yous a SHOWOFF Posted on: 2012-04-20 15:04:38

Didnt Mean To Capatalize Mental Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-20 15:02:28

CLASSICK Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-20 15:07:58

gb fv vbf Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 15:54:56

I don't care if that gets deleted^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-20 16:00:23

This was actually a close ass battle i was feelin punches from both sides but you know i always gotta keep the vote fair i was leaning toward one abit more with a couple lines that took it for me!! No hate at all!! nothing but RESPECT TO BOTCH EMCEES!! GoodLuck !! Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 16:01:09

FV Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 17:25:37

GB NH FV VBF Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 19:28:50

Good ass battle. Real Talk. Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 21:00:13

smh Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-20 23:51:37

madverbs best:Dawg you needa WIPE THE TEARS.. man up! & it doesn't help when ya'll HYPE THE QUEER because truth is hes ''Light W/ Little Impact'' n i aint talkin TYPES OF BEER/ x best:88 Defeats!! You Dope?? Guess The ANSWERS BLATANT Imma HANDLE TRAYS GENTS Cuz Your 'Scripts Wouldnt Be Historical' If Your CHANTS WERE ANCIENT & Talk Bout Final Beatin Me!!! I'll Show Up In A STANCE WITH AGENTS Cuz Ma Dude Youve 'Lost More Battles' Than unlucky CANCER PATIENTS...In Others Words Rule!! Mad Acts Hard Talkin Bout GUN MOVEMENT But Really He Puts Classick 'Down A Grade' Like A DUMB STUDENT....my fav from x but x took this for me he came thorough thru out his verse steady punches that connected hard...mad you had some decent shit but u fell off in the end like u didnt wanna continue writing anymore...however, fairs in ez Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-21 11:04:52

Get bugZys voted deleted Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-21 12:45:02

damn this was a dope little battle both were on point what it came down to for me was freshness and structure of the verse fair vote as always :D Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-21 12:48:45

sick battle Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-22 10:59:16

Both nice one edged it. Fairs in. Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-23 08:39:07

Both of you have improved since I last saw your stuff. This is probably the best I've seen from MadVerbs, starting to get some of those stand-out lines. You had highlights, but you also had sections that were quite awkward with little impact: Running top spot/Lead in a race was too forced to come off as a double entendre, light w/ little impact/types of beer was also very awkwardly worded and forced... Just little things like that need to be fixed up; but dude, you really are getting the hang of constructing a punchline, just get the wording issues out of there and try to use cleaner multies, you're a bit stoppy starty at the moment. X, I've seen better from you. You had a fresh concept now and then. Drop the gunplay shit, it doesn't work for you bro, just my opinion. Mad, down and out was a little forced, but still a good idea, however, this made the following punch (Mad behind my bars) lose quality, as you repeated the same concept from a different angle, when you should have either chose one or put them both in the same punch. "Behind Bars" concept is over-used too, I feel that one should be put the sleep. That brings me to another point, you still using quite a few dusty ol' concepts: Out of this world sucks in most cases, and your angle wasn't much different to the usual use of that concept. Overall though, it was a good verse, flow was on-point for 90% of it and the multies were smooth. The closer was probably the best punch of the whole verse, keep to those fresher, effortless punches and drop the played stuff. Honest vote, respect it. Low-to-high 7s. Vitty's votey. Voted: B U R D E N / Xplissit
Posted on: 2012-04-23 10:21:01