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B U R D E N B U R D E N is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!

(19%)

The Raw Talent

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Tha B L A C K - S H E E P

Reppin: Los Angeles, California, United States

Black Book (81%) WINNER

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: GrandScheme Shogunate

Reppin: Georgia

B U R D E N

Yo It's ClassicK!!! U wanna throw hands? Nah there's no way that BOOK is SO RAW because it'll only take 1 HOOK to YO JAW to leave u ''Shaking & Worried'' like 1 bad LOOK at THE LAW/ Look Mr. big shot You'll be ''Lucky To Get A Vote'' cause you're a LIGHTWEIGHT TO PARS, plus ''You've Been Here Long Enough'' for us to know you don't FIGHT GREAT 'N' BARS lets just say one minute you'll TRY to WIN THE GAME then the next you're CRYING IN THE RAIN? wtf!!!! Either you have issues or should stop LYING IN THE GAME because we ain't BUYING INTO LAMES who's skill level has ''More Ups And Downs'' then FLYING IN A PLANE!!!!!/ Listen you can ''Throw Them Jabs All Day''... but fact is you LACK STEAM you FOOL & wouldn't be ''Running With Your Crew'' if you were on a TRACK TEAM for SCHOOL!/ (Weak Ass Mu'fucker!!) Ayo this bitch keeps ''Taking L's And Never Leaves Home'' so WHEN IS THIS CLOWN ever going to ''Up His Game, Stop Taking Shit'' and get a WIN IN HIS TOWN? When is he going to LEARN TO FREE?? Stop being a bitch and BURN A TREE?? When will he get a life & stop trying to TURN LB into a MURDER SCENE... put in some ''Actual Work On The Streets'' n fucking EARN A G!!!/ Lets Goooo!! G'luck home boi!

Black Book

It's caterpillars into a jar if YA OUT TRAPPIN'. Lol. Ya like the fat kid in gym.. never hustling to make THE CLOUT HAPPEN. "So it's ironic how ya name's Verbs" & ya ain't ABOUT ACTION!/ Who is the real G.O.A.T. is a question that OFTEN IS FACED. & he's never in the running, he's a ROTTEN DISGRACE. So this "mutt better takeoff" cuz he ain't gotta DOG IN THIS RACE!/ You'll never write SCRIPTURES THAT THE HARDEST. It's time for ya to "face the music" like PICTURES OF THE ARTIST!/ You'sa small prick..an ASIAN'S COCK..so ya better hope that ya stone cold like when a CAVEMAN'S HOT, or I'll have a "Hell of a time" w/out SATAN'S CLOCK! I'll hit ya w/ bigger force than what made the HAITIANS ROCK. & I can't wait..I got no PATIENCE, OCK. I'll be in a "position to kill ya" like a HANGMAN'S SPOT!/ Thinking his & my RANK THE SAME? Psh. I'll get a TANK TO FLAME till this "jawn, Mad, done"..& this AIN'T A GAME!(John Madden)/ This is an easy win..a GENTLE BREEZE..Cuz no one ever gave his style thought, no MENTAL STEEZE. His bars far from dope, they keep "blow out ya nose" like a SIMPLE SNEEZE!/ He doesn't deserve to live..YA GONE DEAF? Haven't ya heard he doesn't deserve anything BEYOND DEATH? The best treatment he'll get is when I "feed MV pee" like LEBRON's CHEF!(MVP)/

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Battle started: May 18^th 2012 at 18:36
Challenger joined: May 19^th 2012 at 10:13

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-05-19 10:13:47).

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Wizdumb Basic Member	Better concepts, wordplay, creativity and structure took this one, but both had some pretty dope lines to be real. Solid read here yo. FVs in Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-19 11:30:54
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Claaaaaaassick! Comment Only Posted on: 2012-05-19 14:57:54
swiftkeys Banned	i think one was better wit the ideas Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-19 15:58:54
Apollyon <AC's>	Concealed expo... One came with alot of punches and had good multies but lacked creativity... He also had some average set-ups which led to an average execution... Concepts were decent but were executed poorly... The other also had alot of punches and good multies and had some good concepts but set-ups were weak... There would have been some excellent executions there if set-ups were worded better.... Neither impressed and seemed to be on the same level.. This was a coin flip decision for me... Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-20 12:58:39
HeliO	both came with it on held his concepts and knew how to build bars better no h8 honesty the policy Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-20 18:06:30
Tony The TYGER Live Battler	good battle no h8 Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-20 19:53:13
B U R D E N <TBS> The Raw Talent	lol you don't wanna sway but that's what you did yo. ^ Comment Only Posted on: 2012-05-20 22:55:49
Arsoni5t <EOD> Basic Member	FAIR, VB...PUNCHES TOOK THIS ONE ~1~ Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 00:53:36
Jay-Day Basic Member	g Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 09:37:08
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	Seen better from both.. really played ish from both. One had less played bars tho. Lets up the creativity fellas. Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 10:09:48
Ill Phenom	Verbs: opener not much creativity here. Just blantant below par punch IMO.. Def come alot stronger on the opening lines as the reader you want me to lock in. Not lose sight of the verse in the first lines... Lotta just multi's typa slaps towards your opponent nothing strong.. no build up to punch until the ups and downs line.. "running with your crew" line same expo I have for your opener.. Closer wsa a little btter. Like the get a a life and stop trying to turn lb into a murder scene. Thought alot more could have been built off that. Def could have been a heavy weight concept there. Overall stay up. Alot work def has to be done, but you can tell the pieces are there... Book: Opener kind of slow build up. Didn't get me into the zone and the nameplay and punch was the obvious that we all knew was coming... "mutt better takeoff" line was mehh IMO... "face the music" and "hell Of A Time" just kept the consistancy level of throwing punches alive. Punches were Average at best, if not below because of the concepts used.. "hangman" line okay, The john maddon wordplay was forced IMO and could have been worded alot better.. "blow out ya nose" line was cool, liked it. Closer concpet was cool, punch wasn't heavyweight though. Consistant verse w/ punches and build ups every bar. Felt a lack of concepts and aggerssion here. Verse was very passive. Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 11:10:05
oneshotpaddy	fair vote is in, good battle felt one had better punches Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 18:37:10
RoyalDaSquadren Basic Member	Gb,nice shit black book Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-21 22:48:11
Joey Krack Exclusive Member	Both verses was peachy no lie, but I'm giving this to Book after reading it about 3 times some of his punchlines connected more honestly. Dont like it ? Sue me... Voted: B U R D E N / Black Book Posted on: 2012-05-22 10:22:07


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