:Phroxen: The card/poker ish has been done loads of times, but Phroxen you had a fresh spin on it, good shit... Some pretty nice set ups through out your verse leading to some really nice punches. all round pretty solid verse. :NaturIll: An enjoyable read no doubt, but (imo) lot of the bars could have been replaced, some were real nice others seemed like they were there to fill the space. :Overall: this was deff an entertaining battle from both here & an enjoyable read. Fairs in, Fuels out. Posted on: 2012-04-02 11:21:53

entertaining battle here but i feel one came up better with the concepts and the wording of it...the other had good bars also but felt like he could of done better with what he had...but still really enjoyable Posted on: 2012-04-03 15:08:39

both 6-6 votes have been removed.... Posted on: 2012-04-03 21:19:46

expo , eric claptons son fell out an open window, au is the element for gold on the periodic table,shamu was a huge old wrestler.....PyRo!!! ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-01 12:05:56

Phroxen; Gunplay: If you claimin you "Hold-em" I'll do the same and "DRAW TOO" ..& after I "fold"-him I'LL PROVE that flowin ain't ya "STRONG SUIT" --- This was dope tbh, I’m surprised nobody else done it before. I think you had room for a few more card references in there.. but you probably wanted to keep it short, to the point with good wording and impact. Probably favourite couple lines of the battle.--- ..get the RIVER REFERENCE? You get SWIMMIN LESSONS in an INTERSECTION w/ stop-n-go karate-pro chops-n-blows till ya INNER SECTIONS lookin like sloppy-joe DINNER SECONDS!--- nice scheme, good punches caused a nice impact.. people might say it was filler but tbh I was feeling it, the swimming lessons/intersection s shit was comical--- & that oddly-shows my SPIT'S THE FRESHEST coz to "Brush up against these Caps" was a "Reach from the start" like beGINNER STRETCHES! so I'm sayin this "cat's trash" .. ya "delivery is garbage" ..get the LITTER REFERENCE? --- Kept the scheme up well, like the ‘reference’ repetition, shit sounds like it would work in a live battle, nice technique. I think the concept lacked slightly here, but made up for in other areas.. cats trash/delivery garbage quite weak, but saved by wording and a nice final punch --- Oh? You grippin the SMITH N WESSON? The "Worlds Best" at "Arm& Hammers?" If I ate what you tossed in that box, it'd be PISS INFESTED SHIT FOR BREAKFAST! I said "BITCH, YOU GET THIS LITTER REFERENCE?!" --- again nice scheme and repetition of that reference shit. Smith an Wesson bit may have been filler, but was feeling the rest --- Your whole STINT'S PATHETIC, a buncha CORNY JOKES & GUN BARS that are more "SUB PAR" than fill-ins for the MORNING SHOW that RUSS STARTS. --- good personal, liked it…--- This wouldn't "aMountin-Riding" if you ONLY "SPOKE" in SUNN TZARS ..emptying your "Head Cavity" but don't think a "CROWN" IS LIKELY ..fuckin SHROUDED BLIND GEEKS think you got the CLOUT TO SPITE ME when the same kids don't know about the AMOUNT YOU BITE ME! Right, "Gnat?" (Well, if you're COUNTIN LINE TWEAKS I've ROUTED SLIGHTLY & removed CROWDED RHYME SCHEMES to resemble the way a ROUNDED MIND THINKS. ;) ez --- left the last few bars together because it all went together really nicely, feeling the mountain/spoke play, fresh. The last few lines were a bit lighter than the rest of your verse, but were personal and worded perfectly with good readability and good enough impact. Punch wise I think you had a few K.O punches, a few different techniques featured throughout and where you lacked punches in certain areas, other things made up for it. Dope verse tbh!! MID **** Naturil; blam play? damn straight!i came STRAPPED TO BRAWL,TECH LASER, 2 CLIPS so if this FAGGOTS ALL VEXED LATER,GOOD SHIT coz i'l 'clap his team' before '2 in phro to the back of the dome' quick as BASKETBALL SPECTATOR LOO TRIPS!!!--- okay nice opener, I think you could have executed better but conceptually sound and the final punch was nice enough to make up for average wording and build up --- fuck... i'll leave this 'kid w/ his frame open' after 'droppin storys' coz if he TRY N NEAR THE 'LEGEND' impact wil have him 'DIE IN STREET FA MESSIN' so when this 'star clapped n son falls' his whole crew CRYIN TEARS IN HEAVEN!!!( storeys, ledge end, clapton)--- this was an awesome line, nice way of tying the concept into the hole bar.. dropping stories/die in streets/star clapped/son falls/ and then the final tears in heaven punch was dope, one of the best lines of the battle. Again though, ‘build up’ (excuse the pun) has room for improvement--- plus i FEAR HE'S PROBZ DISABLED thats why i got some QUERIES FOR HIS FABLES coz hows he spose to 'chart substance' n BEAT ME DROPPIN STRAIGHT SKILL when the only time 'elements say you gold on paper' is on the PERIODIC TABLE!!(elements au)--- This was played tbh, your wording has stepped up here though and probably saved the bar. The periodic table gag is deff. a used punch, but your build up and shit has improved, and the end punch was nice, conceptually sound and it’s not your fault and it’s played, I believe that you wouldn’t have seen it before and you put your own spin on it so good job. --- plus its 'heavier when my team get involved' than TAGGIN SHAMU ON THIS ROOKIE they bring 'heat off this scale ' CLAPPIN YA CREW FROM THA TOOLIES 'snatchin flames next to p' quick as a DRAGON TATTOO ON HIS PUSSY!!!(snatch n flames next to pee ;)) --- something I picked up earlier, STOP SAYING ‘PLUS’ lmao, you started your last bar with ‘plus’ as well, and ‘plus’ and ‘coz’ feature a bit much here. Aside from that, DOPE concept, very fresh haven’t seen anything like it before.. The build up was nice, the whole Shamu and heavy team build up was original and effective so well done --- jeeez.. the 'noise this girl fakes' worse than when DRAMA QUEEN SHOW SCREEN CHICKS YELL so no way NAT'LL SEE PHRO SQUEEZE CLIPS,HELL coz when it comes to 'straps n holdin weight' his 'yellow belly buckles under pressure' worse than a JAPANESE OBESE BITCHS BELT!! --- I like this, as a final bar it was good probably one of your strongest… The second and final multie was dope, I think you might tend to rush the first multie and go from there, noticed it a few times, it was nice and it worked but I think you could have come up with something better, however.. the whole concept and punch was well thought out and worked well. Overall apart from one of your lines.. your verse was a lot stronger conceptually. Which makes the final vote a really tough one. I think you still need to work on your wording, and if you can build up with better multies you’ll be knocking out heavyweights all over the site… but as of now you rely on your concepts (which does work and pay off) and you do have nice multies but theres a lot of room for improvement in other areas.. (readability, wording, build ups) MID/HIGH **** Dope battle guys. Fair vote is in. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-01 13:51:07

Hot battle. I don't wanna do my normal line-for-line breakdown, as it will definitely sway in this case, despite being such a close battle, I felt both were consistently equal for the majority of their verses, but I noticed one had a real negative moment when it came to wording and concepts: Of course, both had a few scratches that could have been worked out, but one really hurt their own verse with a certain line: It sort of knocked their consistency off, and it somewhat crashed. Both had some real dope content here, I loved Phroxen's conversational swag and the fact that we reverbed a concept, which was extremely unpredictable and original. NaturIll was on his normal style, with the usual out-of-the-box concepts. As I said, very close, I just felt one's verse was closer to consistent throughout than the other. Always fair. PM for a more in-depth expo. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-01 17:00:28

Ima keep it simple. Im going with the verse I liked more. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-01 18:21:14

I swear I wanted to put an expo but then I saw these so nvm...gd battle fv. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 08:46:50

im tellin you... ROTY 2012 Final preview. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-02 09:41:49

One had dope concepts with a fresh and original execution and kept up good rhyme schemes throughout. The other had stronger concepts but had some wording issues. Fairs in. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 11:41:41

One edged this out Fv!!! Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 18:13:25

mines in Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-02 21:06:45

Get that shit deleted ^ Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 21:43:45

damn! fv vb Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 22:42:44

so hard to choose...but ima go with the one whose concepts where a bit more my taste than the other....hwever gb both came hard fv in Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-02 23:23:01

fv both were fire. either way, but one felt smoother. respect Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-03 05:12:38

Feel like one lost for forced multies, while the other was more on point. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-03 08:10:56

I felt that one's verse connected better conceptually with a cool spin on internal structure. The challenger had some niice lines, but came up short as the verse went on. Fairs in. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-03 11:39:33

Of course the PM box is open for expos if you'd like. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-03 11:40:03

meh Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-03 18:51:03

both came dope, the thing I like about prox verse is his flow and relevance in setups that continued like a story... equipd wit flips that didnt feel forced..def soul khanesque, wit the litter reference ,nat I also enjoyed ya verse. flips for the most part was nice wit exception of periodic table which is hella played... my only complaint is you tried to get very complexd wit your multis which in turn made certain rhyme sets seem forced, and not sound like natural informal speech..ex. drama queen show screen chicks yell....this looks like you threw a bunch of words together to complete the multi..anyway gb.but one came more polished.fv Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 00:33:50

did you really have to put all that explanation? lol Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 03:14:40

lol..yeah..dude..its called an explained vote..unfortunately majority of this site doesnt,do that except the fvc and a few others.. just be glad I didnt break it down line for line... lmao Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 04:38:03

this was a really dope battle, both came with that kinda fire that cant be put out. Tight yooo Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 07:59:03

yea Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 10:56:49

one rhymed god with multies other TRIED to rhmye things...but didnt go to well fair vote Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 11:38:54

clapton line took it..seen better from phrozen.fv. Voted: Phroxen / ItsNaturill
Posted on: 2012-04-04 11:47:28