axiom....Man, like a broken nose, you FLOWING BADLY, this shit will be easier than babies w/t STOLEN CANDY, you'd think the villain would win n the STORIES HAPPY,.....this was iight but the multis kinda forced so took away from it........well You'll get "knocked over" n "pin"d like a BOWLING ALLY!wait. think your VERSE IS WORTHY to be put in SURGERY? Only time ~Famine~ was "great" was during the "DIRTY 30's"!when this FAGGIT RAPS, I wanna pull the RATCHET BACK, go C-Murder on the kid, BLAST EM (WHAM),....still iight punches could of been a lil harder and def need to work on multis.....ed hat. red shoes, blood on yer JACKET TO MATCH, fuck this pig, even eating a SANDWICH W/T HAM, I'll get you with the MAGNUM IN HAND, cause you thinking in the "godfather" was the only time a "CAPTIAN WAS WHACKED"!..........c loser was kinda eh nuttin really hitting hard...multis was off...structure could be better id give ya a mid 6.FAMINE......your RHYMES POOR!CERTAIN! not to 'get wins' this 'bitch kid' claims he FLY'S THIS WHORES TWERKIN! ill leave his SPINAL CORD TA HURTIN......decent opener the multis seemed a bit forced......! so ill 'spit flows' that 'rip holes' like a BEHIND DOOR VIRGIN!!!...his FLOW IS PUTRID GREEN 'super ugly' 'you cant bust threes' BLOW HIM, NOOSE HIS FLEAS! kill 'alla dat' bro 'ahh you wack' stop the SHOW ITS USELESS SEE! ........this was like ehh to me..kinda jumbled up ideas..... hes 'slow in pace' and 'froze in place' like a BROKE COMPUTER SCREEN!!!.. ill go STARK ON THIS FOUL TRIGGER! i got his girl I BARKED ON SHE HOWLED (when i) BIT HER! like a 'texan' ill 'x him/axiom' like a MARK ON THE CAL-ENDER!!!!....... ...decent closer but the word play a lil off maybe an AX-HIM wouldnt been a lil closer but did like the calendar follow up......not a fan of this structure but a lil work on multis and maybe diff concepts overrall a solid 7...few tweaks and its an low 8.my FVC-T vote is in...better punches won it here with decent multis Posted on: 2012-01-18 11:32:46

^^this is called true nd fair voting by blocc which is called the breakin down of the verses i agree with him on the votin structure i dont know whether my vote agrees with him but this is my fair nd a good vote for the winner Voted: The Kid Eddie T /
Posted on: 2012-01-19 06:02:54

i keep this short.. blocc broke it down long umma just keep it short.. prolly a co-sign tho....... one was aight but could work on wording.. threw maybe 2-3 punches and some were a hit and miss idk multis was aight tho i guess,other was consistent had some punches even tho a lil played out on one or the other also had wordplay so not bad.. fair is in boys not bad Voted: The Kid Eddie T /
Posted on: 2012-01-19 11:10:41

ehhh... this was a decent spar... i think the winner had better multies and punches... even though he did have a lot of misses and bad wording... the other never really connected and concepts were a little played... both need to step it up but FVC vote dropped... no hate... Voted: The Kid Eddie T /
Posted on: 2012-01-19 21:21:09

Youre a woman _AzIoM You know nothing. ~famine~ YOurs wasnt bad. but you are also a woman. Bitch! Voted: The Kid Eddie T /
Posted on: 2012-01-20 12:27:50

GB..BOTH are really close,yet for me the winner hits the other harder Voted: The Kid Eddie T /
Posted on: 2012-01-20 23:05:08

We going round 2 this weekend you know. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-21 12:27:49