typo battling ho* lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-11 19:10:39

Forgot about this so keystyled it up! Dead Poets Society. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-19 14:08:22

Both were tight here, a little played in parts and some relatively soft punchlines but the verses in their entirety were on point. The fair is in, always 100. PYRO. Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-19 15:35:25

Felt ones lines were a little played. One had a nicer flow and stayed more on point with it.. More impact was left and I did feel ones flow was real choppy in this.. Fair's in. Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-19 18:16:51

honestly, one got slaughtered and I felt like the winner was obvious: Naturill: that shit was basic son!!! You opener was badly worded and I felt like the wordplay was a little played out and...obvious. The whole "street life/ mic" was the best line in ur verse, imo. You had some filler in there and some of those concepts are also played out. Verity: opener was pretty funny, punched were executed pretty well, but I wasn't rly feeling that "noodle order" wordplay with the Chinese restaurant. Other wordplay was nice like the "throwin 3 up" . Concepts were fresh and multis were nice too. Both had some flaws in their verse but I felt one of them took it easy, all around. Fairest dropped and the ratings are reasonable. Respect it. Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 17:10:01

NaturIll: Nice opener, it could've been worded & set-up wayy better though. Second punch took too much space, and it didn't make that much of an impact either. Verity: I think all "played" concepts are...played. lol, this one was ok. Next punch was tight. And the closer was a dope personal. Both had their ups & downs.. I've seen better from both sides, this could go either way. Fair's in. Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 17:57:11

We both wrote these verses within 5 minutes lmao. Right NaturILL? seriously he sent this mad quick lol and when i replied it didn't take long. We both went way lighter than usual just to get a quick battle open. Thanks for all the expo's though. DPS Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-21 18:17:31

fair's in, no sway. Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 18:30:30

some creative lines from both sides here. Both had nice openers, and I agree with most of the users that battle wasn't the freshest concept wise, but it still made for an enjoyable read. The factor that decided it for me was that one kept landing punch after punch while the other took a bit longer to hit it. Fair is in Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 18:51:30

well on text there is a lot of ways to brake it down.. but i will always go with whos punches i think are the freshest... so no hate if you want me to explain more PM me... WHUT? Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 19:10:15

This was iight from both sides, some ups and downs on both sides and a few played concetps. Feal this is pretty even and comes down tah ones closer, fair tossed! ShowOff!! Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 20:40:28

NaturIll: First Part Is A Bit Stretched, You Should Rhyme Your Words Together If Your Going To Take That Long To Rhyme Something. Next Part Was Ehhh Okay I Guess, Basic Metaphor Wasn't Really That Complex And I'm Guessing Required No Thinking. You've GOT To Think Better Of The Metaphor That You Use In Your Verses If You Really Want To Be Taken Seriously On Here. Definitely Work On That Man. Next Line Was Worded Terribly! That's KEY To This Text Stuff, Lay Down Your Verse With Good Wording Or Else People Are Going To Get Lost In Your Writing And Those Key Details Could Get Overlooked. Basic Punchline Too If You Would Consider That One, No Hate Just Trying To Help You Out And Give You Constructive Criticism. Next Part Was Confusing, Why Would You Bring Up Sleeping With Her? And Was "Squirt" A Sexual Reference Or A Gun? Either Way It Doesn't Make Sense, Next Part Was Broken And Basic Too. Again Think Of Better Way Of Attacking Your Opponent Try Jokes Or References To Something, Don't Say Too Many Literal Things It Makes You Look Bad. Last Part Was More Or Else The Same. Overall You've Got To Work On Wording First Cause That's The Most Important Thing, Once You Have That Down Try To Come Up With Better Punchlines And You'll Be On Your Way, Let Me Know If You Need Help On This Text Stuff. I'mma Give You A Generous 5, No Hate Just Felt That's What You Key'd Up But I Expect You To Get Better, You Have The Idea Of It But Just Need To Work On Some Things. Verity: First Part Was Funny. Wasn't Hitting That Hard But Funny, Everything Lined Up Nicely Except That Crew..Is..Shit Part Didn't Know Why You Spaced Them Out Like That Other Then That It Was A Good Lil' Punch To Start Your Verse Off. Next, The Test This Fraud Was Kinda Out There. Didn't Really Go With Anything Was Just Filler. Flakey Bit Was A Okay Concept But I Felt You Could've Worded It Better, Like Not Using Two Meanings Of Small In It (Little & Tiny) Especially In The Same Sentence. It Was Fine Though I Got Your Point, The Noodle Bit Was Okay Too But I Felt Like You Should've Tied It Into The Other Food Line You Had To Make Them Connect Better. The Tetris Line Was Cool But Again It Was Just Random And Didn't Really Fit w/ The Two Food Bits Before Those. The Vest Part Was Ehhh Don't Know Why You Would Help Your Opponent In Anything, Show No Mercy! Haha No Points Off Though Just Wasn't Diggin It That Much. Finisher Was Okay, Could've Been Harder Though. Overall You've Got Everything Down I Just Feel Like You Typed This Last Minute And It Was Enough For You To Win But It Could've Been Much Better Judging From Your Past Battles. Only Tips I'd Give Is Work On Wording A Little Bit, Sometimes Your Flow Is Off Other Then That Keep Doing What Your Doing. I'mma Give You A High 6/Low 7. -Stu Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 21:56:51

Forgot To Vote Haha Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 22:34:15

fv Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-21 23:43:31

fair is in fellaz Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-22 06:37:05

gb Voted: ItsNaturill / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-22 10:31:57

damn chic..you killed it! props! way to rep the ladies:)! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-22 21:23:36