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Length: 8 Lines

RULE

(66%) WINNER

Hall Of Famer
Grand Champion
Rookie Champion
Tag Team Champion

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Classick At Rhymin

Reppin: Bristol, England, United Kingdom

AfterThought (34%)

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Crew: Murda Muzik

Reppin: New York, United States

RULE

Really? OCKY YA WISH WAS to battle me?? C'mon DUNNY IM VICIOUS! u aight.. but "Rev Iller Dawg" like a PUPPY FOR CHRISTMAS!! (Reveal a dog) His chick is a DORKY SLUT, YET i was bored so da whore got some HORNY ROUGH SEX yep she "Took My Seed & Downed Them" like a TOURNEY UPSET!! Dude when i find ya FELLAS? MATE IM KILLING EM i'll be squirting-the-gauge to have ya "Circle In Flames" like CELBRATING INDIANS!! (Circling) Ya think this FAG IS GREAT HUH? nah u basic! WACK AS MASE WAS so say ya "Bars, Hidden Gems?" u talkin SADDAMS BASEMENT!! ya bars suck, ya TRACKS ARE THE WORSE they wouldnt "Enter, Rev Ear" as an ACTUAL CHURCH!! (Revere)

AfterThought

DAAAMN...JEESUS! jus hung up w/ ya wife soundin like a SAD DIVA.. gettin kids, i wonder how you got that mission-complete if she says the farthest you go is a "Kiss On The Cheeks" & she aint talkin bout her ASS EITHER!!!/ *face palm* homie we known each other since the CLASSICK DAYS.. all love, but if you start actin MAD & HATE? "1 on 1" I'll bring the "Heat To The Table" & "Light Up When We Alone" like roMANTIC DATES!!!/ (..Pausition..) got that gauge ready & cocked to BLAST YOU TWICE so if you CHOSE TO FLIP it ah leave you "MORE THAN PISSED" when that "Double You See (wc) Brawl" like BATHROOM FIGHTS!!!/ CLASSICK.

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Battle started: January 16^th 2012 at 06:10
Challenger joined: January 16^th 2012 at 06:20

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-01-16 06:20:23).

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Pretty close here on this one tbh.... One's wordplay in the beginning was forced imo were as the other had some filler in his beginning... Other than that, this was defo a decent spar... Fair is in! Posted on: 2012-01-16 08:45:32

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RULE <CLASSICK> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Rookie Champion Tag Team Champion	LEGEND. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-01-16 06:11:18
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Although I wanted to write a 16 for you to make it more official but oh well, there it is. CLASSICK. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-01-16 06:26:13
De-Frozz Basic Member	fv n gb Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 06:37:48
Wigsplit <GS>	Both was dope imo. One had a line or two that stuck out harder tho. Good shit tho, creative on both ends. Fair Vote. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 10:36:38
mac10jesse Basic Member	fv gb Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 10:39:06
Krhyme Killz <CLASSICK> Beast Mode Champion Live Battler	hmmm...this is extremely close..one had more hits..the other had better concepts with fewer hits..this shouldve been a 16. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 11:17:46
sWORDz <KILLERS.> Violentby Design	Cool battle. One started out weaker then normal but after the first few linez he went in.. :high: the other brought some pretty dope punches as well, however lacked the multies. Could go either way in my opinion.. Fairnes s has been dropped. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 11:24:55
Golden Armz Banned	dam your verse was a flamer revan Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 12:24:16
RhetoriK <DPS> Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	Revan - Interesting concepts. Not a bonafide knockout punch within the verse but some deep cuts for sure. Some expo/wordplay was un-needed. "Circling in Flames" is an example. But needless to say a solid ass verse. Only nit picking thing is that reveal a dog wp was forced imo. AfterThought - Pretty innovative concepts tbh. I think the long setups hindered the momentum of the overall verse in the end. Lotta personality added, that was a nice touch. In retrospect, you're treating some heavy metaphors as punchlines. Really dig into the structure game. Overall - If this were a 16-32 it would have been "Checkmate" but as an8 liner one carried weight from end to end and did enough for the win. Full Expo dropped. Fairs In, Good Luck. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 12:29:45
NOBLE <FITTEST> Hall Of Famer	Fair assessment. One's concepts went more places and had more layers. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 12:46:36
-Dimez- Basic Member	This shit was extremely close. Revan: I felt like ur opener didn't really hit that hard, wordplay was a bit forced imo or could be cuz u pronounce it differently, but u picked it up right after that. U had some ight concepts and then there were fresh concepts right about in the middle of the verse, multis were great and punched were set up nicely and and hit very good. My favorite bar would have to be the closer. Afterthough t: you had some swag in ur verse and I like that. The opener was a very nice idea but I felt like it took a little too long to get there. More multis could've made ur verse much more effect with its impacts. Concepts were nice on ur side too. The romantic dates concepts was nice, that was favorite punch from u. Punches had a very nice execution and the punch itself was creative. Like I said...EXTRENELY CLOSE. It could go either way but I gave it to the one who I felt had fresher concepts and more creative punches with wordplay. Fairs dropped. Respect it Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 13:10:43
Dej Basic Member	Fairness. Better lines. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 13:49:58
Catharsis Basic Member	Piff spar...one had a steadier stream of punches, the one iffy wordplay, you already know, but kept it consistent. The other had stronger concepts and set ups, but in this... didn't quite have the punch count. Definitely should have a 16 lined up, cuz it might be a different story with some more material to read. Punches and consistency took this one. Fairs with expo's always. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 14:12:22
U NiQue NeSs <FYF> Exclusive Member	good battle both was a good read..both had some alright punches and multis..this person just offered alittle more the other..one punches took to long to get to..no hate.. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 14:22:35
Javael Buchanan <36C> Basic Member	fv is in Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 15:49:04
18w Basic Member	had more humor in it and i felt punches hit stronger Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 15:57:18
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	R: Wording may have been tha only thing nice about tha first bar, Smooth delivery.. Next bar was RULE sauce G'bar. Indian smacck was chiche'ish but did iiight. Closer jus wasnt make cup of tea. Very Lightwork verse overall//AT: Ur first bar was stretch abit so i lost interest in what u were tryna say in it. Next bar was suspect ma nigaa, Alotta comcepts plugz+1 but tha whole bar gave off a 'that way' feel?? Ukno??.. And tha Wording was off af on tha Closer. Maybe you shud explain it to me via wall/pm/im or sumn. But Your verse had lotta filler and lacked on VICIOUSNESS. Overall iiiight battle, I feel this came down to how things were said. And not sooo much whaa was said..HIGH TO MID. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 16:57:25
The Ghost of Freak	classick legend....ooook Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 18:30:11
Mayneak <DGAF> Hall Of Famer	Good spar fellas...Went for the more direct verse. but had there up & down moments but one came with more haymakers. Good shit. Respect it & all that jazz... Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 21:18:32
Ray Zeus	damn this shit was close... pretty solid bars from both... but i think one had harder hits with their punches... could go either way but my fair is dropped... Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 21:45:09
RogerCordon Basic Member	FB Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-16 23:09:58
Wordsmithh <WA> Basic Member	close battle.fv. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 00:45:33
EJT Live Battler	One verse was just better. both openers were sketch but i preferred AT's opener even though it was lengthy. was better than forced wordplay.. inna 16/32 this might have been a 9-8 vote. keeping it fair tho Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 02:48:23
nothincool Basic Member	I dont like Revan's shit Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 03:24:08
AkRid_ArTz Rookie Champion	fv is in... Nice battle. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 10:34:46
Brawler <BOO> Basic Member	i didn't think much of it. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 11:16:33
B-F-M <WA> Basic Member	Both came hard. I preffered AfterThoughts references & punches. Revan, I didnt get the puppy thing...Good battle from both. FV Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 14:36:46
Califas_562-214 Basic Member	one came harder FV Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 14:46:53
Wolf E Basic Member	NICE BEEF FELLAS!!! DOPE SHIT ALMOST AS GOOD AS ME BUT I DONT LIKE GUN PLAY OR GANGSTA TALK ITS FUCKING LAME I LIKE FUNNY SHIT THAT MAKES ME LOL LIKE A METH ADDICT NAH WAT I SAY??? FV Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 15:38:56
Kold Krhymez <ME3>	dope battle. one edged it. fairs in Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 16:26:45
CSKiLLz <SSG>	Gotta keep it fair ones punches were better no hate at all Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 17:01:11
Def Threatz <GZUP> Basic Member	both went in like hell too fuckin close but gotta choose oen ahd sick bars nice concepts other cam back and hit hard as hell too close fv VGB Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 17:46:49
SPEEK Basic Member	Fv gb Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 19:10:59
kirktsa Basic Member	fv one took it Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 20:15:55
Deadly Spits <I.R> Basic Member	fv Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 22:33:53
BiggieDRapSlayer Basic Member	Great Battle Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-17 23:54:44
MaCc Da G0D <APECS>	...wbat it really came down for me is filler and the lacc there of. Revan had little to no filler and punches of power. After Thoughts Verse was definatly official. well thought out but i think wud have been more effective in audio. fvs are n. Good shit fellaz. Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-18 02:35:11
MiD-NiGht <WS> Basic Member	gb Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-18 05:21:29
TaeeBeezy Basic Member	fv Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-18 11:21:25
Jay_Nice	both need work gb though pretty close fv in Voted: RULE / AfterThought Posted on: 2012-01-18 14:36:59
DeNiro B Milk <Hoodrich> Hall Of Famer	http://www.letsbeef. com/battle_details.p hp?section=tb&id=419 968 Comment Only Posted on: 2012-01-18 16:18:46
JokR Basic Member	Enjoyed it Comment Only Posted on: 2012-01-18 17:16:56
Revan <iRULE> Hall Of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion	face palm homie we known each other since the CLASSICK DAYS.. all love, but if you start actin MAD & HATE? "1 on 1" I'll bring the "Heat To The Table" & "Light Up When We Alone" like roMANTIC DATES!!!/ im sayin. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-11-14 11:44:14


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