haha you dissin.... nice lines by both, one's more funny! Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-08 14:06:42

CLASSICK u HAGGIS!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-08 14:14:09

fv Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-08 15:13:26

Full breakdown.. Naturill : bitch if ya crew lie ya ''bar be swaggin'' its cuz they a buncha BRAGGIN DOLLS that ''make less sense/cents'' than a MONDAY SALE of the SUNDAY MAIL n couldnt ''come like beast w/ fire'' developin some DRAGON BALLS!!! From the wordplay and punch of ya 1st line to the set-ups, metaphor, and punch was nicely put together.. Your delivery and execution was on point... see if they got ''thoughts of lightin up a scot'' its idolizin SUSAN BOYLE so for 'dreamin' they GANG BANGERS imma BANG ''GANGERS'' n have their ''spirits in the earth'' w/o them pourin BOOZE-IN SOIL!!.. Your first line had an excellent concept and was somewhat funny and your 2nd line was simple but it hit hard and was put together nicely... and him? he never 'wars on the streets' he jus sits in his 'HOME' DISSIN so watch me turn it to a 'DEATH MANGER w/o METH DANGER' when i 'bring dope to his crib' to leave this 'airhead' w/ his DOME HISSIN!!.. Your 1st line was simple but i liked it and your finsher was nice.. It wasn't strong as kuck but it was no where near weak... Yate : he all 'static' cuz none of his SHIT IS CLEAR!/u not REALLY TUFF, just a small SKINNY FUCK cuz from the side u DISAPPEAR!/ This bar was basic but a little funny to be honest.. The concept is weak and so is your wording and punch... mr. 'brave' can GET SUM FEAR cuz fo sum reason he aint GETTIN LAID but its all BITCHES HERE..maybe its his SHITTY FACE or SKINNY WAIST cuz it look like he dont EAT FO YEARS!.. Once again its sort of funny but weak.. ill leave this HOE CRUSHED.. told em see me at the DOE, BUT he didnt SHOW UP cuz i said MEAT ME HERE!/how u gon ask me IS HE QUEER? of course, so follow..if this nigga going FOR ya BOTTLE..hes not trynna REACH FOR BEER!/ This bar was a little better but lacked good concepts for real and the punches were way to basic... you gon SEE EM HURT..trynna BE THE FIRST to see me like a SNEAK PREMIERE!/u BEYOND GAY like BEYONCE he the only diva HERe!... Your 1st line if worded better could have been a lot nicer and your finishing line was just awful bro... This battle imo was one sided... One had witty lines, strong punches, nice metaphors and good concepts.. The other had weak concepts, weak punches, a weak metaphor or 2 and wasn't at all creative... Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-08 15:27:54

i need to expo this shit... i switched the first letter of each multi set all the way through so...braggin dolls / dragon balls ... home dissin / dome hissin etc...... PyRo...!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-08 17:12:28

D Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-09 00:00:29

Ya u needed a expo I read it over n need to switch my vote Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-09 00:07:17

nh fv NO HATE Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-09 14:50:44

ill concept got it couldve been lil better on connections decent battle Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-09 22:24:48

Claaaaaaaassick! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-10 08:38:25

c Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-10 09:08:15

shit was one sided. one was hittin harder. No hate Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-10 12:29:15

The winner had cool ideas. Overdid the concepts in some areas, but the structure is looking way better than in the past. The challenger has always had a clean/readable style, but needs to freshen up the ideas and execution. 905 of the punchlines were great setups and should have been used as such. If i had to categorize the issue ironically it would be in the structure department. good battle. fairs in. Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-10 12:35:37

Class-tho Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-10 13:01:01

tight battle no h8 Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-11 08:20:41

yaaaaaaaate Voted: ItsNaturill / Yate
Posted on: 2012-05-11 11:13:24