..BragginG Writez.. Posted on: 2012-02-14 14:17:50

Ty- you really stepped up, you've pulled away from the REALLY basic structure and are starting to get some complexity and better concepts, wording could still be improved on, work on the multies also, conceptually good with a couple of punches Mid ** Fuel - a few very creative lines here, although dragon line was played but worded very well. Similies were nice (ryan sheckler/ british builder) some good punchers, your build ups are improving also but keep pushing them, relevant multies up the punches would be dope, its the next step up complexity wise Mid ** Overall, good battle, fair vote is in. Voted: Óðinn /
Posted on: 2012-02-14 15:00:33

FUEL you nothing but a Showoff Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-16 02:15:13

*BragginG Writez Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-17 03:31:21

this was a hot battle, i was feeling this person, once mastered thats shits unstoppable Voted: Óðinn /
Posted on: 2012-02-17 13:22:56

Found one was a little more cleaner and direct. fv is in. GB Voted: Óðinn /
Posted on: 2012-02-17 15:33:35

Ty this is a little more agressive like i was tryna tell u .. verity pretty much broke it down.. if u work on the multies a bit and just some wording, there were a few forced points, still a solid verse.. Fuel overall pretty dope verse, i wasnt feelin the dragon blood shit.. or the set up to the ryan sheckler line... but overall one was just a step up .. Fv hid to low 7's Voted: Óðinn /
Posted on: 2012-02-19 17:54:13

sorry dragon vomittin, sorry high as fuuuck* Voted: Óðinn /
Posted on: 2012-02-19 17:55:11