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Length: 16 Lines

sWORDz (73%) WINNER

Violentby Design

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: KillersForHire.

Reppin: Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States

AfterThought (27%)

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Murda Muzik

Reppin: New York, United States

sWORDz

BodyBag Quarter Finalz. *GS* Look... Imma MATHAMATICIAN! You got filler 
writez.. so my 'killer sight'll leave you SMACKED WITH "DA VISION"!! 
(Division) autoMATICZ THAT HITTIN with 'straights 'n all' will knock that 'train of thoughts' off every TRACK THAT EXISTED!!// I 'Read over ya 'trash..'' you think that "ILL-LITTER"ATE FLOWZ HOT?? [Your Answer: "I 
SUPPOSE NOT:("].. Plus Ill CLIP IT & THROW SHOTS so 'after' tha FO' POP.. 
Next Question.. Is if your still CONSIDERED A (W)HOLE THOUGHT?!?o_O// 
Duck! still takin' ROUNDZ FROM THE CHROME, THO'.. cuz in a bout he'z 
known to SLOUCH AS A HOMO. & if he'z FOUND IN MII DOJO?! know 
these 'gloccz w/ shellz'll fly' to leave 'Ock up hella high' (accapella) w/out "A 
MOUNT'N IN SOLOZ" (A Mountain)//&kno... if we placed stackz? I'd be UP A 
FORTUNE.. HONESTLY! So when im BUCKIN' FOURZ IN HARMONY?! he'll
be 'high strung' like STRUMMIN CHORDZ ON LOTZ-A-WEED!' 'N next time?He gon' 'DUCK' w/ no "pick up" cuz 'Af Lackz 'n Dodgez' (aflac) without 'TRUCK INSURANCE POLICIEZ'!!// -G'Bye. *LightzBlunt*

AfterThought

..::BodyBag League Quarter Finals::.. *ahem*.. he'll say his lines sharp like RAZORS CUTTIN when THEY BE PUNCHIN but they only SWAYIN YOUNGINS.. coz you, "Allyin (a lion) w/ Punches"? they rather "Catch A Z, Bruh" like easier PREYS IN HUNTIN!!! (Zebra) so you'll dieeee when my guns "Cock, On The Move" like RAPISTS FUCKIN in TRAINS & BUSES!!!/ *zipped* shit I might even call up Frank, get some FOURS & CLIPZ FA YOU to have ya "Red Top To Bottom" like the FORMAL CHRISTMAS SUIT but give you that challenge and ya "Test A Phi Against Me" like a NORMAL SNITCH WOULD DO!!! (Testify)/ this battle? like sharpenin for pencils, wouldnt be surprised if it LEAD TO TORMENT or you gettin murked & peelin off early like a BREAKFAST ORANGE coz shit, when i get the 'grip', and the TEK IS STORMIN? Ill do that "Strong Hold For sWORDz" like buildin castles for WEAPON STORAGE!!!/ ock i 'rock in the field' like a PARTY IN A TRACTOR, MAN but your dumb ass? stay 'laid back till you fall' like HARLEYS & THE AFTERMATH now laugh about how this 'pussy, GOT IN' LIKE A MAXI PAD coz 'DOC WHAT I DO?' is leave ya whole "Block In The Blues" just like 'COPYIN A PARAGRAPH'!!! <-- woord, coz when I WRITE THIS, my shit got a "Spot At The Top" aint gotta "HIGH LIGHT" IT!!!/ yup.

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Battle started: December 23^rd 2011 at 21:33
Challenger joined: December 27^th 2011 at 14:54

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2011-12-27 14:54:34).

Staff Comments

Óðinn <....> The Peoples Champ Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	:sWORDz: from start to finish ya had nice structure but the readability was poor as it's over decorated /;'"!... Your concepts were quite nice and some were transformed into punches well and delivered well too... Some wordplay is more than questionable to say the least, not all just some... :AfterThought: From start to finish, nice structure & good readability.. Concepts were nice an delivered well i thought, specially diggin that 'Paragraph' piece, it was well executed IMO.. :OVERALL: This was an ok battle, some real good concepts from both sides here, looks like someone only wrote about 12/13 lines an then pressed Enter to make up them numbers instead of writing more... Fair vote is in, BW! Posted on: 2011-12-27 15:46:50
Phroxen <LoD> Hall Of Famer I am Him 2x Grand Champion One Bar Legend Cypher Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion One Bar Champion	Since these are tournament verses, I took about a half hour to thoroughly dissect both verses, and breakdown each bar. I've PM'd both emcees my full vote so they can look at it themselves... no need to sway in the comments. Good battle, and good luck to you both. Posted on: 2011-12-28 02:52:18
Blocc <FS> Head Moderator	damn good battle here props and respect to both....i thought one here had the better wordplay and a better concept for a punch than the other....one punch and wordplay did it for me....flow....fresh and punches were bout even...respect Posted on: 2011-12-29 14:01:10

Member Comments

GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> Scheme Champion	:EEK: Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-23 21:41:48
Frankie Clipz <Androidz>	Regulaters boy... :high: Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-27 12:55:06
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Expo: when you copy a text (paragraph) you highlight it, highlighting it in "blue". That's about it. G'luck. REGULATORS Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-27 14:58:20
ItsNaturill Banned	:Go_0n: Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-27 15:11:46
Ray Zeus	damn hella dope battle here!!! both came firing on all cylinders... for my winner... it was all about who had the most 'wow' lines... cuz both in my opinion had a few of them... but the one i voted for had a couple more... fair is dropped i appreciate the read fellas... should be a close one!!! Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-27 15:15:37
Streetz De Hood Basic Member	GS...but ya'll already knew that Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-27 16:01:03
IV <Androidz> Live Battler	Don't have time to drop a full expo right now, but just a few notes... both verses were extremely creative and fresh, liked the concepts from both. Wordplay was pretty strong from both as well, one's wordplay was SLIGHTLY better which is the only thing i can judge the battle on, because in all other departments shit was pretty level. Good fucking battle though. Fair vote is in. Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-27 17:43:45
albo95 <CLK> Basic Member	gb...really close Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-27 21:40:03
Mayneak <DGAF> Hall Of Famer	Good battle all round, felt like one brought one or two better ideas to the table..both have improved alot since i read one of your battles...Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 00:06:38
Golden Armz Banned	this way.. any shit motherfuckers send it... sway concealed Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 00:18:14
neuronsedations620 Basic Member	good battle Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 01:25:09
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Additional expo: "Phi" means 0 or nothing. Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-28 02:59:07
Featured	my fv is droped gb Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 05:25:54
Prose_	'Ock up hella high' (accapella)... swordz, work on more ish like that. thats good wp. if u want the rest of my opinion hit me up fam. u too AT. i want both of u to elevate even more. GS Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-28 10:17:58
Barz© Basic Member	One lacked proper structure had a few quotable pretty much a good read all the way thru same with the other just concepts were set up a little nicer from one with his punches. Fair Vote. Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 14:02:06
BoConstricta Basic Member	la Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-28 19:06:56
SWAVY <BWK>	gd battle...i think 1s ideas hit slightly harder in da punchez fv dropped Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-28 22:20:13
Props- Basic Member	reeeeaal good battle.. though i didn't enjoy reading either.. one i felt made their readability way too difficult and one made it way too easy... i gave it to him cuz his verse had a little more complexity in the punches, one was real dope but didn't quite kill it for me Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-29 12:55:57
D_recognize Exclusive Member	real beef datz what im talkin bout win hood shit heated Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-29 14:29:15
real-g <IrishMob>	fv is in Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-29 16:08:05
bandit k50 Basic Member	sick Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-29 20:20:03
Odd God <ANBU> Topical Champion	Wordplay and metas everywhere Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-29 20:38:33
Wigsplit <GS>	Deleted 1-1! Would ya'll vote with some goddamn sense?!?!?!? Comment Only Posted on: 2011-12-30 06:51:44
OtheKing Basic Member	hot battle Voted: sWORDz / AfterThought Posted on: 2011-12-30 09:21:06


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