No use concealing names in my vote, since you'll know who I'm talking about anyways. [iLL Smith]: Your structure was good.. your rhyme scheme in the beginning was decent.. but your punches were hella lacking (so those cute little punched-out eyes didn't quite work with this verse). Handling bitches and stripper poles was very soft.. your opener, saying he's lying by saying "this fibber's cold" was both corny and soft. green/lettuce is another played concept that wasn't executed in any new way. Brain prosthetics... lmao. You meant "prosthesis".. but I'll let that slide, only because the punch didn't make sense anyways. You can't have a brain prosthesis.. and even if you could, you're just using that phrase to say he "can't grasp your concepts".. your setup there was horrid. I'll count that as a joke bar for you though, since I did laugh. And your closer.. was just all over the place, man. The rhyme scheme was absolutely horrible, and the concept was very weak. Overall, a good attempt, but the creativity and effort needs to be bumped up a few notches. [FAME]: You capitalized on his last bar's fuck up, and I'm so glad you did, because that's the first thing I would have done. That shit sticks out like a sore thumb compared to the rest of his verse. Your opener was fucking brilliant, and actually funny. Mild humor after that bar, but the shell toe line was very funny, and I felt it connected. Furry clit, eh... somewhat funny.. kinda straying off topic though. The middle of your verse is filler, no lie. The whole dad/sis fuck scene does nothing for me.. and nothing for you as far as creative attacks on your opponent. The closer was meh.. a barely funny diss, but nothing special. [OVERALL]: iLL Smith came with the wordplay and punches.. but if they aren't landing, which they didn't.. then they're useless. And if someone thinks they are landing, they're light jabs AT BEST.. nothing I'd consider a real punch. FAME came with jokes as I've seen in one of his other battles. His personal opener was the hardest thing out of both verses.. and FAME also had another line or two that got a positive reaction out of me. However, if all of your verses are just incest jokes, and/or mom/dad/sis jokes.. then you've already run out material. Keep it fresh.... (any more detail, PM me). Posted on: 2012-01-23 20:00:27

fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 20:03:59

Both need tah keep at it, one had better delivery & made more impact, fair vote tossed!! ShowOff!! Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 20:07:01

bars over jokes. Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 20:37:05

lol hate to admit it but fames opener crascked me up - other concepts were played out and the punches didnt have much force fair vote as always Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 20:58:56

Expected this battle to b a lil better. High 8 low 8 Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 21:25:23

fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 21:50:40

fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 21:59:15

fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-21 22:09:35

gotta love the fv votes right?... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-21 22:30:57

fair is in....fellas Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-22 01:27:23

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Posted on: 2012-01-22 02:27:43

If you don't explain your vote I will show you a picture of your own mothers breasts... Faggots Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-22 13:11:28

One would be better w/out all the decorations in the box. The opener was nice-ish, not super hard hitting... some good lines but no real KO punches. The other opened up with a nice straight jab, the humor actually was pretty decent. Close one... after a few reads I'm leaning toward this one.... Fairs w/ expo's always. Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-22 17:10:43

fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-22 23:23:14

Funny disses fv Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-23 13:43:08

one had me fuckin crackin up but the other was hittin with the punches and bustin up the others face......good shit tho... FV IS IN!!!! Voted: iLL Smith / FAME
Posted on: 2012-01-23 19:23:22