WOW. good battle fellas.. I liked the beginning of ones verse then he fell off at the end.. The other came DECENTISH at the beginning, then went HARD AS FUCK at the end and impressed me! Ones rhymes were weird to me , maybe cause of his accent, but after re-reading it to understand it correctly, i was like damn this flowed real nice.. lol but idk, both had some cool concepts, one was just better and was a funny verse too, I love a little entertainment. Hit me up if you need more of an expo or whatever but this is my fair vote , this is where im going, respect it... Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 00:08:39

HOTTI JOINT gotta Cosign a little bit^ thought Nat.cam hard at the beginning fell off a little in the middle strong finish Vit. Came hard fell off and drug out the end al little good battle GREAT IDEAS THROWN AROUND HONESTYS THE POLICY Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 10:42:57

Both came w/ solid openers here. One had some clever wordplay & a solid punch, but the other was funny as fuck w/ a nicer concept & a much harder impact. - The second punchline was a little bit forced by both, but ones was a bit more-so thn the others. The better punch had stronger multis & an overall better final impact to edge it. - The next bar was pretty dope by both, but one was funnier with smoother wording and a harder impact.. - The bar after tht was really close, but ones setup and delivery was a bit better, despite the other having smoother wordplay... - & finally the finishing punchline lol. I feel this was the deciding bar of the battle to be real. Ones setups & wording reduced the impact of their bar, despite the hella creative concept, while the other finished with a solid, clever, funny ass bar to take the win. I cant stress how close this battle was. Back & forth w/ the puns the whole time. Good shit boys. FVC's in Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 16:51:42

This was a pretty close battle but the fair vote is always tossed i was feelin one edged this no hate at all nothing but repsect to both!! Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 17:59:45

the only thing that separated you two was flow, the punches thrown were about the same yo, one edged with a smoother read, and one or two harder punches, both got creativity going, vit - id take the expos out, and some of the commas, make it read smoother, Nat- the long multis are cool, but somtime they seem a lil forced, dont stretch out the multi if you dont have to.... Monsta votes in, respect it, good shit from both creativity wise foreal, both elevatin fast. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 20:27:07

good job Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-24 21:04:56

Nat; BITTER FACTS? THIS SPITTERS WHACKER so when my CLIPPER CLAP THIS WHIPPER SNAPPER his BRITTLE BACK IS CRIPPLED FASTER than tryna RIVER DANCE W/ LIVER CANCER! --- easily the funniest line i've ever seen from you. Cracked me up, very original never seen anything like it, only criticism is you could have put more thought into the open couple multis --- the 'signs of your illness fallin off' is worse than VENERAL SCABS FLAKIN so 'stressin your nuts hangin strapped' means your GENITAL SACKS ACHIN so talkin of your 'never reachin' aint a GENERAL FAG STATEMENT when 'putin points on flesh' your 'balls dissapearin' quick as CHEMICAL CASTRATIONS! --- Your wording is showing improvement tbh, but it still needs work, you have the ability you just focus on other stuff as that's your style which is cool.. this overall bar was good.. not great, and fell of due to your cracky opener, it was just all really played but executed early well --- seems we got an english traitor w/ all us SCOTS IN YA GANG shit but if it was up to me ya wouldnt of even got a SPOT IN THE CLAN i argued w/ ask like 'how my spose to share the SQUAD W/ A MAN' who could be 'tossin a hand grenade as his dolls in a can deflate' n still not 'pull out all the STOPS W/ A BANG'! --- this was DOPE, it was quite stretched but all the multis were relevant and well executed, the personal was hilarious and the whole concept and punch was straight crack --- n those lines are LIKELY BITTEN AS YA WOULDT BARK so how'd u think u MIGHT BE VISIONED AS A SHOOTIN STAR when your 'showin signs of stoppin short' worse than HEIGHT RESTRICTIONS AT AMMUSEMENT PARKS!?! --- *sigh* yeah, the end punch was nice, but you should have saved it for somebody who we know is short, the personal held no weight at all and the build up was mediocre and slightly forced --- but removin 'vit' from 'victory' only way its 'corny' whenever 'N' GETS INVOLVED while you 'fail to be fly actin the bitch' worse than how PENGUINS EVOLVED coz you 'suck on more levels' than bitches givin HEAD AT THE MALL so if your 'holdin weight relatin to sickness' its a MEDICINE BALL! --- concept was nice but it was executed poorly to the point i think it probably went over peoples heads a bit. Luckily the end punch was dope enough to save the bar and the multis before were plausible and original so good job. OVERALL NaturILL it's the same problems coming up.. you have a verse filled with sick ideas and dope concepts and nice punches but you aren't getting all the impact you should because you need to work on your execution, that's something you should be learning from Askari because he's the readability/structur e master IMO. Like I said that, dope, fresh overly cracky verse, really solid apart from a couple flaws i've highlighted but you're deff. looking like a future threat to anybody when your verse is structured properly and polished. Great verse tbh. VITRIOL; This PUNK'S A FAKE CUNT! *BLUSHES* ... I'll throw-a-beating to your Rosy-cheeks, it ain't "Bouquet-Stealing" when this FUCKER'S TAKING BUNCHES: It's me "Wiping You Off The Face Of The Earth" W/O your MOTHER'S MAKE-UP SPONGES!! --- Nat you could learn from little Vit here, perfect execution and structure already, the whole concept tied into one bar almost perfectly... down to the actual bar, nice concept, worded well, punch was dope sauce and original, best name play i've seen you use, and best name play i've ever seen against NaturIll, you both had cracky openers --- Tsch, Nat could only have the "Hot Lines Around In This Place" if he was the CREATOR APPROVing the EQUATOR'S PLACEMENT!![HotLineS urrounding] Don't try ARRANGE A REBUKE like a DEBATOR'S STATEMENTS: If it's a win HE GAINS? IT'S A FLUKE, it's already Curtains-for-Certain , I've UPSTAGED THIS RECRUIT, it should be "Known-Among-All-The -Critics" that this was "Over-Before-It-Was- Written" like a THEATRE REVIEW!!! --- This bar was fucking long and the end punch was good and well executed, but a bit of impact was lost with the stretched-ness of it. Although, the rhyme scheme was interesting and again the whole bar flowed together, it's not like you were having random concepts and then irrelevant punches, 'good' bar overall --- What you DROP ISN'T BULKY, first off: You still bullshit 'bout being HOT WITH A COLT PIECE, I can't actually believe you THOUGHT YOU'D INSULT ME... I spose it is an insult to be dissed by "Wordplay more FORCED THAN THIS MULTI"!! --- this was FRESH as fuck, not seen anything like it, ever. Funny.. original.. personal hit hard because it's true lmao.. just a perfect style that would work in any battle environment (written, track, audio, live) simple bar with a LOT of impact, you should adopt this style and do more like it IMO --- Hahaaaa, all truth, you getting "Sonned By Me", so you just meeting YA DOOM AS A MARTYR, (refers to the previous punch) ... see, I "Made A Mistake And Beat You" W/O ABUSE FROM YA FATHER!!! (That's MAMA and PAPA mentioned btw, watch this...) It's APPARENT THIS FAKE KID HAS DUMB RHYMES, so stop trying, turn around and look at yourself: Your PARENTS CREATED THE PUNCHLINE!!! --- had spells of very played concepts there, you executed it in a comedic way which did make it entertaining and interested and the end punch was good but this was probably the weaker part of your verse.. saved by execution and character. OVERALL; another (mostly) fresh verse. Funny, extremely entertaining, personals were strong and relevant, structure and wording was dope, your style is fresh and original... work on consistency.. I can tell you make yourself laugh when you're writing your battle, so be your own critic and double check everything in your verse will come off how YOU want it to. BATTLE OVERALL; So fucking entertaining, I couldn't tell whether this was a J.O.B battle or not, because you both managed to bring comedy AND hard bars. That deserves props. Probably the best battle i've seen in a while and it's annoying how slept on this is. Going to throw some 9s to get this secured on the hot list but you practically deserve them anyway. Deff. some of the best material i've seen from you Nat, and Vit i've seen better consistency-wise but this whole style you've bought has made it one of my favourite verses from you. Great battle. Peace cunts. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-25 08:29:23

I agree with Erupt too, forgot to say; Vit you wasting space with all of those expos within the verse (the stuff in brackets is cool sometimes) but not the [HotLineSurrounding] etc, breaks the verse up too much Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-25 08:33:27

NatrurIll: Opener line kinda basic IMO. Decent line and punch nothing more or less. Next lines up to the "ball disappearin" had some cool concepts in it, def felt some could have been worded and built up a bit better for a smoother punch but it did keep the consistancy alive.. Best line I've read so far is the "pull all the stops w/ a bang" concept was dope, line was a bit stretched but I liked the punch there, original... "Stoppin Short" line was cool.. N gets involved and the Medicine ball punches was def a nice way to close it out. IMO felt you started off slow and then came on more towards the end. Overall I would say as to improve work on your wording a bit, and stray away from random multi's that keep the scheme alive and stay away from repetitive simile transitions I did pick up on the quick as, worse than, worse, worse than, throughout your verse... ViTRiOL: Build up on the opener a bit slow, but the structure and connection there makes up for that, liked the concept and the punch... Equators placement line wasn't too strong felt those were one of the lines you liked the concept and through it in your verse despite the fact it may or may not hit, also kinda just ehh to me up to the Theatre Review, that line was ight. The long build up took away from the punch somewhat but it did hit and get concept creds... Forced multi line was dope and flowed smoothly.. liked the closing concpet thought it was a bit worded off though.. I read it a few times and the big punch factor didn't really come in to me. Overall both have there ups and downs here and it is a really close battle because of this. I felt one had a few more lines that connected in my way as I was reading it.. Goodluck to both.. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-25 14:18:46

Good Shit From Both.... Winner Took this with some better punches and multies,.. Fairs In!.. VoTe BaCc... Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-26 01:21:31

ones verse started off very nicely and then went downhill but picked back up towards the ending. other had a solid opener and his middle was pretty good, closer was alright. i think one just barely edged this. close shit and good read fellas. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-26 14:46:56

impressed by both, came down to preference in the end, felt their were less iffy concepts on onw side. the tighter structure gets this one. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-26 23:16:46

good battle Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-27 05:07:32

...I have No VP so Who Gives a fuCc about my Vote. But I Enjoy Ones Verse More. Executed Well And had a Dash Of Comedic Delivery. Fairs are in Regardless. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-28 02:54:10

Haha looks like this is tied Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-28 10:10:23

nice battle boyz Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-28 11:23:31

3-5 deleted smh lol Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-28 12:55:42

Man. Holla at me. Votes in. Voted: ItsNaturill / ViTRiOL
Posted on: 2012-04-28 12:59:41

Ended on a hate vote. Damn fucking dickhead. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-28 15:46:31