Digging ones concepts and execution more. PM for a detailed expo. Fairs In. Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-03-31 16:59:43

yeh i agree^^ ones boths multis were kinda off and the others structure was all over the place kinda hard to pick a winner , but i have my vote FAIR AS ALWAYS Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-01 12:42:40

one thing? i've had it* Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-04-01 17:26:00

Barz: ur structure is hard to follow. you didnt mark some of your setups which makes it harder for folks to catch it feel me? it takes off power as well sometimes. it took awhile to get to the main punch in the opener. the execution of the next punch could have been better. next was good wp. the multis in the closers build sounded akward. "reach bombs elegant"? try not to throw multis in just becuz they match like that ite? last punch was decent. Dimez: stay away from that "takin shots" like camera shit. its extremely played. the hands together line was meh and used. the next punch was ite and the closers was decent tho the wording in the last was rocky. fv. i prefered ones verse becuz it was a TINY bit more original and the punches toward the end were harder. Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-01 17:36:53

I read first verse and thought second cat had his work cut out for him...he was ready for it and dropped strong. Both came nice, but one was a bit more consistent IMO. high 9 vs low 9. FV, VB. Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-02 02:37:02

Barz: too much nameplay in your verse for an 8 liner. Multies seemed off and punches weren't executed that nicely. Dimez: First punch had syllable issues, the punch itself is played though you tried a new approach to it. Next punches were ok, your closer was your best of em. Giving this to the verse that slightly made more impact. Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-02 11:11:05

i got a headache yo.. sorry but fair is in PM for Expo.. swaylessss Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-02 19:01:33

i felt like one had a lil more swag... both had some incosistent multies and one played concepts... the other was very forced... but neither dropped the ball... maybe fumbled it around a lil... both need to work on the concepts and thinking of fresher material... all n all decent drops... for further expo im a inbox message away... Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-02 21:54:32

mines in vote back bro Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-03 01:33:52

Barz; You had nice execution and wording, closing line was fire. Wordplay wasn't very plausible but it's a good attempt at being creative. Dimez; Nice flip, you had some good concepts, but wording and readability is an issue. Overall I have my winner, fair vote is in. Voted: Barz© / -Dimez-
Posted on: 2012-04-03 11:21:43