Tool = Referring to KEYS. ///// Liberty bell has huge crack//// Jews Kiss the wall when Praying//// Jew Jutsu (Jui Jutsu) Is a fighting style that specializes in Submissions. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-03-13 15:15:13

Thang*..Taking it "over the line" is hn someone takes something to far. "a fine line" between something..like the saying. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-03-13 17:27:34

aiight...so i took a great look man..at the lines..a great effin look..n this was a fv..so let me skim down to the dynamics: DookS:..idk..frien d..something about ur verse wasnt firing on all cylinders... Only time he ‘FLIP PAPER’ to ‘SPIT BETTER’ is wen he ‘skimmING THROUGH RAP MANUAL’ ima ‘crack’ this fool from ‘top to bottom’ like ‘ringING THE LIBERTY BELL!...idk..i didnt think manual rhymed..with liberty bell... idk..n trust me..ive tried many ways to figure out how this was supposed to flow..but other than that..u know it was decent.. LOQuence:b asically flipped the verse..n im not too much a fan on verse flipping..but since DookS didnt say u couldnt flip the lines..it was nice..nice hits all around tho...so 1 hit this with better rhyming..n basically good punching too..no h8... if u think so..pm me..n ask me why i voted the way i did..n ill explain again Voted: DooX / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-03-13 18:28:25

both need a little work fv is in though peace Voted: DooX / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-03-13 19:16:13

I dunno, MAN -u- ELL, and BELL how I pronounce it, it may be a lil forced tho i agree Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-03-13 22:06:41

Fair is in no h8....1 edged it with better setups...n another had some basic work so no h8 vbf Voted: DooX / LOQ
Posted on: 2011-03-14 07:02:43