Ommiipotent:- Start to finish, structure & flow was nice an smooth.... Concepts were well thought out an delivered well, punches were good to ok....Nothing to 'Hard' hitting but Haven't got anything bad to say about your verse, pretty solid... Mid 8: ....... Verity:- Structure was good in your verse, concepts were ok-ish an were delivered well.... nothing 'Hard' hitting in your verse, an some pretty basic bars here an there, that only took up space as they made no impact.... Mid 7 Overall: both have good potential, just keep at it... Fairs in, BW! Posted on: 2011-11-25 06:14:23

Don't take anything I said to heart at all hahaa... all fun.. good luck Verity looking forward to your drop. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-20 00:16:30

Expo: When I say "back In the day" in that Slap it part, i'm referring to Slap a bitch.. don't be a bitchass.. last line.. when someone makes a joke and someone blurts out something to "Kill the joke" ok.. I think that's really all that needed to be cleared up.. Good luck Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-20 00:18:46

Hahaha nice drop famly, i'll get to this when i can, i can't say when that'll be though, good luck DPS!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-20 10:02:10

I had some serious writers block omnii just had to sit and key style it. Expo - jack sparrow pirates of the caribbean always wanted to be captain - kings speech (Colin pharrle) couldn't speak his cripts in public. Think thats it. DPS!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-25 07:52:23

This was a close one. Omnii: I see you are putting more thought into concepts, you just need to start holding a scheme for longer in order to smoothen out your transitions. Your verse was a little stop-starty, a little hard to read from one line to the other. Bursting bubbles was an aight concept, you coulda done a lot more with it though, I felt. The multis themselves began to disintegrate nearer the end, which took the shine off of the verse. Flow-wise, you were consistent from top to bottom, you just need to start working on keep multi schemes for longer, especially in longer battles such as 32s. Verity: You had some good comic concepts, perhaps a few were a little played and put in to hold up a multi scheme. Also, a flow-consistent verse. You need to work on maybe more build-ups and bigger punches, say, have a jab per multi, making sure they all link to each other, so it hints its way up to a slammer. Overall, one here was a little too forced throughout, the other showed greater knowledge in putting concepts together with more subtlety. Fair as always. Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-25 10:49:09

Verity me too I wrote like two 16's before this but Rhe told me it was due before the quarter finals so I had to put something quick in this but it don't matter.. good luck Verity! Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-25 13:00:08

Oh really? He told me we were doing it after the tournament! Unless i read it wrong. Let's blame RhetoriKal for this we can both do better. Hhahaha J/K hit me up with a friend request Omnii Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-11-25 13:05:34

both were hot as hell n gotta keep it fair Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-25 14:50:25

Fv Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-25 17:54:32

Fuck yall. :high: Naw, But Omnii I DONT LIKE YOUR STRUCTURAL APPROACH in this battle, Ive been seein alotta different styles from u lately but this one I dont too much feel for. Niii puns and concept connections but tha that way to brought them together wasnt ma... Cup of tea?? Anywho.. Verity had some niiii shiii, I liked tha constant attack mode u seemed to be in. Other than that.. I see u keep Goon Squad in ur mouth, Nothing new there.. ;-p. Well iiiiight, Thats Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-26 11:41:27

this was a close one... but i have a winner in my eyes Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-26 11:54:44

fucking sick battle soooo fucking long Voted: Capitalist / IV
Posted on: 2011-11-26 19:53:29