Expo: people in the holocaust were put in CONCENTRATION CAMPS, AIR BORN PATHOGENS r sicknesses u get from air born illness, MYLYRICS.COM is ionu's battle site that completly failed, IONS r molecules wiith a positive r negative charge, DA FIB U LAID'ER, DEFIBULATOR, is a shocking device for someone having a heartattack- FUCK IONU- hes a bitch- NUFF SAID Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-12 10:33:38

ond had some wordplay although som kinda forced IMO and decent concepts but worded and set up wrong for delivery,other had some personals but also could work on delivery and work on working but all in all decent sparr.. fair is in no h8 involved.. PM me for more expo if needed Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-12 16:27:30

K First Off 1 Mc's Punches Clearly Dont Make Sense Or Are For People Who Are 120% Iq Level Positive So Don't Expect Anyone Much 2 Get Em, But Anyways Other Then That It Was Aiight, Fv, Gb No Sw! Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-12 16:32:11

DIE SLOW fagget! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-12 16:33:41

iONu: First comment is about the off on it/offended wordplay. That was forced so badly. None of your concepts were really creative. Wording was decent. Nothing special in this verse..Intricate: Your opener took a long time to hit. A lot of it was filler or played. Your punches were nicely executed just too stretched.....FVC vote Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-13 01:01:50

Xander summed up the whole battle. One was more on point here, more consistant and definately hit harder Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-13 10:03:10

I feel it would be unfair to vote on this battle because me and Skillz were recently in the same crew and don't want anybody to think it's buddy voting / hate voting on either part. But im gunna drop some feedback for you. Punk (im gunna call you punk i prefer it) - nothing really creative but your wording was nice and your punches made a good impact, not a lot of filler, straight to the point i liked the attack. Multies kept the readability up nicely, fairly consistent throughout, i think you tried to be quite creative but it came out a little forced (off in it / offended) but at least you tried to be fresh, gotta respect you for that. One thing i will say though is that this {{{}}}""" shit really throws off the flow in my head when im reading it, automatically i pause and read the word in brackets separately which can throw you off the path slightly which is frustrating. Apart from that nice solid verse and good attempt and creativity. Skillz- you've really stepped it up, your multies were nice and made the readability easy to follow, didn't use much decoration which is always good, i think your wording was quite good also, your 'pigs soft' H.A.M line was really dope i liked that concept and think you executed well, good range of vocab. Couple things though... You had your mind set on the 'concentration camp' opener to flip it, so then had to force the rest into the punch which sort of took the flip away from the original concept (if that makes sense?) there was also quite a lot of filler that didn't relate to the final punch, but i know it's hard to have long relevant schemes in 8 line battles because you wanna get as much content in as possible it's a tough thing to get down but it comes with experience i guess. Overall i think you've both stepped it up, Punk get rid of those damn {{}{}{}{}} and perfect your wordplay and make sure its plausible lol and Skillz work on your punches! Great battle though. Like i said i'm not dropping a vote because it may be seen as bias / hating but if you're both happy for me to return with a vote, let me know in my FVC app or on chat and i'll come back. Good battle, well done Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-13 19:06:15

SW reppin, decent battle seen better from both. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 15:56:30

this is deff close.ionu has a couple better lines an i feel it more Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-14 18:14:54

killed it ca dope shit... Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-14 18:40:41

iONu Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-14 19:03:09

Lmao- Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 19:24:52

removed low vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 20:36:15

Lol u see tha fvc votes dude- ya lil scrubs can buddy vote all they want- tha fvc votes r higher vp- i see the mods needa watch yo i.m Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 20:36:24

great battle and keep it going! Voted: ozark /
Posted on: 2012-01-14 20:53:43

Lmao, wtf r u talkin bout- keep ya swyin shit up u lil bitch- like i said- u see who the two fvc voted for- so u so scared to lose u askin for votes- pffft Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 21:04:47

Lmao well all they have to do is run my shit- i dont have 10 multi accounts- and i havnt been on chat in over 3 weeks u dumb fuck- im on my phone- u send me a whack ass battle outta no where- get bodied liiite wrk- and result to talkin shit bout cheating- its funny how errybody that voted for me is respected mc's and u get these scrub ass cats votin for u, hmmmm- ok dude- i neva cheated and if i did anybodys more than welcome to screen shot r drop links- smh- ur such a fuckin loser- no matter how many accounts u make- ur skill is not going to change- have a lovely day Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 21:14:52

Fiji = sympathy- and u keep talkin bout that first battle like u somebody- like i said- u got k.O'd on KOB- so stfu bout that shit- if im Not mistaken- u got dropped by dps also- when they were talkin bout banning ur CHEATING ASS..... multi accounts- PUNK, THE VIPER? gtfoh- i wouldnt put it past u to message someone to vote low against u to make it look like im cheating- u sorry ass bitch- like u said- im sry its hot listed and muah fuckas vote- Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 21:24:50

Take tha battle u cheatin lil bitch- u talkin bout SW like u dank- which obviously u not- wit ya whack ass word play- i know 2 r 3 guys in SW that would body u- liiite wrk-Ez Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-14 21:27:38

Lmao, dis muah fucka got 7 votes to my 3 and barely won- wat does that tell u? Cheatin ass hoe!!!! Pffft get some skillz before u decide to send to me kid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-15 12:04:13

i think theres a lot of shit being talked and you only battled 8 lines.. battle again, 16 cause this coulda went either way so dont feel like u got the safe win ionu cause thats not the case. not hating but your on some hate shit for sure when this is only 1 battle.. nah mean Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-16 01:49:41

I'd definately drop iONu 8 in a fuckin' flash since I'm a "Shit Writer" I knowed he'd fuck me up... but im scared he might sleep on it forever and I won't waste my time or breath. Fuckin drop 8 anyday and you'll get a response instantly. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-16 09:19:41