Both would've gotten one rating higher if you each didn't have a line or two that I felt was lazy. However, one verse really stood out to me.. a very nice opener.. a weak setup in the middle to a nice punch.. a weaker punch after that one, but you finished it with a crazy punch, imo. Playing on multiple words in a phrase is always a plus, especially when it all makes sense. Bravo. The other verse could use a little work in a few departments, specifically setups, wording choice in your rhyme schemes, and fresh punches. Words were used more than once in separate multies, and the vocab wasn't too impressive. Not gonna draw this vote out... just PM if you have questions. Posted on: 2012-01-31 12:34:00

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Posted on: 2012-01-29 23:18:29

I got this no one touch! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-29 23:33:49

Kill yaself.... :high: Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-29 23:48:16

Lol this was a DOPE battle. Jimmini you're stepping it up fa real, you progressed a hell of a lot you take all advice on board and writing some nice shit. Your multies were nice, getting some impact behind those punches, wording could still be improved on but conceptually nice, some of the wordplay worked okay, think if the wording was better it would have been more plausible, come a long way but frankie ain't a easy opponent. Clipz - you already know. this was like.. jab jab jab punches were real nice, rift line was dope, verse was solid and consistent and nice personal closer finished it off. This was a lot nice than i thought it would be, and i'm impressed. Almost don't wanna vote haha... but one got this with the harder bars. Feel free to PM for further expo but the bottom line in one simply came that bit harder. Mid - high Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-30 09:39:16

D.I.E.... KILLYASELF Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-30 16:03:41

nice lil bar. One was more consistant and had that punch after punch approach that wins battles while the other took abit more to execute his concept. Close tho Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-30 16:10:28

Ok im not gunna lie, i came into this battle thinkin it was one-side, but i was exceptionaly proven wrong. This is a solid battle on both sides, very enjoyable read for only being 8 lines. Jimmi- I could not agree more with Verity about your progression! This is a huggge step up from the last battle that i seen of your ( id say a month ago). You had some solid concepts, and for the most part stayed on point with them. Wordplay was half-decent but it could have been done better in the final punches. Multies matched pretty safley, but that last line was a buzzkill for me honestly.... Frankie- also an enjoyable verse, You kept it sweet and simple which iam a huge fan of. There wasnt much complexity to it but it was effective Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-30 21:17:35

Overall a solid battle like i said. Conclusion: Both were going bar for bar and Jimmi would have had it if it wernt for the last line in my eyes. Honest vote. Good job to both yall Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-30 21:20:19

if your name is frankie CLIPZ, you probably should not rhyme CLIPS with CLIPS in your verse, and a few of your lines had too many syllables to possibly keep tempo on beat. Jimmini. I thought that babe ruth line was killer. and you had harder punches IMO NO SWAY IN CASE SOMEONE BITCHES, CAUSE I KNOW THEY WILL! Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-31 15:13:55

High to mid on this one. I felt both have some points in the battle in which they fell off a tiny bit.. which explains the rate given. Both flowed with there verses really nicely and had nice structures.. when it came to concepts, I felt one had the edge in that category as he was a bit more creative. He put those concepts to use with putting punches together to make his verse end up harder then the others. Decision made. Fair's in. Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-31 16:00:26

gb Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-01-31 18:23:25

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Posted on: 2012-01-31 23:01:20

EZ Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 00:15:57

yo Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 06:54:31

fair is dropped... thought one came a lil harder in this one... Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 09:14:09

aint gonna go into a long expo bc all the ppl ahead of me already did that...so vote's in.. Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 11:04:14

FV is in Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 14:11:23

Now Frankie, don't trip cause of my vote lol.. JIMMINI: nice bars, good punches.. alot of the concepts are past a basic level, but there's still progression to be made with the connections you used (ie. pulp). basically good bars and clean multies. FRANKI: i havent been around for a minute, wtf happened? i kno u got 9 material so what is this? the multies were the best part of ya verse, i see the internals and the nice schemes, so dont get it twisted.. it's just the metas were lite n that affected the weight it carried. FV, NO HATE.. `Waxx Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 15:03:29

..and Barz from Marz is an idiot. Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 15:04:44

gb guys Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 15:08:12

Good shit from both. One lost me with irrelevant build-ups connecting to the punch. Other than that, one took this easily IMO. Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 16:31:50

fv good battle Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 17:07:13

Missing teeth got it for me Voted: Frankie Clipz /
Posted on: 2012-02-01 23:45:02

self vote removed Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-24 16:54:34