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Posted on: 2012-01-28 00:08:58

Highs to Lows. No Sway but one was more consistant with harder blows and the other was nice but was a tad lighter with attacc. Fvs dropped. Voted: Capitalist / Kold Krhymez
Posted on: 2012-01-28 06:17:22

One had a lot of filler in their drop. Cut down on that. Some lines could have been worded better on both sides but I'm tip this due to consistency. Voted: Capitalist / Kold Krhymez
Posted on: 2012-01-28 23:43:42

This really impressed me - cosa your multies were nice as fuck, really improved on them, sticking to the same scheme but with multiple punches in the same-scheme bar was a good move, i think some might see it as filler, but i think it was just clever and entertaining, and some good punches in there as well, think u nearly fell off at one point but picked it back up, all i can really say is work on being more consistent apart from that, nice solid verse. - Kold - this really impressed me, reppin' UK as well i always like to see a English member going in hard so props for that, i think you two were pretty evenly matched, you also had some really nice multies, some dope concepts and nice punches, i think you were more consistent but unfortunately some of the attempts at wordplay didn't work for me and took away from the verse slightly but still its good you trying to be creative with it. Overall this was a very good battle and tough to call, ima give it to the one who i think came that little bit harder. No hate at all, this was really impressive, gonna give you a could of low **s so hotlist this. Voted: Capitalist / Kold Krhymez
Posted on: 2012-01-29 20:07:03

Omni: ur opener flowed nicely but tha concept wasnt that tuff to me seems like you focused more soo on rhyme and pun power. Ur next set of lines showed niii vocab buut again lacked in power. tha next group of lines followed suit, Tha eye/blur shiii was rather forced and weak IMO. Then U wen on to say Kid three times in one line :(... Also Wen u refer to some1 as 'B' u dont make it plural. Ok, Tha Geometry pun jus niii but tha set up was ass, tha 'X' part was tooo OPEN. like whaa are u talkin about?? Ur Closer was tha best all around bar u had.. Overall, I think Uve lost tha VICIOUSNESS that u once had that made me really respect u as a battler, Ive noticed this in acouple of ur battles since uve left DPS aswell.. Its like ur rest RHYMING not really attackin ur opponent. Verse wasnt ur best AT ALL/// Reg: Tha opener is kinda funny due to me being drunk atm. but very kiddish IMO. Dude u said Man Tan.. Not cool. Tha rest of tha bar kinda lost interest after sayin that. Tha Matrix pun w/ NO Matrix related wp is OUTDATED like 'Grand mas on E-Harmony' Feel me famz, Lets keep it fresh. Spare n Spear doesnt work for me maybe ur accent is tha reason so i wont hold that against u, But tha Punch Was uper FORCED. verse anal dry feind?? U got me there buddy.. Tha pickin nose was a better. much better. Pizza/Delivery Puns are worse than Matrix Puns.. Played famzo. Tha Gay Bar was niii and cuda been a battle ender if Worded riiiii, And ur closer was ass sauce, Ikno where u were goin w/ it, I jus wish u did.. I think u cuda did waaay better w/ thought applied to this verse/// Overall... One was better here, Both were REALLY inconsistant so it made tha call tougher but one deffoly edged here Voted: Capitalist / Kold Krhymez
Posted on: 2012-01-29 22:41:59

[Cosa]: Acrobatic situps was hilarious, that whole bar flowed really well and it landed at the end. Good work. Still one or two filler multies here but they weren't really noticeable tbh. Next bar wasn't as hard-hitting at all, kinda soft if I'm honest, but it flowed really well again and your multies were relevent. You're beginning to get the hang of it I think; just try taking your time over punchlines to think of the hardest hitting concepts and the most effecive way to word them. Sell to a kid line again was a little meh but your flow & multies are solid. Geometry functions was a good punchline, but the multies here weren't totally relevent to the punch unfortunately, you switched here from solid and relevent multies with a mediocre punch to a good punch with irrelevent multies lol. The last bar was cool, the concept wasn't WOW but the multies were tight and the bar was well condensed. Yolur readibility has really increased literally over-night lol, quite impressive. Now you just need to focus on finding those haymaker concepts and tying it all in together. You could be a heavyweight one day if you carry on improving at this rate. [KK]: Your first bar took me 3 reads to match the first two multies, I finally did and thought "Damn, this is away to be a killer line" and then BANG... You broke the multie in the punch by one syllable and really lost impact. The concept was good, but you'e tried too hard here to focus on multies and really stretching them, rather than focussing on bar impact and punch. Santana adoption was really cool, flowed tight, hit hard and the multies were good. Only thing I would say is keep your multies relevent to the punchline rather than overloading on filler. The next bar was crack, Morphius student was nice and it flowed really well. Again the irrelevent multies detract from the punch but in this line it wasn't too effective. Now, the Chaka the zulu line would have been a real haymaker had you worded it right. This is gonna sound petty as fuck, but where you said 'and spare your spine' should have read 'BUT spared your spine'. To me that would've made all the difference. I know it's completely tedious and bitchy but taking more care over every last word could really increase the impact of a punchline. Still, hardest line of the battle regardless. Nos in the bud was a really crafty nameplay, that line was dope, great wording and a tight multie to set it up. The delivery line was off again by one syllable in the multie meaning it flattened towards the end, but I can let it slide, it was a tight bar, another hard-hitter. Last bar was ok, kind of a slow ending to a good verse, but it wasn't completely weak. Relevent multies in there etc, just the punch was a little meh to me, maybe just the wording was off. All in all I was impressed by these verses, just remember Cosa - think long and hard about haymaker punchlines and concepts/wording etc and KK - just watch your multies dude. If it seems harsh remember, I'm only trying to help you elevate. Always 100, PYRO. Voted: Capitalist / Kold Krhymez
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