Fuck DPS Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-17 17:41:08

Kiss the ring famo, DPSET! You already know, my dude. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-17 18:47:59

D-D-D-DPSet Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-17 19:36:32

Votes in. Already expoed. Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-17 21:00:32

Talk; tidy, comical, nice punches, good wording, nice structure and consistent. Something was missing though and I don't know what it is, it was good but it's not of the standard I normally see from you. Maybe you needed to attack Fiji more but didn't want to because he's DPS. Entertaining verse though! Fiji; yeah you've stepped up, sure. Vocabulary on a new level, okay scheme but lost me in places but clean most the time, good concepts and some fresh lines I havent seen before, think you could have been a bit more personal, more creative style than I usually seen from you and fairly complex. Overall; one didn't come as hot as I expected, and the other came slightly better. Fair vote is in. Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-18 07:06:13

one had some old concepts that hit harder to me... other had cool ideas maybe execution i wasn't really feeling Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-18 14:36:25

H,m, this was a very good read was feeling both verse's both had some played concepts first verse the left and all right shit done seen that a few times now like the readings twisted line creative and a few of your other lines where nice flow was real smooth throughout the whole verse props OSA your verse wasn't catching the flow as much as the first verse although felt the f bra wordplay was forced and didn't flow as nicely as other finisher was nice with the t in the dirt liked that all In all this was a nice battle just felt like one was getting to personal and lost track of punches and hitting them where as the mother came with good flow good delivery and a smooth verse 9's on this FV as always .:X:. Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-18 18:29:55

gb Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-18 22:55:58

votes in Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-18 23:13:00

dope battle... both came wit nice flow alot of complex schemes... one tho had a few more concepts landing due to them being written alot cleaner... the other didnt consistently hit.. a few was nice. but some felt forced imo...setups were nice and relavent on both sides... Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-19 01:36:06

Dead.Poets. Mufucka!! Amity's a little bitch Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-19 11:13:05

sick battle no h8 Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-20 09:55:36

FULL BREAKDOWN AFTER THIS CIGARETTE... TalkSick : Il crunch this TUCAN "FRUIT" THROUGH AND THROUGH widda mean 16 this DUDE HANDS YOU! Less face it!...Osa couldnt "handle bangin bars" in the BLUE MAN GROUP all rockin FU MANCHU'S! (Its just TOO DAMN TRUE) Fire!! Wording was on point which helped execute some nice punches and the Tucan fruit shit was somewhat funny... Fresh concepts, multies were of course good, and structure was on point... Fact is that no one knows who this "OSA" NOOBIE IS, Yall make me wanna FOLD THIS ROOKIE QUICK, I mean my "clips still good" like OLDER MOVIE SCRIPTS, good enough to "Open him up to expose his future" on some FORTUNE COOKIE SHIT... Set-ups were nice and so were the metaphors... Creativity was within these lines and execution was delivered nicely... Concepts once again seemed to be fresh... If you "Flew/Flu in the military", You should know that "SICK'LL PUMP LEAD, kiddo you aint SPITTIN ROUGH TEXT! Idk i must have been SIPPIN ON HEN cause I "told ya you was sleepin at the top" like tha PRISON BUNK BEDS! (You know your SILLY DRUNK WHEN!! sheesh!)... Wordplay was rather basic, Wording was on point, metaphors were ok even though the concept of sleeping on top bunk is a little played, i feel your execution made it to be a nice punch...Just like a "pervert wit credit" il only SETTLE FOR "HOT-LINES" I mean my "readings are twisted" like da' DEVIL WIT COCKED EYES, so when the METAL AND GLOCKS FLY i could "chop the whole left side of you"....and youd still NEVA' BE "ALL RIGHT"... Ha that hot-lines line was nice... Set-ups and delivery was on still point here... Like Verity said comical, i felt the funniness in a couple of these lines (Hot-lines & Devil with cocked eyes)... Structure was good and creativity was in these lines... Famoose, the Dps "line up" sure as shit aint "DRAWN" TA' OSA, MY DUDE and if this Lizman-lookin fuck get close? Il PALM DA' TOASTA' TO SHOOT wit bullets that'll "straight touch this faggot", i call it da' JOHN TRAVOLTA MASSEUSE!... Rather basic closer but the punches were still strong.. Not too creative but nothing ordinary... Set-ups were good and delivery was strong..... FIJI OSA : Since he 'come in' w/ 'pussy lines' I'll pad-up this MENSTRUAL NOTATION! An this 'would be fine' but ya PENCIL ROTATION proves all you 'thought up' .. lacking MENTAL OVATION so if Talk think this a 'walk in the park' watch 'Trigga get held-up' and wasted in a CENTRAL LOCATION... Vocab was on point along with good concepts and great wording... Set-ups were executed nicely, honestly these lines seemed flawless... Why are you eager to meet the reaper? Don't 'lie there' like you not my cheerleader w/ ya STREAMERS BAND POM-POMS an STATE RALLIES BITCH its ok to act-sick but kill the 'black gig' cos what you 'expresso' CREAMER BRAND, GUAM BROMME an TASTE BADLY SHIT!... This definitely did not lack creativity at all... The punch landed excellently from start to finish these bars were great and the concepts were fresh as fuck...Rhetorikal question .. why is 'talk progressed to lead' but no PRODUCTION SHOWN? . Teach me 'Scripts' but what happens if I 'End Peace Talk' an INSTRUCTIONS THROWN which results to me BUSTING DOMES since yer 'Mount ta Fiji is Ashes' it's nature's design he had to get 'RUPTION ON' JUS FUCKING DON'T we see the 'F Bra/effort' but ya fillers 'B Cups' ya needa REDUCTION HOLMES butt Ver is good 'FA SUCKING BONES' an since her path stopped ima 'work her' afta i put the 'Barrel to ya side' no CONSTRUCTION ZONES!... Once again vocab was excellent and multies were nice... Metaphors were great, setups were well executed and concepts were still fresh as fuck... Consistency is being shown... Punches were delivered with strength... Since you wanna be 'Remembered for dreaming' if i see KING, FIRING an BLAST SIR CROWN.. I rose early to sleep you w/ 'birdies n eagles' ensuring you surley 'below par' so ima put'T in the dirt' when i 'SWING IRON this MASTER ROUND!'... Strong closer... Wording was strong, set-ups were strong, punches were strong, metaphors were strong... Concept wasn't to fresh but was still executed strongly... Wow this is one of the hottest battles I've seen in days... Both came strong and delivered... I would honestly say one edged it here... Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-20 11:26:18

Sick battle but i was laning towards ones punches ait more no hate at ll fairs always tosse!!! Voted: TalkSick /
Posted on: 2012-05-20 17:02:59