With the scores I've chosen, I'll explain my vote in here to clarify, bar for bar. [Revan]: Wasn't born for clips was a jab that missed. Head shots/actor's agent is a played concept that was executed softly. Your next bar has trouble with the rhyme scheme (pound-slide). Also, the wordplay (forced with a British dialect) kinda works for neat wordplay, but does nothing as a punch. His mom's adoring you? lol.. that's a gradeschool snap at best. "roasted, god" is an inner-scheme filler.. it has nothing to do with a setup.. and the end punch makes no sense either. Saying he's feminine, but you'll see Prose IN cons.. as if he's the one doing the fucking. The last bar was WAAAAAY stretched out... I get all the tie-ins but it took too long to use them all, the wording was weird and the "rev eyes" part was forced.. no one pronounces it like that. Basically, neat idea but the setup was nonexistent... puns were just thrown in a bar. [Prose_]: Your structure in the first bar was a disaster.. it splits up your first scheme to the point you aren't sure how you're going to say it. The revenue punch was fucking fire. Absolute fire, I'm not gonna lie. The rhyme scheme was a little soft, but eh.. it's whatever. Your next bar, again the rhyme scheme looks and sounds weird when it comes out, but the punch itself with that wordplay, again, great. The wordplay worked perfectly.. you just gotta work on those rhyme schemes. The last bar was a bit stretched out... but in the end, the concept (for gunplay) was very entertaining. Overall, you smashed this. Revan's concepts weren't as thought out, nor as polished & hard hitting as Prose's were. Any more questions, PM me. Posted on: 2012-02-09 17:15:11

PYRO Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-08 16:04:37

PYROOOOO. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-08 16:06:39

CLASSICK / LEGEND. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-08 16:20:57

CLASSICK u BASTID! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-08 16:28:43

I'll get back to this. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-08 17:21:24

Damn good spar bruhs. Wordplay was the edge. No sway, hit me up for further expo. SuckaFree Votes In. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-08 17:23:21

Good Lawd!! nOw this Is what a personal Match Should be!! Expo: The ONLY reason why i GavE My Vote To ***** (No Sway) Is Because the others Closer seemed a Tad forced. other than that they Both Banged Heads. if i cud Give it a tie i would. *OVERTIME ROUND IS NEEDED!!* Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-08 17:42:39

nice shit here... pretty close battle... no sway inbox me for expo's but one lost this one towards the end rather than the other winning... both going swing for swing... dope shit fellas Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-08 23:49:08

wow gd battle both had some nice concepts and both pretty consistent nail bitter here but heres da fair...gb fellas Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 03:08:27

HOLY SHIT TIS BE MAD CLOSE...all punches multis stiq out..from both Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 03:28:52

even tho theres an "Eagle Her Throat".. she'll still "HAWK UP A LUNG"!!lmao nice prose..just reread tis shit n saw da hawk"n revan is always bringing fire wat a hotlisterr classick!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 03:32:45

trust Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 05:18:26

straight up fire on ones part felt they had the iller wordplay Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 08:51:24

fv Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 11:42:09

fv Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 13:40:31

fv Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 14:02:14

its CLAAAAAAAAAAAAASICK Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 16:09:27

da tru D on da map Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 17:18:21

ite now that one im just all out not tolerating^. delete it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 17:20:04

5-6 deleted upon Proses request. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 17:21:10

5WB: Reports And Driveways Are Nice Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 17:30:44

both came nice with concepts. execution and flow edged it on one side. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 18:32:23

Okok, my vote has to go to the verse, in which i think, punched the shit out of his opponents grandma. Na seriously though - Revan - Nice concepts executed nicely, a little played in a place or two, got batter as the verse went on, nice personals in there as well. Everything was there, strong verse, KO punches, word/nameplay and personals, very strong for an 8 line (still don't think you went as hard as normal though) Prose - Opener was nice, not the best in the verse, but from then on you went the fuck it, Bring up Rev in News reports line was VERY creative and awesome fresh nameplay, From there on out i honestly think you killed it, you came harder from any 8 i've seen from you. Last lines were cracky. Overall, my fair vote is in. mid - low. Don't hate, one was just that bit fresher and had those 'wooah' lines. Good fucking battle. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 21:40:03

both are deadly. one had it all except the other came in with a better punch Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-09 23:50:00

Wow this was some decent shit but one took it for me no hate at all the fair is tossed! Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 00:03:15

Hot ass battle. I loved the wordplays in the first verse. I really loved the whole verse honestly, just didn't care for the opener, though maybe it went over my head, after that though, the whole way down was great. Prose came hard as well but this is my opinion. Thanks to both you guys for the good read. Get back at me. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 00:57:59

this was a good battle, nice bars from both here and nice wordplay & punches. Long Clever punches vs Consistent punches. Fair Vote tossed!! Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 05:47:59

Damn. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 11:46:35

. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 13:37:26

klassic shi Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 15:08:02

nice punchlines Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 15:32:02

Rev- overall strong drop, great concepts. I tried like hell to get the Fee Adore word play to work, guess with an accent maybe haha. The pros and cons line was nice I think Pros WITH Cons would have sounded better imo, but thats being picky. Rhyme scheme on point nice finish. Prose- Opener was slow for me, but the middle punch was fire. Rev in news was a great nameplay punch. After that it was a slow build up to your closer but again delivered the heat with that too. Overall a nice battle, one slightly edged it though. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 16:30:54

DAMN SONG "Free? Adoring Simon" (Theodore & Simon.) Nice shit, son. Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-10 22:02:43

good battle Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-11 04:36:05

Return favor!! Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-11 07:09:37

one's mid 2 end of verse left the other standing.....Top Battle Both Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-11 10:27:48

fv Voted: RULE / Prose_
Posted on: 2012-02-11 12:40:04