Goodluck fam. Claaaaaaaaaaaaassick ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-11 17:24:08

FULL BREAKDOWN..... DEF THREATZ : Bitch I murder these written while the JUDGE COURT THE DATES Deaf got no time for amateurs so if your REPORTED LATE I will have MORE TO SAY that if you COMBINE TWO DICKS they will FIND YOU BITCH cus at BIRTH YOU WERE BORN THIS GAY call yourself "Afterthought" but its "Mind over matter" i leave ya HEAD OVERWEIGHED!!.... Honestly the concepts were decent but were not executed strongly... These lines seemed a little basic and your multies were fucked up... And ya punches were a little weak...... when they see your verses ALL OF EM WISH TO PUKE by the climax of ur written they PAUSE AND CLICK THE MUTE classick at rhyming? bitch the CLASS IS SICK OF YOU!!!! "locked in closed space" TRAPPED'N A DOCK i keep teh jiuces flowing like the PULSE OF AN ASTRO-NAUT fuckin make ya brain explode to death after ya CASKET DROP and thats the RESULT OF AFTERTHOUGHT!!!.... I see you picked it up right here... Your punches were definitely stronger and concepts were nice and i enjoyed the class is sick of you line also... But the only flaw i see in these lines are wording and multies are a little iffy other then that nice shit.... bitch ya still "WAITING TO BEEF" like its a BARBIE's QUE he RANGES HIS KNEES TO BARF AND PUKE he uses "lets beef" to meet guys and leave he BARN ABUSED its a "penny for every thought" but now he is CHANGES TO DIMES turning into FUCKING RETARDED DUDE!!!!... Now these lines seemed to be more on likes of filler or just way too basic... The concept wasn't good and punches were weak... wording was a little hard to understand in one spot, not sure if a typo is needed but either way the punch would still be weak......Only "deaf" get the WRITTEN SOUND IN loud enuf to fucking "CRACK YA SKUll" and its only PRACTICUL in your mind to build a brain BRIDE AROUND IT "he give so much fucking head" ur head aches to EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!! Leave ya "ass in the circus" like "ANAL WITH A CLOWN"it will freakshow when they have reatrd whose "BRAIN IS UPSIDE DOWN.... Horrible closer... Wording was terrible, punches were weak, capitalization wasn't needed in some areas(multies) and concepts were weak..... AFTERTHOUGHT : This battle will only cause you MENTAL DYSFUNCTION & you'll see "Thought Breakin Ya Dome" when WEAPONS ARE BUSTIN leavin ya fuckin "HEAD w/ CONCUSSIONS"!!/ See I can "Go Off The Top" & still GET EM TO SUFFRIN' + you? I "Wont Look Down" like im passin over the hottest, REDDEST OF FLOODINGS... A little basic in some spots and in others there were some decent punches with good concepts....Nothing to much to say about these lines but they weren't bad but they weren't impressive...... so that gat'll "Burn You When I Slide" like standin next to a "DEADLY ERUPTION"!!!/ but you? in terms of a VETERAN, FUCK IT you couldnt be "Fly & Cold Off The Top" on EVEREST, JUMPIN!!/ I'll get the BEST OF HIM, PUNCHIN & if EVER YOU FRONTIN ill pull the heat shoutin 'gimme the cash' & "Squeeze Ya Brain For The Answer" like the CLEVEREST YOUNGINS!!!.... These were some fire lines for real... Set-ups were nice, punches connected, metaphors were nice, structure was good, multies were fine..... wanted to battle, I was like what, ya immaTURITY STRIKED QUICK? but hell since "Threatz Sent, Violence Is Offered" knew i'd cause a seCURITY CRISIS!!!/ buuut fuck it, he FAKIN, HE AINT FIGHTIN coz if you "Step To Speak" FACIN MY GREAT WRITINGS? A "Tool Is Lit" & you'll "Spot Light As You Enter" like the BASICS OF STAGE LIGHTING!!!.... From start to finish these lines were decent, a little basic but still connected nicely, metaphors were on point and concepts were executed in an ok way.... im royal! & if i BEAM THE TOOL ima SHELL YA HEAD UP when Thought the "Prince Ah Pull, Some Real Shit" to make it a SCENE AT SCHOOL where you get exPELLED FOREVER... Excellent closer.... One was a little sloppy with wording and multies were forced and had weak punches with weak concepts.. The other worded there verse nicely, had nice multies, with basic and nice punches and also had fresh concepts... Votes in Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-11 18:00:45

Aight this dude ^^ covered it all.Fair vote is in. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-12 02:57:48

One took this in pretty much every catehory. Fair is tossed. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-12 03:05:37

Threatz: Opener kinda dragged. No real punch or set up that correlated to a nice punch. The Class is sick of you has been used a many times. FLow and lines did get smoother though. After that the bars started to seem like your opener were there was no strong built up punch. Just a bunch of small attempt thrown together. Alot of this tbh seemed like you were just throwing multi's togehter, w/ a punch attempt here and there. Try to focus on connecting your multi's and setups towards your punches... AT: Opener cool line if your get the connection, thought you could have played the dome/concussion a little bit better. 'burn you when i slide' was ight, so far nothing stand outish, but the consistancy is alive. next three punches picked it up a little bit, smooth reads also. the "stage lighting" and "principal" coulda been worded a bit better but i liked the concepts. Overall you kept alive consistancy although I would have liked to see some more out of the box concepts and heavier punches from you. Votes in. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-12 10:05:12

are u serious Thought? "U cudn't be fly and cold off the top on Everest jumpin'" WTF! Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-12 10:28:07

hot Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-12 19:23:24

..High 7 For the Loser IMO. Both had Nice Delivery. One Just Took It To a Fervent Extent. Nothing Bad to Say about that One. Fairs are in People. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-13 15:35:15

Fairs in the mix. This is the only battle right now that deserves to be in the hotlist. Goodluck gentleman. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-13 19:24:50

mad close, shit was tight. one just had me feelin it more, you know? Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-14 08:57:46

fv Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-14 09:22:12

yeah just required one read. Punches lack some much on one side made your verse mediocre but u got potential. Voted: Def Threatz / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-14 14:05:45