This was an interesting battle. On one hand, you have NaturIll who is focusing on attempting to fit as much wordplay into eight lines as possible, and then you have Krhyme who is focusing on flow, with more natural sounding rhyming and humorous punches. Here, I think NaturIll thought a little too hard and tried to cram too much content into too few lines. The punches almost worked, but everytime they were setup, it just seemed too bulky to pull off a connecting punch. For instance, the toe stub/toast upon portions of the first line aren't BOTH needed for the punch to work, only one is. When you try to fit both in there, it causes you to backtrack to try to connect the dots to see which words you were trying to make connections with. Pretty much, it just wasn't setup properly. Same goes with the poster pocketless line. The poster portion makes no sense, but the post apocalypse part was very good. The solar rocketship punch was decent, but again the setup was way too bulky to flow correctly. Krhyme starts off with the word work punch which I think was the hardest punch in both verses. It hits personally, and explains the flaw he sees in NaturIll's structure which was very clever. Then he follows with a slew of very smooth multies and disses. Although there weren't many "punches" in Krhyme's verse, there were decent disses that were setup nicely with multies and they actually connected. His flow was a lot easier to follow and he contained the hardest hitting punch, no questions. Good job, this will probably be a close one since the styles are so different. Posted on: 2011-12-23 04:06:12

fv vb Voted: ItsNaturill / Krhyme Killz
Posted on: 2011-12-20 20:25:03

Made Em Famous / REGULATED Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-21 12:06:55

Nice one fellas. Get thAt rust Off then holla rhyme. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-21 13:16:48

Complexity vs comedy here. Both creative in their own ways. Krhyme rusty still but said it all his first line tbh you need to chill with that word play nat. Bit more detail... Naturill wordplay is all good and in all fairness it worked, your word play was good... but when you write ever thing like this 'SOUL A ROCKET SHIT/SOLAR ROCKET SHIP' it sends the flow way off because you're forcing to reader to read everything twice and it ruins the verse, also you tried to fit a hell of a lot of wordplay into 8 lines, maybe you should toy with 16s and 32s where you can break all the wordplay up so it's not so intense, don't get me wrong it was a dope verse though. Krhyme it was funny, creative, a bit rusty too and fell off slightly towards to the end. This is such a tough call 'cuz both verse were extremely different, but have to go with my gut instinct. Good battle, mid-high.... Voted: ItsNaturill / Krhyme Killz
Posted on: 2011-12-21 16:15:29

Verity i know u have a dick.. But must u constantly flunt it?? Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-22 11:23:35

High to low.. One was a lot more solid then the other and had left the bigger impact then the other did in this.. Set ups and wording wasn't as on point as the others here.. FVC vote. Voted: ItsNaturill / Krhyme Killz
Posted on: 2011-12-22 20:58:25