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Posted on: 2012-02-04 04:36:37

Good Battle..Fv Vota Back...AfterThought Vs Me....And Gd Luck Both On The Tourny.. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 12:59:54

G'luck Fiji! PYRO. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-04 14:22:32

Damn you both. One series of lines decided this battle. I'll keep it 100. No sway. This battles a nice little clinic of war refs as well. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 15:16:25

8s, but I choosing this person, cause I felt had a better overall swag. Punches n multies. Both equal level. And wordplay weak overall. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 16:18:12

Askari; Opener was nicely put together with clever name play. Gaza strip line i felt was hella drawwwwwn, by that i mean took a long time getting to the punch. bar was still nice regardless. Closer didn't really do much for me. Was an ok punch. Overall a solid verse bar the closer, concept used too much IMO. Fiji; Opener felt sloppy as hell. I get where you were going with the punch, sorta. The metaphor you were going with was weak. Wordplay didn't work on your next bar, on both occasions. lol @ Don't cry and tattle. Surely theres better multies you could have gone with?. Closer to me had no impact neither. Overall it seemed like you rushed this somewhat. I know your capable of dropping better material. I was expecting this battle to be relatively close. Both know its no hate. Votes are always '100. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 16:25:21

What Astronomical said but not as harsh lol. Ill be nice and drop 8's hotlist. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 22:03:19

nice battle here... no sway since it's a tourney battle but one pulled it out... hit me up for expo's Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-04 23:41:02

'Everyone' voted against you coz... Askari's verse was better. If my vote bothers you. The mods can delete it. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-05 00:35:06

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Posted on: 2012-02-05 11:29:51

Askari: Opener.. Affordable payments/fee type a thing used alot.. Like the Wordplay and wording of the bar though.. Agreed with astro that the Gaza line was dragged the fuck out.. Liked the connections there besides that... Closer was ight.. Decent line.. Osa: Bar kinda ehh.. I understand it and I like the Deion play.. Bar was just hard to follow, it wasn't as smooth of a read as it could have been... Wordplay was a bit off on your next lines, maybe the accent?? idk but it was off for me after a few reads still.. Other than that pretty much same expo as your first lines.... Closer could have been a bit better. Felt you had idea's and concepts to work with, it just wassn't word as smooth as it could have been so it will throw off the people reading it. When I saw the two battlers felt I was going to read an outstanding battle, both verses wasn't at their normal height of writing. anyways.. I have my vote.. Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-05 12:00:49

Yeah Fiji it was a good one man, we were both pressed for time too so I don't think the verses are nearly as bad as they're being made out to be. Always 100 dude. PYRO. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-05 18:11:25

One edged it in here. Good battle dukes. fv is in, Voted: Askari /
Posted on: 2012-02-06 08:13:22