TBH i've seen better from both, this was All Round a Meh battle... V, seems liek you went with more hype liines than an actual attakc towards your opponent, AYW, flow was nice, bars were structured well, think some more time on the execution of your punches could make you into a serious threat (with in time)... Fair is in for the drop that was more direct towards there opponent... BW! Posted on: 2011-12-19 12:38:10

WAZE- This WEAK GUY VENOM, Not Een Stonger Den MY LEVI DENIM, Still Wuldn't With Have "Buzz", With A "BEE-HIVE" IN HI- iight this opener kinda weak IMO but sumwhat decent....To Da BEACH I'D SEND HIM, So He Can GRADUATE HIS FENCE, Make Him "De-Fin", Himself Like "AMPUTATED FISH"---ok started off as a filler but turned into a dencent punch..next time start off stronger..../I Got ELABORATED FISTS, U HAVE TO HATE A DIS, Can't Even "Face A Man", U An"E-MASK-ULATED MISS"---iight again started a lil filler ended good, the begiin took away from thesting a bit....My WRATH WILL "RAPE YA GISTS"..."FUCK YOUR POINTS", U Just TAKE-IN JIZZ, Yeah, CUM FROM BOYS....sounds like you played this a lil much here with jizz and cum same meaning so no real big land here jus a scratch of a punch.... Nigga MAKE THIS WISH, To Be DONE WITH NOISE, U And Rap Don't Go Good Like Taste BUDS AND SOY/----decent ill give you this one maybe the better bar of the drop----It's GREAT UR ANNOYED, I'm CONTENT, But Ur "Happiness UN-FIT", U Still "WEIGHTIN' FOR JOY"//.....the closer was iight but i feel like more could of gotten done with this...but overrall id rate a solid 7 here....punches need to be executed better....V3 turn Posted on: 2011-12-19 19:50:28

mad hype "talk loud" wen u BOAST'in NOTHI'N/"heat beef on grills" like ROAST OR SOMTH'in----hmm iight this decent but seen way better outta you smh....scorch em" with "LEAD burnt BREAD" as TOASTER OVENS/WORD to BIRDS i "break beaks" in da mornning wen singing n DEY HUMMING---ok this line hit pretty good to me but still kinda basic from you....COD "GAMES" wen AIM umma PLAY GUNN'in/wuts GROWN FOLK thats KNOWN TOKES compare to "Smoke'in" DA' YUNGIN?----decent yet again but feel like you could of done more with this but still decent.....Fatality on em beforehand umma have HOMIE BE DAZE/kid still "young" its ONLY A PHAZE/SKEW U n spit BLEW THROUGH on da mic n u trying SHO ME DA WAZE:WAYZ??!---iight finally a name play (both had them) but this was the better one outta the battle.good land here but kinda predictable after readin the start of this bar......hit me?? I hav "punchlines" lent BAK MARKS/lay "canvases" red lik "Photoshop" n ABSTRACT ART/"PIERCE"FIERCE at chests SHARP strung in lik HARPS gl wit a IN TACT HEART----good closer much better of the opponents....overral l id give you a LOW 8 barely making it to an 8 the closer saved ya......overrall i have seen better from both...but my vote here goes to the better punches...which wasnt by too much and the direct aim.....keep goin up guys.....this my SICK vote Posted on: 2011-12-19 19:58:12

couple lines name-play.. make sure yall read through now.. Gl and not a bad drop Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:25:00

V3numb got it with better all around structure. Fb, Gb no h8 Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:26:36

Fv* Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:27:55

fv gb Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:41:16

gb fv Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:46:36

Lol, dis shit is funny. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:47:42

what is? Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 04:48:46

These votes, no hate, but I don't see how ur verse was unanimously beating mine. It's also wild how fast all deez niggas voted and they all from da same crew lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 05:01:59

want me to break the verse down for you bro?.. like i said if you got wit my crew i show you how the site works.. plus how you can elevate you your flow.. the potential is there its just the whole way you set things up is all.. you had alot of fillers too,yeah i was surprised at all the LAS1 niggas being on my dick too LOL funny as shit smfh at the nigga giving me a 7 tho i shud least have 8-9 no h8, but they love punches and you had some fillers even tho your flow was tight.. i actually aint a fan of LAS1 cause they suck and got a bad rep but its w.e aint complaining but yeah i see where you comming from tho Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 05:05:12

I don't see how u don't have any filler in ur verse bruh. Don't worry bout breakin' anything down. I'm good. Lets just let the voting continue. Everything in my verse was aimed towards u. Maybe the definition of filler varies from person to person....Fuck it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 05:16:53

filler - no punches or revelation to the punch rhymen but yeah dont stress let em drop yo Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-18 05:18:15

nicce Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-20 21:33:04

Quick expo, being as realistic as possible with the ratings for your own sakes and elevation. Yung you weren't bad, potential is there, you actually had some nice concepts could just use with some help on execution and fixing your structure up a little bit, nice verse keep steppin' it up. V nows the time you need to take it up a level, i've seen a few of your battles and they all on the same standard, to elevate on this you need to push yourself, battle some well known people (even if you lose you still did it) you'll get recognized and you'll see yourself improving. That all i got to say. Both fell off slightly towards the end. Good battle Voted: DaYunginWAZE / V3numb
Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:21:05