good and the following line as well...solid start. next line wasnt bad. hide and seek line wasnt hittin. report card line was nice. the grizzly line was a good one. picking up steam...i like the "sign" pun, swag is noticed. the numbers line was a good jab. the indicator line wasnt working for me. and the cremate line too...just seems so forced. crystal ball line put it back on track., following line was hot as well. the 12/24 line was solid. the degrading line was hot. closer was ok. Overall: VERY close battle here I feel both had high moments and lows. I think the intensity of ones puns were just a tad heavier. good spar and a great read, one of the best battles I've read all year. props to both. high 9's for both Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-26 23:24:56

Excellent punch lines. One just edged it Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-27 01:39:48

CLASSICK u BASTIDS!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-27 02:23:16

dope battle, both respect for both rappers, keep goin both of yaz.. no disrespect to GrizzEAT but i vote for AfterThought Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-27 03:17:17

im gonna breakdown what i thought were some of the highlights, and lowlights..ok, lets start wit grizzeat;first bar setup started out decent, first two multis in scheme were relevant, leadin up to a nice concept, to flip... next bar, nice jab wit the users reflection flip, like the accompanyin name play, wit ale, didnt care too much for the goliath, wordplay, the read felt forced imo... especially the af ah david..if you worded the concept differently, maybe if you negated tryin to make a wordplay outta goliath, and focused on the afa david,it wouldve landed harder... in this case you were tryin too much.. keep it a bit simpler, less is more.. ok the RAPPIN IT FUROCIOUS multi scheme started decent wit the moving school concept, but then started to become irrelevant filler imo.. especially wit the 'para lies' wordplay that you seemed to throw in out of the blue, which made it feel forced.. shouldve worked on building up to the natural erosion, which was a nice flip, but lacked a relevant setup.. again less is more, you got caught up a bit tryin to impress wit too many complex multis in that one bar.. ok the rock rollin attire, what did you mean? are you sayin that he wouldnt rock=wear attire=clothes? this concept seems vague, imo..and i translate that as you sayin he doesnt wear nice clothes, which is fairly weak imo.. the flip was nice wit the flintstones, but because of the irrelevant buildup, talkin bout he never shot nines to clothes, made it lose alot of steam...ok, moving along to the 'a part ment for boi', was nice wordplay but the wording was kinda weak.. was this a personal?was after thought turned down as a leader of a crew?end was decent ... ok on to after thought, first bar, nice start, very little filler, relevant wit lightup, towards dawn wordplay.. so far so good.. , then continues to another good concept to flip, walkman taple..didnt care for the heavenly songs startplayin, wouldve used that flip as a jab, and finish the scheme, bar wit the walkman tape. the name covered flip was okish,report card flip again was simple and fairly decent..headin over to the eagles flip, nice jab to start to bar, though as you progressed to bare wit guys,are you sayin bare= broke when wit his friends, or in comparison to other guys? and the SEE HIM ON HIS GRIZZLY, couldve been worded better, i would ve said,the only reason he SEES HIMSELF A GRIZZLY.... even then that multi is mismatched wit the rest of ya scheme.. wit 'griz, not rhymin wit friend, or bent...liked the setup towards, the rocks or huntsign, good somewhat short setup, to the point.. also liked the slid rule, references..wasnt feelin the 'indicater' wordplay, felt forced...why does it feel forced?you ask.. well what is he catering? or supplying? and earlier you said he aint supplying a fam..wtf's that sopposed to mean? he not supplyin a friend?family? couldve said he aint supplyin dem snaps, and in di cater,was that sopposed to be cater=to provide services.. or a reference to lil waynes da carter? vague wording imo.. thats why the whole wordplay felt forced and thrown in just to make ya line more technical,and fancy..moving towards the end, i was feelin the gypsy balls lines.. good ish... in the end grizz came wit alot of good flips, just need to work on not overdoin the schemes, in ya buildups, wordin issues tend to be a problem at times.. afta, you also came wit some nice flips=punches as well... not really much as far as improving.. bars werent runon, just enough multis, ..so my vote goes to the one that was more well rounded in all aspects, flow, to relevant builds, to multischeme, to concept to flip...on a consistent level.. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-27 06:06:19

this such a damn classick!! shoutout to both my dudes, both came hard and did their own thing! -Classick Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-27 10:23:26

Can't call it. =O I'll be back Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-27 11:58:07

Fv, gb, 313, d style kills it Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 03:49:02

My problem here was with tensing and wording. For example Grizzeat, and affadavit isn't a lie, it's an oath, a contract that states you aren't lying. Don't use words you don't know the meaning of dude. AT, your opening scheme bugged me too, "make your days end when the don is raising" is a semantically null statement. At the end of the day the sun sets, the dawn rises at the beginning of the day, meaning it just doesn't make any sense. HOWEVER, there was some great redemption later with some bery smooth wording and some nice haymakers to boot from each. A good battle, but be careful for stupid mistakes like those, especially so early on. They just really set a low standard and tone from the off for me. Always fair, PYRO. Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 04:00:39

both were dope fv always Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 06:08:37

High 8s for both the piff came later on in the battle though...fair is in Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 08:44:08

PAY THA FUK ATTENTTION.... DAVID IS TO GOLIATH AS LIE TO TO AFFIDAVIT, DAMN:c'monson: Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-28 08:49:37

Hot ass battle, good job, fv Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 10:02:35

sick Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-28 20:22:39

wow. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-29 00:24:49

good job.... so said the slob who's bobbin to a chopper or glock with the tick tock screamin YOUR OUT OF TIME, Oh Shit Im OUT MY MIND GIVIN IN When Each TWO Of These MEN Suchk More SKIN Then JENNA JAME-A-SIN, Look At #14's ANUS AND THEN PRETEND The Dude Is Still Sick As Beer N GIN, Hes Fuckin QUEER And THEN, Bitch Ima GEAR IN SPIN, Watch Me TURN The EARTH With Such CERTAIN I LAND A PERFECT SERMON And START BERZERKIN Through CURTAINS Like The End Of Shows Is PERCHIN Above Your HURTIN Heart When Its SWIRVIN Through Traffic And Askin Why The Fuck Your Still Here ACTIN Like Your PASSION Is Still SCRATCHIN The Surfice Of A Purpose.. Give It Up You Two HERMITS Are Still LEARNIN To Achieve WORTHNESS... lol just kiddin kitttens. :) 10/10 Voted: GRizzEAT / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-29 02:29:24

Whatta classick... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-03 02:44:19

fly vote has been infracted. - RULE. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-29 15:22:02

FlyGhtZ vote removed Comment Only
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