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Apollyon (67%) WINNER
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Reppin: Barrow, Alaska, United States
Shezso Eu (33%)
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Reppin: Dallas, Texas, United States



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Battle started: May 11th 2012 at 20:02
Challenger joined: May 11th 2012 at 20:54


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-05-11 20:54:01).

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ClassicK Posted on: 2012-05-13 17:35:22 Private Message Óðinn

 
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Gb. Fv Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-11 21:04:50 Private Message T_Black

Vivid_Aka_Noah
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#NOHATEATALL Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-11 21:13:21 Private Message Vivid_Aka_Noah

Apollyon
<AC's>

^^ Look what the dog brought in.. 2 of them... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-11 21:53:09 Private Message Apollyon

Apollyon
<AC's>

You should battle Verity Ana or PrinceSt or whatever i should call you and i swear i want these no namers votes deleted but fuck it... I'll just go drop a Gb Fv and #NOHATEATALL on their battles if they even have any... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-11 22:12:43 Private Message Apollyon

Wizdumb
Basic Member

The winners opener was pretty well structured with one decent concept, despite some pretty forced multis. But the final punch in the first scheme was weak, with a sloppy setup and poor delivery. The next bar was again structured pretty well with some decent internal multi's, but the first punch couldve been worded better for a stronger impact and the final 'golden showers' concept was pretty bad to be real. It looks like you were struggling to find a punch to fit the wordplay and ended up forcing out a pretty poor bar. Be careful w/ that. The final bar in your drop was again, structured ok, but the concepts and execution were off. 'herd of vicious writs' was very poorly worded filler, and the final punchline was lacking. The concept, once again was decent, but the wording of the setup & the punchline itself reduce the quality of each punch. Work on setup consistency & relevance and youll excel. The losers opener flowed pretty well and the wp was alright with a pretty good final punch & decent nameplay, but i felt after this bar the quality of their drop plummeted. The following punch was hella juvenile with next to no impact & an extremely basic concept. Honestly i think the simplicity in this verse worked against you. Try to steer clear of the childish punches & youll do better. Again, the finisher was pretty weak with concepts that lacked relevance and cleverness. Overall, i felt ones bar was structurally on point, with cleaner multis, smoother concepts and better punch execution. FVs in Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-12 01:08:41 Private Message Wizdumb

Shezso Eu
<CHALKLINED>
Live Battler

i cant help the votes. and i battled that chick, she never wrote to em, aint got time for ducks. dont sway cuz u mad about votes.. chill and elt ppl say what they want. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-12 13:22:38 Private Message Shezso Eu

Apollyon
<AC's>

Are you flirting with me?? I'm taken.. Kuniiiis Mine... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-12 13:36:23 Private Message Apollyon

Shezso Eu
<CHALKLINED>
Live Battler

yuh. i spunk that ass too.. no big, ha Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-12 13:56:41 Private Message Shezso Eu

Apollyon
<AC's>

I love girl on girl action... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-12 14:04:36 Private Message Apollyon


Shawty got Class. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-13 12:31:34 Private Message GRizzEAT


PrinceS CLASSICK! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-15 13:17:20 Private Message Revan

JRocTheDevil
Basic Member

I couldnt understand princestana in some parts Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-15 18:22:04 Private Message JRocTheDevil


Fv Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-15 21:18:01 Private Message Brute

slicky
Basic Member

tight battle but winner had clearer punchlines Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-15 23:27:42 Private Message slicky

MORBSE MILLENNIA
Basic Member

Tbh I was hard on the critique here cause u 2 are more advanced. I gave the battle a 7 as a whole so the winner gets that. Voted: Apollyon / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2012-05-16 00:59:46 Private Message MORBSE MILLENNIA

 

 
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