btw i should prolly metion what occupy wall street is, a buncha people are sleeping on the streets in NY and chicago to prove a point. but it has been a total media blackout. gooooood luck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-03 09:51:15

EXPO:Close to a win doe/ cloths to a window Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-08 16:47:20

Don: TBH I see alot of potential combined with a great amount of flaws. But they are all fixable the biggest one I see is the filler."your verses unacknowledged like OCCUPY WALL STREET!! I'll HANDLE THE CLIPZ & SAWS, supply aint AMPLE & BITZ OF GAWZ, I will TRAMPLE & BLITZ YA THOUGHT" That is all filler that didn't do much for the verse but multi's and flow. Def. continue to punch every line or so. Other thing I notice is some of your wording from set up to punch seems a bit awkward, just change it up a bit until it's a bit smoother. and that closer wasn't much of punch either, that again coincides with consistancy if the punch doesn't sound like it's going to hit hard, than just throw it out and go back to the drawing board, don't just post because you have it written already. Pur: Flow and multi's were pretty flawless. Def was a smooth read. Will add the punches didn't have an ohhh factor but I can tell this was just a keystyle. Like the "Dv/Vd' concept and the closer had some decent nameplay too em. Overall tho. The votes in. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-08 21:30:09

close one.u want expo ask me. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 00:43:39

both came cool. one has alot of potential. the other came pretty correct with punchez, some played shit. fv iz in. would appreciate a vb fellaz. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 15:58:14

potential in vito. stick around bro. fv. generous tho. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 16:01:10

Don was loaded with filler, nothing really special at all. I see good multies & flow, but needs some fresher concepts and much better wording. Pur smooth read, good flow & multies, also. Decent punchlines, but nothing special. FV is in. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 21:07:40

Pretty much every aspect one one dude this battle.. i see potential in the other but he needs to work on being a bit more consistant and lay off the filler... SUPER FAIR VOTE, sorry if its harsh Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 21:24:11

ight.. dv i thought you were a lil simple. you got potential. 'shun i know you can drop heat, you were a lil light here. 1 Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 22:20:05

Generous rates but one low one high.. Potential from one but didn't get the concept down like the other.. It's in. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-10 23:31:52

yea Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-11 02:39:21

Voted Fair. Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-11 08:52:06

I really thought one had this.. But some key concept plugs prevailed tha victor Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-11 10:18:04

Good battle. Real close. Winner had better multis and punches. FVs in Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-11 13:34:38

Don u got unique ideas, the way u say your concepts is dope. However your multis werent matching up. Perfekshun u had some nice punches and the wording was correct, u defly have the format down. Winner had stronger punches and set ups/flow Voted: -Don Vito- / PurFekShun
Posted on: 2011-10-11 15:46:55