iight battle was kinda lacking and close ive seen better from both.....some lines were a hit and miss to me on one and the other had some decent lines with a bit of wordplay but no nameplay which could of been used which that could of been written for anyone........ok for me the wordplay wasnt enough to overpower the metas and nameplay i seen from one but can see how anime referecnes might go over most head...gb one line took it for me never hate jus relate...~DNA~ Posted on: 2012-02-08 12:14:52

Mr T's famous quote is "I pity the fool",Omarian starred in the movie "you got served",Micky mouse's dog is called "Pluto",anime pokemon "kabuto" is a insect fossil,Nine tailed fox is the beast form of "Naruto",Handle'in da rest = HANDLE IN DA REST Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-05 17:57:53

weak battle, one had to win tho. props and GL Voted: V3numb / DooX
Posted on: 2012-02-06 15:03:35

Motha Fuckin' ShowOff Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-06 17:21:37

to the winner... kinda surprised me here... liked a couple of the punches... the wordplay was kinda played but still wasn't a bummer... overall pretty good... need to come with some fresher material next time... kinda generous but get's a low *... to the loser... didn't really like the verse at all... seemed a lil all over the place... kinda forced the concept in about every line... nothing really connected... just random utterances... very disappointing drop... low *... FVC vote dropped... no h8 Voted: V3numb / DooX
Posted on: 2012-02-07 02:33:45

^this man is always surprised, makes me feel very proud Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-07 05:10:24

^^LMAO^^SAVE. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-08 07:03:36

Aiight...Imma be nice and break my vote down...V3numb- I could see what you were trying to do with the concepts on this one. Honestly, they could have been structured a little better. You seemed to be focused more on having "clever" metaphors & not focusing on punchlines. DooX wordplay didn't work for me. Work on your punches cause you have ideas. DooX- Wasn't feeling the opener. Shat i a port was too childish imo. like V, I could see what you were trying to do with your concepts, but nothing really stood out to me. Closer was a decent personal. Try thinking outside the box a little more cause emergency & calcium are popular wordplays to use. Room for improvement from both so stick at it...Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: V3numb / DooX
Posted on: 2012-02-08 17:07:15

aw shit and i thought i was kinda original with the cal see em shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-09 12:45:19